I Am the Lord

Generally speaking, the protagonist is not bad, but when he meets a woman, the protagonist's quality gradually drops. For example, the caravan lady is too presumptuous, has no self-consciousness at all, and is completely anti-customer. She asks this and that, and even teases the protagonist. I really don't know what this female character is doing.

Come on, author! Two push up!

The author writes very well 😁

The fantasy zone has always been cruel, and it doesn't attract people at the beginning. If it remains normal later, it will be in vain. Maybe it takes too much time on the way to the territory, which makes people feel a little depressed. Moreover, the plot and settings are complicated, and the character descriptions are also a bit abrupt. For example, the vampire queen's part, although the logic is passable, the character still does not give people enough attraction. Generally speaking, it is a bit mediocre, and sometimes it is inexplicably self-exciting. Although you may be familiar with the background and setting, and it is very enjoyable to write in the process, people who watch it may not necessarily think so. This result is a bit poor. I suggest you restart it. There is no need to insist on the humble opinion that it must be completed. If you have no experience, you should try more. There is no need to waste time.

There are a lot of repeated chapters later, so watch with caution.

The beginning is very good, and I can see that the author has some skills; but the plot is too complicated and it is easy for people to confused with the ink. To put it simply, the writing is blurry and blurry.

I am already a young man and I don't know what to say.

I've read more than one hundred and seventy chapters, and I'm still confused.

I feel like writing female characters is not very good. They are all big-breasted and brainless. If you give them a little sunshine, they will be brilliant.

This is a good book. Yes, the fantasy zone has always been cruel, but this does not mean that there is no difference between online literature and traffic literature. This book is one of the very few online literature in the fantasy zone. It does not matter if the update is slow, as long as it keeps updating.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? If not, can you explain the system?

Why is no one talking?🤐🤐🤐🤐

I can't stand it anymore. Sure enough, I'm not suitable for this kind of writing. An'an