Life in Another World, Starting with Mining

The subject matter is still attractive, but after reading 3 chapters, the plot is not suitable for me. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist and the old man should be beaten on the spot, half to death, otherwise it would not be consistent with the situation of the slave society and Hansen's fiery temper and condescending mentality. There is also the protagonist's behavior. An old man who has seen it once and has some impression can risk his life to save him. It's too fake. Many authors forcefully write illogical plots for the sake of plot arrangement, which will dissuade many people. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.

Author, if your book is not very popular, I will invest in it.

This is the price of ranking high I like the Virgin Mary, come on, author!

What attracts me most about this book is the golden finger setting, but the plot and characterization are too stereotyped. It is recommended that the author read more comments and revise slowly so that the next book will be better.

It would be bad if such a good subject matter was wasted, so the author should take advantage of the number of people and make some changes based on everyone's opinions. At least he can attract some people with free chapters. The good deeds in Chapter 2 are too rigid and do not conform to the three views. The learning conditions in Chapter 3 are too shocking. Don't follow the same path as others. You can change your own book however you want.

The book seems okay, but if you taste it carefully, it feels a bit like vernacular literature, which does not give people a sense of passion, so it can only be regarded as average!

Give me a suggestion! I don't really want to see face-slapping sessions and hate-attracting sessions! What a trap! You can't write well! Your writing is not enough! What is your definition of this book? Farm leisurely or show off? You can identify things and become a pet evolver! What a shame! If you insist on attracting hatred and pretending to be a slap in the face! Then I can only say goodbye!

I just finished reading the second chapter. In order to save an old man, the protagonist, who had nothing, took the initiative to be slashed with a sword with a flame fighting spirit. To be honest, the protagonist died, but I was more interested in watching it. You are a time traveler who does not ignore life, is not selfish, but is selfless and full of great righteousness. What are you making trouble about?

The author should be a student, the author stands up and tells everyone, haha, well written, support the author, come on

It looks good🤭🤭Come on✊✊