Capital of Seven Realms

When I first started reading, I saw the author's words in Chapter 34. I originally thought that the previous modification was because of the mythical beast haha ​​😜 Let me talk about the problem I think first, the protagonist. It feels like there is only flesh and blood, no core. This is a very important point. There are almost no people who can follow a novel who doesn't like the protagonist but can follow it. I feel that the character of Crow is very contradictory, with his chic personality and heavy mission (rescuing his sister) conflicting with each other. And go with the flow. Gao Zhi, but he didn't understand the common sense before entering, wandering around, and directly involved in the secrets of unknown risks? And there is very little description of Crow's inner thoughts, which may make the protagonist feel lifeless and less vitality Read the current tag: Gao Zhi Gentleman cares about relatives... Putting on dnd, what is Crow's camp? I didn't see it I recently watched the apocalypse forecast and the protagonist liked it very much, so I gave all the votes to Fengyue Gege. There is also Baitanlang's Kingdom of Heaven game, the protagonist is so handsome. Of course the story is exciting, otherwise I wouldn't be able to watch it. But can there be more exciting scenes for readers, such as the raising of female leopards, interactions with small dolls, love houses, and ability systems? Balab The main plot is not about the ability system? However, the performance is so dismal that readers feel that it should not be done If this book had been a revised version from the beginning (although I have not read the original version), the effect should be very different, so the author should consider making another wave of recommendations? If there is no recommendation place, you can find similar works, and everyone can py and recommend each other's books. Please tell me about the modifications when pying. The Prodigal Son is also somewhat famous now I was reading Jicha recently and asked about the world of mortals. I saw that every few chapters are recommended for several books (despite the name of poisonous milk). Can you try 🐔🐔? I feel like this book can barely be considered a harem... Right? Finally, all orders are sent, I hope the author will work hard

To be honest, it's not bad in itself, but the plot is too dramatic. In the beginning, it was written that the life and death battle was just because neither one was sure of killing the other, so it didn't happen. But what the hell happened in the back? Suddenly, the fight between life and death turned into lovers. Author, you wrote the plot well, but it didn't affect it. The only thing is that the plot is too raw. It looks like he has some kind of disease (I forgot the name) and it is quite unspeakable that he falls in love with a woman who wants to kill him for no reason. Another way to bring it in is that if the protagonist is not strong enough, he will die at the hands of the two of them. Even if the normal development is not bad, they will kill each other or temporarily cooperate and then disagree with each other. This is why I don't feel comfortable It's inexplicable

I have a question after reading Chapter 23 of Volume 3: Why did Lily's head get taken away by Rose? Those people didn't care. The blood gun would cremate the enemy in the wasteland, but Hua Qianshu and the others didn't care.

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I like good books, please keep up the good work!

As a long-time reader of Liangzi's diving for five years, I need to say a few words to the air. In fact, this book is much better than his previous works. If you don't believe me, go read it. The prodigal son, I feel so relieved to see you throwing yourself into the street like always. Come on.

Ahem, the prodigal should know about Nine Fishes, right? You are also a veteran author of Western fantasy, and I feel that your writing styles are similar. Her new book is set in European history + magic. The writing style of low magic + translation is supposed to look more obscure, but after reading about forty chapters, I felt it was a little more refreshing than Seven Realms. . . To be honest, I skipped a lot of historical names and historical backgrounds involved, but the plot of the novel is still relatively enjoyable to read. Both of the two novels currently rely on dialogue to drive the plot. After thinking about it, the biggest difference is still in the dialogue. If the maximum dialogue depth is 5, you and Jiuyu both have the ability to write 5, but the prodigal son will maintain the depth of character dialogue at around 4 for a long time, and likes to hold it in for a long time to burst out. This method is very unfriendly to readers. High depth means that readers can get less information and will always be in a state of confusion (I don't care about the truth about the changes in the world, you might as well tell me how strong the crow is, simple and straightforward It's a bit more refreshing. Now the information cards of the protagonist trio are almost all hidden. The reason for the poor sense of substitution is that the readers get less information); Jiuyu can also write a depth of 5, but in the new book, she will maintain the character dialogue at a level of 2~3, and occasionally come to a depth of 5 a few times. The benefits are intuitively reflected in the main frame of the historical novel + the low magic setting (which is indeed mixed with many historical names and the intricate European aristocratic circle). I also found it very interesting.

. Well, the last book was okay. At least the deer's daily life was interesting. But I think Liang Zi's writing style is indeed good. I thought he was popular a few years ago, but you can't write in such an obscure way. How can I put it this way? I consider myself an old white man, but to be honest, it's a bit difficult for me to read your novel. . . . Um, leave a comment. Please give me a thumbs up. Just a little contact.

Personal sensory complaints 3.5 After reading this book, I finally got some real sense of my complaints. I will just write about the shortcomings I feel. ① Too obsessed with character templates. Basically all the characters' dialogues are in line with the characters' personalities, but they are too consistent. They always adopt a character's tone. Only a few will change a little when major situations occur, and this change is too little in daily conversations. This is one of the reasons why I think the character dialogue is not grounded enough. ② The Prodigal Son always wants to give multi-layered meanings to dialogues. Except for the real single-cell characters, most of the characters in the books feel a bit like playing riddles when talking to the protagonist. Are you tired? Today's conversation with the doctor was a typical template of "You understand, right?" "Can't say more," "It's time to tell you," "You should be able to guess." It's all this kind of subtext. This kind of dialogue appears between all characters with normal intelligence in the book, everything! The dialogue with the old fox-level character is even more riddle-like. This kind of plot chapter basically relies on guessing. Although you have a lot of guesses, the reader actually doesn't get much information. To summarize: not grounded enough, with too few surprises, they are all really smart people. Come and have some simple characters who can make readers guess what he is going to say, so that readers can have fun.

I just saw the completion of the previous book. Didn't I suddenly come to the fantasy genre today to read a novel by a writer I had forgotten about? The previous novel was well written but not very exciting. Also, the crisis of annihilation made it a bit depressing to read. It's quite tiring to watch. The writing and plot are both good. I feel like there are about a hundred or two hundred chapters that I haven't read yet. Go check it out when you have time.

I started reading online novels in 2003, and now my taste is quite picky. I have read about 40 chapters so far, and to be honest, this book is well written. But it looks tired. 1. Too many protagonists' behaviors are difficult for readers to understand, and are only revealed implicitly later. You can directly describe the thoughts in the protagonist's mind, and then write about the protagonist's actions. Don't let readers feel confused or guess about the protagonist's behavior. For example, the airport conflict at the beginning was like this. Your writing method is relatively advanced in online novels, but you can't control it, and the result is that it makes people feel tired. This method is suitable for carefully crafted novels but not for fast food literature that needs to be updated every day. Of course, if you are experienced, that is the exception. 2. The goal can be ambitious, but the plan cannot be too precise. First, there are too many changes, so what happens cannot be so precise. Also, the writing is too precise, too fake, and it is very tiring to watch. You look tired, that's the point. 3. Don't forcefully describe the character for the sake of character, it's too much. It seems very artificial. Nowadays, there are many common problems in describing the second dimension. Be more realistic and natural, it will be more comfortable to look at. Don't mention any girl control. Doting on your sister is normal. But this performance is within the normal range in reality. If you risk life and death to save your sister, well, express it with actions, intersperse some memories at the appropriate time, explain why the brother and sister can transcend life and death, and the story will be sublimated. This is a very touching and tearful point. But when the word "mei control" is mentioned, I feel cliched and contrived. Maybe I read too many two-dimensional novels some time ago and got sick of it. Just show your character traits, don't emphasize them all the time, with shy and harmless expressions, laughter, etc. Too much and too annoying. 4. Please be realistic and natural when communicating between characters. Don't always confirm your eyes and leave readers confused. Who would think of fast food literature as a literary masterpiece to reason over and over again? I just want to look relaxed and refreshed after work. It's just that it's a no-brainer and is suitable for novices. People who watch a lot like to watch IQ Online, which has richer plot backgrounds and is more attractive. Don't make it too tiring to watch. I skip a lot of things because they feel too consuming.

I have read Yala's Adventure Notes four or five times, but I still haven't finished it despite my efforts. The author's book is a good book, but the protagonist's careful and complicated plan in the later period is inevitably a bit boring to read. Maybe it's because my experience and life experience are not enough. I hope the author will work hard!

I will make a bold guess. The author has not read online novels for a long time. The first three chapters of this book gave me the feeling that it is too backward. Whether it is the characters or the plot, they are no different from the urban soldier novels of six or seven years ago. They are backward and cliché! What about the smile at the corner of the mouth, the inexplicable pretense, and the slutty character who wastes other people's time when he himself is justified? It's really unpleasant

Does anyone know where the author is?

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It's a pity that the author is missing. The two books he wrote before were very interesting to me.

He's obviously a serious fantasy writer, but why can't he get ahead?

I glanced at the character column and saw that except for the protagonist, they were all female characters, and I didn't look at it for a moment.

The story is quite good, but I always feel that the writing is not concise enough and the language is too polished. In many cases, it even feels like the language is too complicated, and the effect of expression is weakened...

Alas, it's been more than a year and it's getting better. 😰

Come and take a look after 22 years. By the way, the epidemic has been going on for a long time.

What a pity, everything this author writes is to my liking.

Send one copy and I will order all the copies as long as the author comes back and continues writing.

Every book by The Prodigal Son is so to my taste. I have read every book several times (including The Lost Island World) So every once in a while, I come to read it with hope. Unfortunately, I only get disappointed again and again. A long time ago, I asked the prodigal son in the QQ group and QQ private chat how the new book was going. Every time he said that he was still preparing it. People in the group only talked about it every day, so I left the group. Now that I come back to read it, there is no new book in sight. Praise to the Dark Moon

Book club skirt: Jingcheng Prodigal Kindergarten, 263, 084, 458, everyone is welcome to settle in

It's been two years since I said the person preparing the new book has disappeared

I really love the author's style. When will I come back to write a book?

If I have a new book or I will continue to write it, I will send you a letter.

I recommend the animations "Sky of Escaconi" (especially the theatrical version), "Royal Ecclesiarchy Knights OVA", and "Vampire Hunter D", they are wonderful!