Shadow Apostle

I persisted until the princess faked her death, and then the COS Joan of Arc chapter popped up. I couldn't hold it any longer Author, your writing style and description are very good, but the details of the description are a bit... How should I put it, bloated Including what you said, the tension in the description when the eavesdropping toad god and the cultists were discovered is not enough, in my opinion the problem The core is bloated, and the descriptions are too embellished, which leads to the modified core being diluted. For example, when the protagonist was discovered, the human-faced rats did not swarm the thing immediately. Instead, they first described the ugliness of the thing, and then surrounded it in groups, and then the cultists and the giant toad chattered, and then they were about to fight in a group, and then released their tentacles... Do you feel the problem? From the efficiency of the monster's movements to the words and actions of the cultists and toads, everything is half-hearted and tepid. How can this make people nervous? Which one is more tense between (suspecting someone→discovering someone→talking to you that I found you and want to kill you→starting to kill you) and (suspecting someone→catching you and starting to torture you to death→talking while killing you)? Then the plot of the princess pretending to be resurrected made me unbearable. It was even more painful. Do you know how long the text of the princess talking and explaining to the protagonist is? And it is so detailed in every aspect. Why do you doubt the innocence of the Marquis and explain everything, etc. Does the princess still remember what she wants to do? She wants to go up and stop the instigation of the main war faction! The situation above has reached a critical juncture. She still needs to spend a few minutes to explain patiently below? How can readers feel the ups and downs of the plot in this situation? Your characters are so calm and tepid, how can readers feel anything?

I saw a lot of female protagonists in the Western fantasy genre, but I didn't read much of the writing, so I immediately fell in love with it d(ŐдŐ๑)

So smart? Is this the legendary smart guy?

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The writing is very nice, but the currency system is rubbish. 0.5 Silver coins (about 25 Rmb/cup) for 2 cocktails is reasonable. But if you solve a long-term and strange serial murder case, you will get a 20 silver reward (2000 Rmb) and hand over the loot. Is it reasonable? Modern society provides the police with valid clues for vicious cases starting at 100,000 yuan. It only costs 2000 Rmb for you to risk your life to solve the mystery. It's funny, at least 2000 silver coins (200,000 Rmb) is reasonable.

What kind of professional title did I take for "Iron Army"?

It's a pity that it's over... I stopped reading when I saw the path of awakening chosen by the protagonist. A reminder to those who follow. The protagonist thinks he has chosen the middle path, which is the so-called gray... This non-existent concept. The so-called gray is just an excuse some people make for themselves. There is no gray in this world. Only right and wrong. Only black and white. Only right and wrong. Between the individual and group positions. Right and wrong and black and white. Right and wrong may be interchangeable. But there can never be gray. So I despise such illogical reasons as gray.

No matter what kind of war, the party that massacres civilians is the guilty party

The writing is good but there are no memorable points. It has elements such as Cthulhu Steam, Detective Detective, and mystery. But the author, you have to remember that having everything means nothing, because it is not outstanding.

This is the best book I have read recently. The books with the latest starting point are really better than the previous one (except this one). Is it possible to see a book with a good plot, logical online and harem elements but not mainly emotional drama? 😍😍😍

It's watchable, but it's just watchable. The author is too immature. It can be seen that he has done a lot of homework. The setting and plot outline are very good, but unfortunately the writing is not very good, especially the fighting. It is a headache to watch and has a strong sense of fragmentation. It often takes several readings to understand what is going on. Simply put, there is no sense of picture. In addition, the advancement of the plot is also very stiff, that is, what those who blame it say is dog licking, but it is not actually licking. The protagonist rescuing people is in line with the logic of the character's behavior, but there is no foreshadowing, so it makes people feel strange. In fact, this is a female character. If the police officer is a male and the protagonist goes to rescue, no one will be labeled as a dog licking story.

Monica Veronica

I came across the novel by chance. The author ID looked familiar. I clicked on the homepage and saw, "Good guy, "Adventure Notes of Yala"". I exploded on the spot. "Yara" is my favorite novel, but I was ashamed that I read a pirated version. I like this author's novels very much. I will definitely subscribe to this new book and support it. It is a supplementary vote. I only hope that the author can write a better story than Yala. Come on!

It's time to catch up. Friends who like this book, whether you want to read it or want to read it, if conditions permit, please click to the latest chapter every day, and be sure to click on the unfinished chapter. Only in this way can I get follow-up reading, which is very important to me. Thank you.

Horst

Chong

I can't stand it anymore when I see being kidnapped by morality. What other jokes about adding money to lay people 🤔

Jessica

It's a good novel, and the author has a brain, because everything in the novel is reflected in the details, and it's not too abrupt. Of course, there are some, such as Monica, where the foreshadowing is not enough, which makes people feel very sudden, and also makes people feel that the protagonist is the Virgin, and the plot is fast. I hope the author can keep it in mind. Either it's a harem novel, which means upgrading to become stronger and collecting a harem, just like Ash collects Pokémon. I hope the author will not follow these old paths

The talent and poetry of Sunless Moon and Yara's Adventure Notes will not just fade away. . .

By the way, the book here has just started, and the world view is still being laid. Both Yara and Wuguang start with the feeling of playing a dangerous dungeon. The sense of anticipation and the dungeon construction are very good. The various world level settings in the back also directly tell you what the main plot is, and I can't stop reading (Seven Realms has been stopped by the time I saw it, so I didn't read it). The previous "Cultivation of the World" felt weird. At the beginning, I was confused and felt like I had not watched anything. At the end, I was told that I had to go outside to cultivate the world... I felt that something was wrong. This main line did not arouse any interest at all, which made me unable to watch it at all. I hope the world setting of this book can arouse my interest. It seems pretty good so far. I hope to see a long-term main line, which will make me look forward to it.

At present, it seems that the whole article is about mystery. You can change it to mysterious apostle, or words related to mystery. I feel that shadow is not as good as shadow.

What a coincidence🤭

Looking at it this way, the tentacles of the protagonist really look like a young black goat.

Does the author have any other books on other websites? I really like Yala Adventure Notes and Sunless Moon.

I didn't expect that one day I would be number one

Hehe, it's finally my turn