Making the Most of a Sandbox World

I wanted to see how to use the sandbox to creatively cultivate spells, how to use one's own spells in battle, and how to use the sandbox to survive and become a big spender. But I didn't see any of that, and what seemed to me to be a bunch of useless paragraphs and plots. Aren't all-powerful spells compelling enough? Aren't secondary professions engaging enough? Why add a whole bunch of petty schemes, machinations, and sarcastic remarks?

Also, the older sister is a real problem; she might fall apart later on. And having an older sister means having a downside. Let her die! I've read several novels where the female characters fell apart because of this! Also, that system has too many advantages; it feels like it's turning into an invincible novel. Let's torture the protagonist a bit and have him find a remote town to research magic. One last thing: "Women can ruin a book!!!"

1. How to get revenge on Chauvin? A: Kidnapping Charlotte 2. How to advance the plot? A: Kidnapping Charlotte 3. How to forcefully make enemies? A: Kidnapping Charlotte 4. So, what is your purpose in kidnapping Charlotte? The villains: I don't know either, just tie them up. 5. So, why did you tie her up? The villains: We don't know.

I suggest the author try playing the mage class in "Night of the Full Moon" and "Pixel Dungeon," as there are many settings related to spells and equipment. 😃 Disintegration Rays, the Codex of Wonders, the Book of Sorcerers, the Codex of Moonlight, Arcane Missiles, etc.

I was quite interested in the sandbox game system, but when I saw that it had over 800,000 words and less than 10,000 recommendation votes, I hesitated for a while before finally clicking on the novel, since it was a genre I liked. Then I regretted it; I should have trusted the results. Hundreds of thousands of words and less than 10,000 recommendation votes! It's clearly not very well written…

After reading a few dozen chapters, I lost interest in continuing. Just to mention, the beginnings of the first few chapters were pretty good. But the later chapters were completely ruined. As a seasoned bookworm, I've also tried my hand at writing novels (the kind I myself couldn't stand).

The source of this book's poison 1. Charlotte: An ordinary woman who chatters incessantly regardless of the situation. Given the numerous examples of villains who oppose the protagonist, she uses only one tactic – kidnapping Sherlock! She kidnaps him but doesn't kill him; she just leaves him there, waiting for the protagonist to rescue him. 2. Silly smile.

Where is the sandbox element? They call it a sandbox story after only a few brief mentions in the first few chapters. I don't know if they'll actually include it later, but it doesn't matter anyway, I can't stand it anymore. This is just a way of telling new readers that it's a book that's all hype and no substance.

Everywhere you look, there's scheming and intrigue. Those who want to see the sandbox can leave now. The main character is like an idiot.

I came for the sandbox aspect, not for the boring school-themed scheming and backstabbing.