I'm Stacking Heartsteel Like Crazy in the Knights' Order

You have so many passionate labels. The Steel of the Heart is this and that, but the first few chapters ended up like this, which I personally felt was a bit inappropriate. It gives people the feeling that something is wrong. In this day and age, it won't work for you to trick people in and then kill them. And to be honest, this kind of crazy suppression and then adding buffs to the protagonist feels a bit outdated. But there may be many people who like it, so you come up with a bunch of passionate tags. This may cause people who like to read this kind of book not to read this book, and then people who don't like to read this book will be attracted and then run away. Anyway, they think your writing is very strange.

You're lying. You're not stacking steel at all. You're just playing tricks.

I just want to ask, has the protagonist been brainwashed by someone from another world? I shout about bullshit chivalry every day, thinking that my power comes from this. But really? Shouldn't the protagonist rely on Brother Tongzi to awaken his power? Without Brother Tongzi, can the protagonist with this garbage physique awaken his great power? Feng Bu can't help but be moved by someone from another world every day. No... Buddy, as long as Brother Tongzi is here, you can still awaken whether you participate in the training camp or not! If it were Brother Mi Youtongzi, even if you participated in the training camp, you would be just a loser who was bullied every day.

The villain's goal: to seize power and establish authority and become the leader The villain's actions: send the opposition people to die and suppress the effective force of the opposition. To highlight one thing, we are not afraid of the opposition rising, but we are afraid that you will not resist. Highlight a man who can become the leader, even if half of the knights die. Even the opposition camp accounts for more than half of the strength of this war frontline camp. This logic really makes me laugh to death.

The title of the book is very good, but it's a pity that the author's writing skills and brain are not good.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, not giving stacks of steel, golden fingers are almost non-existent, I want both, but I want to write a medieval Warhammer mixed dnd style western fantasy, but I am afraid that no one will watch it and make a gimmick of heart steel. The plot and the setting are separated. Some people say that being a knight is actually just a fool. However, in the setting, becoming a knight requires not only physical fitness but also noble moral character and a strong will. Can a villain with noble moral character and a strong will become a knight like the one you wrote? If it is really written according to this setting, neither side can be said to be "evil" but a battle of lines. Then the villain can still shine. If you don't write it like this, just write that talent and strength determine whether you become a knight or not. Why, is it still an adaptive knight? The knights on the protagonist's side are majestic and upright, but the knights opposite the protagonist are despicable? It is reasonable for you to set up a knighthood and have wizards and mages accompanying the group. It is entirely because the plot requires a villain, but the problem is that the plot is not exciting at all and has many bugs. (Including the big lord's daughter who came to the front line and didn't have any personal bodyguards. Aren't you afraid of being robbed by the enemy on the way? As soon as the opponent hits you and is affected by AOE, you will jump straight to the corpse) Also, you big lord is really hungry. The protagonist is a wanderer who can enter the knight training camp. You can imagine what the level of the knight training camp is. The big lord also picks up unnecessary things from the knight training camp and recruits them from there, right? The equipment in LOL is still out of stock. Jia Xiu can come up with something that increases movement speed. I even recognize the force of nature. I read the beginning, but I haven't read the follow-up yet, but I have lost the desire to read it. If you feel that it hurts and the impact is not big, you can delete the post. If your level is high and I am blind, if there is a reversal in the follow-up, you can frame it for me to let other readers scold me. That's it.

The clichés of old-fashioned Western fantasy knight stories are basically those from ten years ago. The descriptions are very passionate, but the plot content is more focused on the protagonist. It is difficult to understand what the author is thinking. Oh, by the way, the most important thing is that the author gave the protagonist an awesome plug-in, Heart of Steel. But such an awesome plug-in makes the protagonist a mess💩. I seriously doubt the author's skills in playing League of Legends. Maybe the author has never won League of Legends and Heartsteel. Can't play

The details, the data are indeed too poor. There are many inconsistencies in the data. It is also difficult to understand the 10-year-old awakening system. A 13-year-old cannot lift twenty kilograms of things. Is twenty kilograms difficult? It is just picking up. There are also 20 kilograms of steel boots. Do they really need to be so heavy? Will it not greatly affect the activities?

Dude, you are purely screening readers. The name is Knights + Meng Stack + Heart of Steel. The full title is I stack the steel of the heart fiercely in the Knights. The readers who come in are those who read light novels, cool novels, and have played LoL. Hammer fans, you didn't mention it at all. When I came in, I saw it was Warhammer. You are trying to persuade readers who only play lol. Hai Wen also dissuades readers who want to read light novels.

The author uses a fantasy writing method that most readers hate (crazy progress in the early stage, inexplicable villains and natural disasters, the protagonist always comes back from adversity, teammates never believe and react, brainless conflicts create a cheap feeling) is a complete failure. This path dependence will make your writing easier, but it will also make the book you write less and less read.