I'm Stacking Heartsteel Like Crazy in the Knights' Order

You've attached so many "passionate" tags to yourself. And "heart of steel" and all that... The way the first few chapters turned out is a bit inappropriate, in my opinion. It gives people the feeling that the product does not match the description. In this day and age, your method of luring people in and then killing them won't work anymore.

They're lying; they weren't actually stacking steel at all, they were just playing a power game.

I just want to ask, has the protagonist been brainwashed by people from another world? They keep spouting this bullshit chivalry, thinking their great power comes from it. But is that really true? Shouldn't the protagonist's awakening of great power rely on Brother Tongzi? Without the protagonist's son, how could he awaken such great power with his trashy physique?

Villain's goal: To seize power, establish authority, and become the leader. The villains' actions: sending opposition members to their deaths to suppress the opposition's vital forces. The message is clear: we're not afraid of an uprising by the opposition, we're afraid of you not resisting. It highlights the vital force that would sacrifice half the knights if only one could become the leader.

The title is good, but unfortunately the author's writing skills and intelligence are lacking.

It's a case of false advertising; it doesn't provide any special abilities or cheat codes, and it tries to have it all. It wants to write a Warhammer Fantasy/D&D-style Western fantasy story but is afraid no one will read it, so it uses the Heartsteel gimmick. The plot and setting are disconnected. Some people call him a knight but he is actually a scheming villain.

This is a clichéd Western fantasy knight novel, basically using the same formulas from ten years ago. The descriptions are exciting, but the plot overshadows the protagonist's, making it hard to understand the author's thinking. Oh, and most importantly, the author gave the protagonist an incredibly powerful cheat code: Heart of Steel.

The details and data are indeed very poor. Many data points are contradictory, and it's difficult to understand how a 10-year-old can awaken their system, while a 13-year-old can't lift 20 kilograms. Is 20 kilograms really that difficult? It's just a matter of lifting it. And what about the 20-kilogram steel boots? Are they really necessary? Won't they significantly hinder the activity?

Dude, you're just filtering readers. My name is Knights Order + Fierce Stacking + Heart of Steel. The full name is "I'm Fiercely Stacking Heart of Steel in Knights Order". The readers who come here are those who read light novels, action-packed stories, and those who have played League of Legends. You don't mention Hammer fans at all. I came in and saw it was Warhammer.

The author's use of fantasy writing techniques that most readers hate (crazy slow pacing in the early stages, inexplicable villains and natural disasters, the protagonist always turning the tide in adversity, teammates who never believe in or even have a negative impact, and mindless conflicts to create cheap thrills) is a complete failure. This kind of path dependence may make writing easier, but it will also make your books less and less read.