The Path to Immortality Begins with Hard Work and Reward

I have a good level, but I wish I could break the realm into 800 pieces and write it 🙂 I doubt whether I can build a foundation within a year

Planting corn🌽 is the same novel, super overwhelming

From the writing style and characterization, it is obvious that the author is a veteran. Perhaps because he was criticized by readers for overpowering the protagonist, the author's setting at the beginning was that the protagonist is a super super useless person, hundreds of times more useless than the traditional protagonists with mixed spiritual roots and waste spiritual roots. He has been stuck in Qi training for more than ten years, and without specific elixirs, he will be bottlenecked forever. The author's idea is correct. Rather than suppressing the protagonist and boring the readers, it is better to create a setting from the beginning where the protagonist is a super useless person even if he has a golden finger. In this way, no matter what adventures the protagonist has in the future, his growth rate will be more than ten times slower than that of his peers, and his combat power and other things will all depend on the talisman. The protagonist's character belongs to Gouda-ryu. Although I haven't seen the shining point of his character so far, to be honest, the protagonist's performance is quite suitable for the intrigues and intrigues of the dark world of immortality. The plot is a bit flawed. I can't say it's bad, but it's not attractive enough for an old reader like me. This is not the author's fault. It's just that I've seen too much. I've seen plots from almost every genre, so I can't stand plots that aren't novel or interesting enough.

The kaya is too small. The kaku with added experience can't even pass the first to second levels of Qi training.

There are too many requirements to achieve a breakthrough. Breakthrough cannot be achieved only by relying on a breakthrough. Upgrading spiritual roots also requires the environment. I don't know if Chapter 500 can build a foundation.

Not ugly, but boring😴

There is a very big loophole When you have practiced Qi for one level, you can draw the upper-grade talisman The upper-grade talisman must be more powerful because it has more energy, but you have only practiced Qi for the first level, and you don't have that much energy at all You are only very skilled at drawing talismans, and you can't draw them if you don't have enough energy

Ha!

Authors frequently try different styles and cut them endlessly, which is not good for your writing career. It is better to try to delve into one path first, and then talk about others. For example, the book you wrote on The Witcher has a complete and novel power system, a grand and solid world view, and the plot content is crisp and clear... It is very good. But there are still areas worthy of further exploration. First, the map has not been completely laid out. In the grand world view, the witch is only used as the big boss, and the ending seems hasty. The second is that the supporting characters (teammates) are dispensable. On the one hand, this is because the protagonist's strength is improved too quickly for the sake of fun, causing the teammates to become "sluggers." Their thoughts and behaviors cannot affect the plot, and naturally become dispensable; on the other hand, this is because the design of the dungeon is for the purpose of pure fun, resulting in the protagonist being able to clear the level with just one person. Teammates are not very involved and have no role to play. My thoughts, I won't say too much, but I just feel it's a pity. I really stayed up late watching The Witcher, and I couldn't sleep. I missed that feeling so much. 😁

The pressure is too strong, I can't stand it anymore