The Path to Immortality Begins with Hard Work and Reward

It's skillful, but it feels like you're trying to break your artistic vision down into eight hundred pieces 🙂 I have serious doubts about whether I can establish a foundation within a year.

A novel about planting corn 🌽, incredibly intense and suspenseful.

From the writing style and character development, it's clear the author is a veteran. Perhaps having learned from past mistakes of being criticized for overpowering the protagonist, the author initially set the protagonist as an extremely useless character, hundreds of times more useless than traditional protagonists with mixed or useless spiritual roots.

The leveling screen is too small; I can't even pass the first or second level of Qi Refining with the experience-boosting skill.

There are too many requirements for using cheats. Breakthroughs can't be achieved solely through cheating, and upgrading spiritual roots requires specific environmental conditions. I don't even know if I can reach Foundation Establishment by chapter 500.

It's not bad, but it's boring. 😴

There is a very big vulnerability Once you reach the first level of Qi Refining, you can draw high-grade talismans. The power of a high-grade talisman is definitely due to its high energy content, but you're only at the first level of Qi Refining, you simply don't have that much energy. You're just highly skilled at drawing talismans; you couldn't draw them without enough energy.

Ha!

The author's frequent attempts at different styles and endless diversification are not good for your writing career. It is better to first master one path before considering others. For example, your book, *The Witcher*, has a complete and innovative power system, a grand and solid world view, and a fast-paced and satisfying plot... It's quite good.

The suppression of combat power is too drastic; I can't stand it.