Master Qiao An

I'm sorry that I can't stand it anymore. It's probably because of my personal problems. It's hard for me to accept that I'm preparing to hunt mythical creatures when I only have a level 1 spell base. The first is the problem of poor combat power. There is no way that such an ordinary master can fight against the mythical level 1. In fact, it is really a fight. Then the gold finger was turned on until it flew up. It is now difficult for me to accept this setting. Then I saw that the right eye was dug out in exchange for the fountain of wisdom, and I couldn't stand it anymore. I have a typical Eastern mindset, and the protagonist is still the same. He is more focused on self-improvement, using his body in exchange for blessings from foreign objects, and I really can't accept adventures like this. After reading this book, I personally think it would be better if the issue of combat power could be reflected in the progression of the plot. This is a level 2 mythical ogre jumping around in front of a level 7 mythology. I can't understand it. Then an ordinary level 1 mage fought against a level 1 mythical fairy without suffering any major damage. Can't understand. Finally, this Western fantasy is really true. The core idea is the Western kind, which emphasizes talent, destiny, adventure, and adventure without reason. No matter how hard you try, it's just embellishment. With my Eastern mindset, it's really unacceptable for me to exchange water with my eyes. I feel sorry for myself that I can't read this pretty good dnd.

I have read more than 90% of this book, and it is about to reach its finale. This is a book that people both hate and love, and there is a fundamental reason why it has not become popular. First of all, the author's writing style is good and the writing is very rigorous. This is the basic reason why I have the patience to read this. However, the shortcomings of this book are also very prominent. The text repeatedly introduces various spells in detail, which makes people easily feel tired after reading it for a long time. In addition, if the large-scale description of the War of Independence is basically skipped, it will not affect the coherent reading. I would say that this book actually has more than 4 million words, but it was written in more than 6 million words. . . Secondly, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that there is no climax. There is no climax in the whole book that can make people excited and want to stop reading it. Although the writing is good, few people can read a novel without conflict and opposition to the end.

Just a brief comment, I almost watched it carefully until it was released, and then I jumped to see the death of the protagonist's grandfather. There are two reasons why I was persuaded to quit, which can actually be counted as one. The first point The autistic character of the protagonist is acceptable. The author also said that this is a book for readers who like to be alone. I also liked this sentence very much when I saw it. But this is a big problem. I may be extreme personally. I don't comment much on how the protagonist communicates with others. However, judging from the results of just over a hundred chapters, the protagonist knows more than ten people (excluding his deceased grandfather) who can be called friends or teachers. There are also passers-by who have given help to the protagonist and have been described by the author in a certain way. It may be that I am too extreme, but in my opinion this is not social fear, this is social bully. No matter how the author portrays the protagonist as a sociopath in various ways, I personally finished reading the first 200 chapters (I skipped about 60 chapters of adventure in the middle) and came to the conclusion that the protagonist is not as "not participating in social activities and concentrating on studying magic" as the author wrote. Of course I understand the difficulty of the indigenous protagonist. He definitely needs to communicate with people in the early stage. Maybe the book will gradually get closer to the goal in the later stages, but judging from the two hundred chapters, it is already quite long. I can only feel that this book is not as personal as I imagined. Second point The central idea conveyed to me by the author of this book is loneliness. Combined with the profession of mage, the main line should be to study at home, then learn to develop, then start to make money, then build a mage tower when you have money, and finally continue to study at home. The main focus is on the protagonist to learn and grow at home, such a process. However, I can also understand that it is not easy for the indigenous protagonist to grow up, and taking risks and cheating is a must. But the indigenous protagonist has to study harder, is he really not going to study? All about taking risks? The protagonist is a mage. I don't have a deep understanding of mages in the DND system, but mages have to learn. Just before it was released, there were more than 130 chapters, and the protagonist had not yet entered school to study. The crazy adventure was really crazy. I understand that the author needs to advance the plot, and I also understand that the author needs to cheat, but what you wrote is really too much. I don't understand, but I'm shocked. After I entered school, the author's description really gave me the feeling that I would study for two or three days, then go out to meet friends, and then go on adventures with my friends. Is this a social fear mage? Just be a bard. I skipped it when the main character actually left the house later on. He was still outside until the death of his grandfather in Chapter 200. Finally (did he get involved in another war in the middle?) He returned to school and the teacher was gone, so he started looking for the murderer again (adventure). At this point I was persuaded to back out. This is also the first time for me to write a book review in this situation. The main author said in the preface, "This book is written for people who like to enjoy loneliness." It stimulated me. I was full of expectations, but it seemed like I was reading another novel. I'm sorry. If there is anyone who wants to read a novel with the same feeling as me, I hope my comments can help you. I will not comment on the author or other aspects of this article. I am very dissatisfied with the central idea and the actual article. If anyone has read the following article, and the author will not go off topic later, you can comment with me. I don't want to miss a truly wonderful novel. Thank you

When I was a student, I was addicted to the Stone Age. I stayed up all night while automatically upgrading and reading online articles. It was at that time that I caught up on the update of Peach Blossoms. After that, I came into contact with Taoda's later works through various channels, and my personal favorite among them is Peerless Sword Master. Unparalleled sword masters, immortal cultivators and mechas, the Internet and reality, the Earth Federation and colonial star warlords... Although the background is too grand and difficult to control, the struggle between planet-level forces and internal power struggles sometimes make it feel like playing house, but it is still a rare masterpiece! ! Especially the female characters in it are vivid and full of personality. I even wanted to privately write a fan novel about Yin Jian, Milan and Mi Xun, and I must be my teacher in a threesome. Ahem, of course, just thinking about it. As for the book Master Qiao An, it is the opposite of the Peerless Sword Master. There are fewer and fewer female characters. It is a pity that the male characters are more vivid. Guillaume Tell, Qiao An's grandfather, was active in the New World as a young man, fighting evil, and had great glory. In his middle and old age, the white-haired man sent the black-haired man. His only relative, his grandson Qiao An, was also affected by the strange bloodline, and his personality became withdrawn and autistic. He gave up his martial arts for more than ten years and was still able to defeat and injure the insect herdsman. However, before he died, he couldn't even commit suicide. He could only beg the doctor and his grandson could prepare a poison for him... Martin Smith's experience in studying was actually the experience of Qiao An, who had no aberration bloodline and no Tears of God. I personally hope to see more interactions between people and organizations, and give more characters to the characters to make them fuller and more vivid. On the contrary, make some subtractions for adventure wars and academic research. Especially for academic research, it looked too hard to remember. I could only glance at it a few times. I knew Qiao An was getting stronger and his knowledge had increased, so I skipped it.

The author is very careful in writing. He has checked a lot of information and has notes. I also like the protagonist's sociophobic autistic character. It is very unique and helps to flesh out the image. I think it is not necessary for other readers who always want to change. Who said that a sociophobic autistic boy cannot be the protagonist 🤭

After searching for so long, I finally found another book I like. Both the plot and the writing are very consistent with my heart. The author has built a rich magical world. I support it!

It seems that Comrade Edward's gender is a mystery! There are some signs in his words and deeds.

I personally read hundreds of chapters and here are my thoughts after reading them.

At the Urban Bureau,

Like it looks good O(∩_∩)O

This book can be called a qualified DND article, but it cannot be called an excellent online article. 1. Lack of highlights As a mage, the essence lies in the release of spells. But I felt like the mage combat in this book completely lacked creativity. For example, the phantom sound technique can be used very coolly in stealth operations. It can simulate the enemy commander's orders, farts, cat meows, etc. Grease can be set on fire to increase damage. When the Razor Boar slides past Grease, it can be set on fire. Stone Shaping can fix the enemy's feet with stones when they pass through the swamp, and then shoot them. When the cavalry charged, a low stone wall blocked the front, causing the horses to stumble and blocking the charge. 2. Lack of cool points. People who like DND will feel so awesome and cool when they see Tears of God. But ordinary readers don't have such a big reaction. The caster fight here is like you hit me, I hit you, and then they get close to melee, poke their eyes, and bite their necks. Is this what a mage should do? The mage should be cold and cold, using his wisdom to trap his enemies. For example, to fight the Wild Boar Prince, you can find a big stone, cast the shrinking spell, and when you throw it into the wild boar's mouth, cast a magnification spell, and then cancel the shrinking spell. The big rocks can also be replaced with bombs, caltrops, or some destructive spells can be added to them. This way you can show off after you finish the fight. You, who is covered in blood after beating the mage, do you think you are Naruto? All the strength has been lost 3. Lack of exciting battles. Following the above point. For example, in the battle between Dragon and Snake, both parties are spellcasters, so it can be a very exciting battle. For example, the dragon and snake girl cast a wild laughter spell, and then the mage blocked it with a spider on his clothes (changed the setting, and the wild laughter spell was a ray), but pretended to be laughing wildly, and used a backhand to break the dragon snake girl's wings, causing her to fall from the air. The dragon and snake girl canceled the magic, canceled the mage's transformation, and made him fall. Seeing that he was about to fall to death, the mage transformed into a tree man and drank the magic potion. Instead, he crushed the dragon and snake girl to death. This kind of reversal and battle is more of a battle of wits and courage, and can show the wisdom of the mage. I feel that the current mage's understanding of spells cannot match the level of 24 points of intelligence. Is what he has increased really been intelligence? I suggest the author read "Heart of Canaan". The battle between mages in it is really exciting, especially when the protagonist fights the black flame mage and understands what a battle between mages is.

This book is based on the concept of "testing poison", non-toxic, and not old and miserable, but it does not belong to the Long Aotian type or the hot-blooded type. It belongs to the slow-burning type that you can read with your head. It is recommended to read a few chapters before abandoning it if you don't like it. The protagonist's character is well described. Many female friends feel that they don't know which one is the main palace, but the descriptions are very good. Let's treat them as wings and become angels. 😁

A grand and rigorous worldview is the basis for a novel to surpass ordinary online novels. After a while, there will always be people who get tired of online novels that combine unreasonable settings and excessive pursuit of the pleasure of upgrading, and turn to great works with a grand and rigorous world view. This novel is the best quality work I have seen among dnd novels. The Qidian website should pay more attention to such rare works. I advise the author to continue to be cautious with the content in the book. Although it is already the most successful DND novel I have ever read, I hope that this book can continue to improve the world of Vasre, so that the author can create new stories based on this book in the future. Although I have not read The Court of the Far East, this does not prevent me from appreciating the grand world of Vasilei composed of two very long novels.

A very good work, with the same rigorous style as the Far East. Personally, I feel that the plot is the core of a novel. In the early years, Taoda's works had more twists and turns in their plots. Now, although the style has changed to adapt to the market, can the plot be more prominent on a rigorous basis? In addition, I would like to ask in what aspects does Peach Blossom University use to construct a more rigorous world? I also want to draw a fanart atmosphere map for this book in the future. Do you have any suggestions?😃

Post your thoughts after reading Chapter 121. First of all, this book is a rare traditional master fantasy book that complies with DND rules; Secondly, although it is a book with strict settings, it does not get into boring rule descriptions. The story is written with flesh and blood, the text is relatively sophisticated, the emotions are real and not artificial, the emotional details are well received, and there are no redundant explanations. Finally, let me talk about the current shortcomings or suggestions. It is best to reduce the setting things or the length. Reading is really focused on the story and emotional expression. It is taboo to write these things in long paragraphs. This kind of writing is boring. The best way to write is to slowly and gradually integrate into the story, rather than show it out. If the setting could be more streamlined, it would be a rare masterpiece.

Four chapters of recommendation votes. I hope this book doesn't have so many financial lessons.

Thanks to Far East Book for your long-term companionship. I believe the author's new work will be more exciting and interesting.

A group of rich people who are not short of money go hunting wild boars for a few thousand gold coins and medals, risking a 10% to 20% mortality rate? Then he casually gave the gold coins to the protagonist... What are the wealthy people trying to do?

It's obviously a fusion of American colonial history and dnd. It's a good idea, but it's too historical and doesn't feel like dnd. In DND, senior professionals are the protagonists of the world. What are capitalists? How many magic circles do you know? Colonization is no problem, but what about the senior professionals who support it? Where are the Archmage and Legendary Mage? Without these colonists to open up a new world, you're kidding me. The same goes for the protagonist who is studying at a magic academy. How can a small local trade union prevent Master from finding a job? Could it be that these people can automatically refresh the magic scroll? Normally, the master of DND is the biggest capitalist and the biggest boss. What is the industry union? If you don't serve the master well, you want to buy scrolls and do business? The red-robed wizards will understand that the low-level mages inside are quite miserable, but externally they are all great masters. Without the support of the mages, how can you develop a colony? The result is great here. Master has become a humble laborer. Look at Fangwai Zhiyi next door, who is also developing a colony. There are no great mages or even legends behind the forces there. This is the normal pattern of the DND world. Unless there are so many mages that the streets are ruined, the profession of mages must be at the top of the food chain.

In fact, the protagonist is really quite hypocritical. As a descendant of aberrant blood, he has a convert's enthusiasm for humans, so he struggles too much and is always afraid of deviating from the position of humans. Real humans don't overthink like him when faced with a choice. He can neither "man-made the spirit of all things" nor "the world is unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs". He claims that his rational reality is always illusory, and he also likes to think about grand narratives, so he deserves to be entangled to death.

This book should be called "Autistic Warlock Wants to Become a Fort Mage because of his low self-esteem"

Why is the character of the protagonist so awkward? I know that the author is trying to portray a lonely genius, but being lonely is quite arrogant in his insistence on his own world while isolating the outside world. Not to mention that the protagonist's high intelligence has a deeper understanding of the world, and he has a more distinctive personality while being restrained. However, in this book, the protagonist is often preached by his elders and starts to doubt himself, and he has no own rules for dealing with the world. Besides, the protagonist always feels inferior because of his strange bloodline. I think the protagonist has never harmed the people around him because of this bloodline, and there are people who make reasonable use of the power of the bloodline. I have never seen people who cannot control this power and become monsters. They feel inexplicably inferior just because they imagine that they will eventually become monsters. So I feel that isolation and low self-esteem are just labels imposed by the author to break away from the current social circle and enter the next copy at the right time. These plots look disgusting.

To be honest, the most unacceptable thing about this book for me is that the protagonist is a fw. He has talents, opportunities, and strength, but he has no brain at all and no ability to think of his own. He likes to escape when encountering problems. When he finds potential problems, he does not want to solve them, but wants to delay them. It is difficult to imagine that this is a mage and not a goblin.

When I read Super Dimension Warlock and this book together, I always feel like I'm going to die before I can finish it.

Everything else is okay, but the protagonist's awkward personality has not improved much. You thought the protagonist's personality has improved, but the author immediately makes you feel that the protagonist is still the same awkward child. You frown when you look at it, and your head hurts after you first entered it.

In a mythical world where there are already many interracial disputes, it is meaningless to talk about black issues. This is a mechanical application. So the alien races in this world are in a Schrödinger state. They exist when they are needed and disappear when they are not needed. Now even the liberation of black slaves has become a topic. So when black slaves face Indians who have not been eliminated, and there are numerous other intelligent races in the jungle, how many pure-blooded white people do you have?

There are too many cheats, and there is no sense of counterattack or hard work. The blood of a warlock that is different from ordinary people, the super powerful artifact Tears of God, the grandfather with a profound background and life experience, and a powerful druid female companion at the beginning. . . Throughout your journey, as long as you are not a stupid pig, but you can be awesome and coax people, how can you still strive for a goal? Xiao Baiwen, died of poisoning

Following updates recently seems to take me back to a long time ago, when I first came into contact with Sister Tao's writing. Although the inner thoughts and ideas are more complicated and troubled than when she was a teenager, Sister Tao's words still have an indescribable charm when reading them. They can always pluck the weak strings in people's hearts from time to time, arouse the resonance of inner emotions, and make people forget all the uneasiness, troubles and anxieties in the real world. They can immerse themselves in the depicted scenes, ponder from time to time, and sigh from time to time...

When Rebecca came out, she jumped directly to the ending to see if she was the heroine. Sure enough, she immediately gave up. This made Rebecca feel disgusted. This forced arrangement of a "natural match" is off-putting.

Is the author really a woman? It feels like the male protagonist has been having an affair with many women (not subjective, but very objective), and is the male protagonist a social phobia? So why do so many deep friendships remain? Even the least sociophobic person in the world would not have so many heartfelt and ongoing relationships! Moreover, there is a problem with the male protagonist's values. There is a feeling that he is deliberately shaped, that is, he is too considerate of others. If it were not for the author's arrangement of the plot, it would not be satisfactory at all (it also makes the plot seem reasonable but becomes false because it is too idealistic). Grandpa's last words are increasingly becoming a failure. At first, it was indeed the integration of the male protagonist. The reason is social, but then it is the bondage. Although the times are different, I really hope the author can give some modern thoughts - the greatest contribution of modern sociology is to make the definition of normal people more and more broad. Isn't it just to be born out of society? Why is it against human nature? On the contrary, it is against your inability to integrate into hard society. Although the above are all complaints, it is really because I like this book so much that I feel it is a pity. I really hope that this book is co-authored by a man and a woman.