Pokemon: I Am Mewtwo

Um, I realized something was off after reading around chapter 20. Looking at the table of contents, it seems like the character hasn't even been born by chapter 45? Is it going to be a long story until level 100 before they leave the game? Are they going to write over 100 chapters before the birth scene? Please, author, isn't the focus of this book supposed to be the story after birth?

Too much unnecessary dialogue and a slow-paced plot. The protagonist's actions lean towards the evil side.

This is a wish-fulfillment novel, suitable for beginners. I read ten chapters, and the protagonist has neither strength nor intelligence, yet he's ridiculously confident. The plot progression is also incredibly slow.

Let me tell you. It's actually quite good-looking, and it's interesting that it turns into Mewtwo. The time travel happens very early, and the author wanted to pad out the plot before Mewtwo's birth, so the timeline feels noticeably slow. But there's nothing exciting about it, and it's not something the average reader would be interested in...

This is too watery. I came to see Mewtwo soaking Mew and other Pokémon, not to see Mewtwo sitting in a jar.

Ideally, this kind of thing should have no female lead. I don't know why you guys would want to include a fairy. What's the difference between including a fairy and an Indian playing with a lizard?

When will Samurai Kid be written? It should at least be a trilogy, right?

The latest two chapters are completely confusing. They seemed to be trying to show what the protagonist would look like three years later, but they didn't, and the protagonist hasn't even appeared yet. Was the description of Team Rocket doing bad things just foreshadowing something? I'm totally lost.

I suggest you go fly to the other side for this kind of subject matter 🦌😰

The plot is moving so slowly! It's already past chapter 50 and it's still just sitting there.