Pokemon: Rainbow Crystal

I hope it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists 1 Single female protagonist 2 Multiple female protagonists 3 Single female protagonist plus Shannaido (author's idea 😁)

The sentences are quite fluent, but the problem is that many times it is not pointed out who said the sentence. There are many self-centered sentences, which are incomprehensible, as if they are immersed in their own world and talking to themselves. The stream of consciousness is very serious and needs to be paid attention to.

Will the author insist on writing this book? I want to invest

Is the author here?😭

Correct me if I'm wrong: Armored Tyrannosaurus has a ground element. Why does your sandstorm cause harm to ground element elves?

In fact, it's okay to read the beginning. After all, the author is a hardcore gamer and a senior comic and animation enthusiast. If he can proceed step by step, it can be said to be a masterpiece. However, the author's advantage is that he is a senior player, and his downfall is that he is a senior player. After all, this game only has so many useful lineups. If we talk about the game alone, there are only about twenty Pokémon that appear frequently after writing about it, which is exhausting. But what Pokemon fan fiction needs most is bonding, imagination, and a description of the social landscape between people and Pokemon. Battles are of course an important part, but not the whole story. As for the battle part, it is high and low from the beginning. There is no detailed cultivation process, no growth, and no bonds. In one hundred chapters, it is already at the king level. What else to write next? What is the point of writing all about mythical beasts? I know that for experienced players, their minds are full of tricks, or they are very clear about skill combinations, egg laying, and lineups, but games and novels are different. We all hate the repeated grinding of levels and effort points in games. There is nothing wrong with using cheats to brush up effort points, levels, and skills. But this is a novel. Readers want to see your training process. No matter how bad it is, they also want to see your tactical application under different lineups. It doesn't matter if you write brilliant battles. Fighting relies on recklessness, and training relies on sugar-coating. Then why should I read novels? There is no sense of substitution and no experience. Wouldn't it be better if I just play the game?

Well, is there multiple female protagonists now or just one heroine? If it's just one heroine, I won't watch it...

Book friends, who do you want the author to change the cover to? If you want 1, please type the number "1." Below. If you want 2, please type the number "2." Below. If you want 3, please type the number "3." Below. 1. I hope the author will change the cover to Girona. 2. I hope the author will keep the main character unchanged on the cover. 3. I hope the author will change the cover to two people appearing together.

Post some viewing suggestions. Your setting is very good. After reading about the work, I found that the setting of this book is very suitable to my liking. This is an excellent place. Let's talk about some bad viewing experiences. Golden Chapter 3. In fact, using the time and space gods to circle at the beginning is a bit embarrassing and cliché. My personal advice to you is that if you time travel, you don't need to circle the time too much because you are used to time travel when reading PM articles. What readers need more is a natural feeling. Your opening setting of the time and space gods has turned the reasonable setting of your book into unreasonable. In the next chapter, a messenger appears, which actually makes it even more embarrassing. In fact, the process of time travel is simply time travel and you don't explain too much. I think it is better than the beginning now. This is my personal opinion. If you think it is wrong, it doesn't matter. I am just commenting.

I can write pretty well, but I can only invest next month.