Pirate Family

It's not well written, or it's disgusting. The author uses exquisite plot development to make the protagonist look like a fool whose calculations are miscalculated by everyone. He doesn't recognize anyone. Even Kizaru's face is unrecognizable, so he must have prosopagnosia. The relationship between Kizaru and Zefa is not good. Kizaru used to be very lazy and was always scolded. When the protagonist was also captured, Kaer asked if he wanted to save him, but he said no. It's both pretentious and boastful. Before entering Impel Down City, you met a Celestial Dragon who was your father's mortal enemy, and you immediately became a coward. Every time you are a coward, you feel angry inside, for fear that others will not know that you are a coward.

I saw that the prison couldn't hold it anymore, there were too many bugs, and there were problems with the worldview and settings. As long as Gaji's brain is sound, it's impossible to touch the heroine. Germa 66 can't even fuck a flamingo. How can he have the courage to provoke the aunt? Kizaru went to the New World when he was a lieutenant general, and was directly replaced by the Tianlong people's general Ensei. Besides, shouldn't this kind of thing be left to the CP? How could the navy be sent to catch it? It's even more nonsense after entering the prison. The pirates on the sixth floor are all at the level of Gu Gao Hong and the World Destroyer. They were all left here on purpose. How could you, the warden, let you practice boxing? At that time, Ame no Shiru could only kill those above the fourth floor at will. As a former Celestial Dragon, Pig's Foot was imprisoned on the sixth floor and he could be pulled out and killed at will. Isn't it nonsense? And isn't the pig's trotter a bit too cowardly and **? He doesn't know how to train, and he doesn't know how to plan. He is clearly a time traveler who knows the future, but Pig's Foot actually doesn't use anything and doesn't arrange anything. His father said that the blood tyrant also relied on killing civilians. Your son dares to cause trouble even if he doesn't arrange it well. This family must be a prostitute. The author must be very careful to write so much, but you just write without checking the information is really unacceptable. At least if you want to be original, you have to follow the framework. After all, this is a fan.

I just want to say that after reading Chapter 30, I couldn't get angry enough to leave a comment! Not to mention too much, everything has been said downstairs. The author has masochistic tendencies, so I will withdraw 🙂

Reading this book requires some poison resistance. The book's routine is a bit old (but it is also attractive) and some abuse of the protagonist. In the early stage, the protagonist has a good eye but a weak hand (he cannot hold himself clearly, has no strength to be pressed to the ground and is rubbed by others, and wants to conquer the world, which is a bit 🤡). It seems that he has not traveled through time (many authors have this problem, giving the protagonist a time traveler buff after watching One Piece, but some common sense about One Piece is intermittently unknown). The most puzzling thing among them is that the protagonist has obvious black hair and black eyes and has never disguised himself. However, every time (about 9/10) the new opponent the protagonist encounters cannot recognize the criminal with the "highest initial reward" (this will still be the case when the protagonist has a new and more NB title later). In summary, this book is suitable for book lovers who are in a book shortage and have a certain resistance to poison.

I have been looking for many Pirates fans in the past two days, and after reading it, I found that this book is quite well written. How can I put it, it is quite interesting and eye-catching. The descriptions are not as rigid as other fans. It is a very spiritual novel.

This is the slowest book I have ever read, bar none.

I feel like the value for money is very bad, but it would be better if I look at the younger one.

At present, the overall pace of this book is slow. I hope that the author can carefully plan the protagonist and subordinates' abilities and the next storyline in this slow pace. The latest part of the Flower Kingdom should be a process of recharging one's energy. I would like to see the subsequent results. These middle parts can be slightly omitted

Is it possible to update it three times a day after it is put on the shelves?

Are you going to break off your limbs and run away like a golden lion?

I borrowed a novel from Guibao Di Amway, The Pirate's Steel Chain Fingers. The writing is okay╮(￣▽￣)╭ Food level

Once you eat a Devil Fruit, you will know what your abilities are. Has the author never read the original work?

The protagonist really dares to gamble. He knows the plot, knows where the powerful fruit, the thunder fruit, is, and dares to eat an unknown fruit! Fruit determines the upper limit. This is the most important foundation. Don't the protagonist know? Don't say that there are no garbage fruits, only garbage people. Why can Blackbeard become an existence that many people are afraid of? If you compare the character, you can see the difference!

Damn it, Roger isn't even dead yet, the era of great pirates hasn't even started yet, and you, the Shichibukai, are here.

I saw Chapter 30, your father killed the Celestial Dragons, you were sent to Judiciary Island, you saved Katakuri's sister, and they said they would repay the favor and save you, but you still don't want to... Die of poison... You fans can be as round as you like, I can't stand it.

Which Pirates fanfic has the strongest protagonist?

There are a lot of bugs, and I won't be convinced without checking the information. The characters of the original characters have not been changed to another look. Forget about the abusive protagonist. The pig's trotter IQ is not online yet. There is also a blind man in Chapter 26 who is not called Fujitora Isho. Fujitora is the code name he was given after joining the navy. His original name was Issey Takahashi. Due to a translation error, it became Isho. You can write a smile, but before he joined the navy, you said his name was Fujitora Isho 😅

Now Shen Nong couldn't resist anymore, so he forced a marriage + snatched the marriage in the finale + sacrificed themselves for each other 😰 humorist. He's also awesome, being able to bury a bunch of poison without feeling any better, 🐮🍺.

Quit, quit, I can't hold on after reading more than a hundred chapters. All rebellions expose the mastermind before they have gained momentum and have a certain strength. It is really a setting that is looking for death. Blackbeard dares to do it. He finally has the strength of the four emperors, and the protagonist is twelve-year-old Mao. If you don't have any, you dare to babble. It's too childish. If you're a time traveler, you might as well stop time traveling. If you're stupid by reading, you might as well throw the blame on the Golden Lion and imitate Bucky. It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't have Bucky's luck. At least he has Blackbeard Luffy and others to resist the pressure. The protagonist has just been arrested after being released from prison. The golden lion can afford to hide and develop, but can the protagonist? What's funny? If you don't have any strength, you're stupid as a world government?

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The protagonist says it depends on his IQ, but it hasn't been reflected in others. It's useless to say that he relies on fruits to meet strong people. He can't beat Doflamingo with a billion of physical skills and domineering power. He relies on his strength to control his younger brother to detonate explosives. I wanted to create a powerful behind-the-scenes boss, but it ended up feeling like he was inflated. He looked like a monster or a devil when he met others. He didn't feel anything at all. If he "stealed the country" with Dover, Blackbeard played big chess and became the Yonko, it was okay. But in the end, he did a lot of things that looked very powerful and were completely incompetent compared to the big boss. It was very embarrassing.

Um, the pirate fan novel written by you is so embarrassing. I can't even tell if it's an urban stallion novel or a pirate fan novel. A stallion novel with a pirate skin is simply too bad.

A lot of novels are like this, that is, you get some super weak fruits, and then add them to make them hard to develop. If you can't develop them, you still have to make them very strong. Weak ones are just weak. I feel sick when I see those garbage fruits. Isn't there something more awesome? For example, the Superman type, the space fruit, the dragon dragon fruit, the phantom beast species, the five-clawed golden dragon form, the human fruit phantom beast species, the holy angel, the bird fruit, and the phantom beast species Suzaku. Which one is not as awesome as this garbage?

The protagonist is too weak. He always wants to rule the world and follow Ming Ge's route. This is okay, but you have to find a way and grow into a strong man first. Isn't there Doflamingo? At least they still have the path of the Celestial Dragons, and they can still communicate. Before you The identity setting is a bit cheating. In the end, there are only 18 of the 20 royal families left, one is from Cobra's side and the other is from the Don Quixote family. Therefore, it is better to just give the protagonist a pirate identity and imprison him. On the first level, he hides his identity as an ability user like Bucky did.

Xiao Mengxin surrendered. It's really a waste of a name. If readers are interested, can you help the author? Name + Ability + Settings

I vomited, and I was very dissuaded. The author most likely has not read the original work, the time is not right, the character design has been greatly changed, and there are many bugs.

I gave up on the first three chapters of the book. Even in the world of pirates, the basic laws must be taught! The body of an eight or nine-year-old child, plus an even smaller girl! How dare you build a small sampan and launch it into the sea! You are even more outrageous than Wang Lufei!

Garbage among garbage, poisonous, don't ask me why, I am Shennong! ! !

Damn it, Crocodile is a woman and is too vicious. Is the author a woman? Not many people can bear this.

It was very bad from the beginning. Where to eat the fruit? The island was stranded. There was no food on the island. It is impossible for anyone with even a little logic to eat the fruit. There was no food on the island. Didn't you consider that you need to go into the water to fish? Even if it was written later that the fruit was able to find something to eat and came back, I still think this is the place. I'm very dissatisfied. Survival is the first priority for normal people. You want to draw a prize before you die. Later, Fujitora laughed out loud. Are you serious about Katakuri and the monkey? Roger didn't even hang up. What the hell is King Shichibukai? This is only the first few dozen chapters. Your timeline is a mess.