The All-Round Lord of Another World

After reading less than fifty chapters, I just want to complain about some parts. The author obviously understands dnd and has learned from it on the system, but the meaning expressed by the attributes is a bit confusing. I feel that it is still possible for the system to go wild in the later period. But this problem is okay. It is mainly a matter of rhythm. Your rhythm is sometimes slow and sometimes urgent, which makes people uncomfortable. If you are writing a fantasy adventure novel, you should speed up the rhythm, quickly form the team, and have a clear route arrangement to make people look forward to it. If it's a Lord's book, but it doesn't look like it to you, I'd be quite anxious to have a book titled Almighty Lord. There are also some weird places, but they are just minor flaws. For example, the buttons are not connected, why are we such a good princess? Why did the main character disappear after being sold for a while? ! The protagonist doesn't seem to take it seriously. He knows that there is foreshadowing, but you can at least give it a heads up. There is also a deliberate pursuit of truth, which is also a problem. We complain that ordinary novels are not realistic enough, but yours is too real, and it is okay to interrupt the plot. The plot is always an important pillar of the novel. Realism is also useful, but it is not used to interrupt the plot. What's more, things like emotions and relationships that should be real are brushed aside, and the protagonist doesn't even have the feeling of being a veteran, it's too one-sided. We are not professional commentators, and our words are quite confusing and we don't have time to polish them. However, we have been in school for eleven or twelve years, so we still understand some simple principles. Anyway, if you have ideas and are willing to write them down, it's already great. Come on.

It's well written and not at all ostentatious. Those novels that are unassuming in speech but barely express on their faces that I am not from this world are much better.

The map of the Faerûn continent in the DND "Forgotten Realms" campaign is used. The western land should be West Heartland. I am not sure about the specific location of the territory now. According to the description in the novel, it should be south of the Dragon Forest.

In my opinion, lordship means farming. This kind of endless fighting is also called lordship.

It's aimed at the lord, but after reading Chapter 50, it has nothing to do with the lord. The book was okay, but not to my taste.

I think the most unreasonable thing about time travel is this kind of time traveling into a dead person →_→ Especially the one who was beaten to death with a mallet... Since he was beaten to death, he must have died from serious internal or external injuries. So the question is, who threw the souls of the protagonists into this kind of body that has lost the possibility of life, and also repaired the body to a survivable level? What's even worse is that they have all been repaired to a survivable state, why not just repair it completely in one go? Hundan (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

I have something to say, is this an all-powerful lord system or an all-powerful combat system?

An obvious poisonous point. The protagonist is only at the Black Iron level. How can he be sure that he can defend Yunqiao?

If you don't cut it, even if it's worth it, I'll order it all. Come on. Please control the rhythm in the next book.

Other books are too watery and the pace is too slow. The plot of this book is too rushed, and you are in battle every moment. Seriously, I'm so tired of watching it.