Global Lord: A Dragon Kingdom from the Start

Having read up to chapter 18, I've noticed too much unnecessary dialogue. A battle scene is mostly spent describing the enemy's unit types and comparing them to our dragons. The actual fighting itself is only about 100 words long. If you can't write battles, then write more about farming and use data to replace combat.

It's basically just the unit types from Heroes of Might and Magic. Those who know better will think you're bad because you didn't explain any gameplay, and those who don't understand will be even more confused. It's something that was only briefly mentioned, so you introduce a new unit type in chapter 2 and then put in a bunch of outdated settings in chapter 3. It's really just filler.

As times change, protagonists are getting weaker and weaker. Ten years ago, protagonists in novels could still get by without a system or rebirth, but now protagonists are embarrassed to go out if they are not reborn or reborn.

The lizardman corpses were touted as resources! Yet they pretended not to understand and buried them!! How ridiculous. What's the point of this useless person being reborn?! Not seizing every resource to develop in the early stages, truly useless. A person who transmigrates to another world can actually be resurrected. Is this a game novel?

For some reason, the author insists on clarifying things like the meaning of data, which should be ambiguous, but he lacks the corresponding knowledge. This leads to an awkward situation: he lists a bunch of data examples, trying to show how powerful the legendary dragons are, but after reading his description, it makes one feel that the six-meter-long red baby dragon in the author's writing might not even be able to defeat a roughly the same size Earth elephant...

The plot is alright, but there's too much unnecessary dialogue. The same thing is explained multiple times, even when one explanation would suffice. Isn't this just padding the word count? There's evidence everywhere! Especially the emphasis on the legendary creature's power—it's been repeated over ten times. It's annoying and tiring to watch. 😒Really tiring.

Your setup is destined to fail. If you restrict upgrades, you'll get flamed to death; if you don't, you won't last long.

To eradicate permanently 🙂

Are novels these days so mindless? A giant dragon right off the bat, and then there's this whole rebirth thing... And it's supposed to be a bestseller? I couldn't even finish one chapter. Garbage.

A useless person reborn, even with cheat codes, is still useless—that's the kind of book that describes this character, one of the most useless.