Global Lord: A Dragon Kingdom from the Start

When I saw Chapter 18, there was too much nonsense. For a battle plot, most of it was about the comparison between the local arms and our dragons. The real battle only takes about 100 words. If you don't know how to write about battle, write more about farming and use data to replace battle.

In fact, it's just based on the troops written by Invincible Heroes. I know how to dislike you, but I haven't written any operations. If you don't understand, I can't even understand what you wrote. I've just touched on things in one go. Chapter 2 introduces a new troop type, and chapter 3 contains a bunch of outdated settings. It's really a waste; A novel does not want to promote the plot, and does not want to think about it To develop my own characteristics, I copied the content of game arms all day long, and I couldn't do it. Brother, I persisted until I was defeated in Chapter 48; If you can't do it, just copy other people's plots. There is nothing compact, and it doesn't look like writing to entertain yourself. The basic salary is probably not as good as working as a waiter and working part-time on Didi. What are you trying to do?

With the development of the times, the protagonist has become weaker and weaker. The protagonist in the novel 10 years ago was still messing around without a system or rebirth. The current protagonist is too embarrassed to go out without rebirth or rebirth.

The lizardman corpse is said to be a resource! I can't even pretend to say that I can't express it in my heart! ! How funny. The waste is reborn and comes back to make hair! It would be a waste not to seize every resource for development in the early stage. People who travel to other worlds can actually be resurrected. Game writing?

I don't know why, but the author has to explain something that should be vague, such as the meaning of data, and he doesn't have the corresponding knowledge reserves, which leads to a very awkward thing: he lists a bunch of data examples to try to show how awesome the legendary dragon is. However, after reading his description, it makes people feel that the six-meter-sized red dragon in the author's painting may not be able to defeat an earth elephant of similar size...

The plot is okay, but there is too much nonsense. One thing is always explained several times. It is obvious that explaining it once is enough. Isn't this an intentional attempt to make up the word count? The evidence is everywhere! In particular, the power of legendary creatures has been emphasized more than a dozen times, which is very annoying and tiring to watch. 😒Really tired.

This setting of yours is doomed to collapse. If you get scolded for improving the card, you won't be able to write any longer if it's not stuck.

Cut to rule forever🙂

Are all novels so stupid nowadays? The first one is The Dragon and The Whole Rebirth. It's also a hit and I can't stand it after just one chapter. It's rubbish.

A waste is reborn. If you cheat, you are still a waste. This is the book I am talking about, one of the wastes.