Naruto: This Uchiha Just Wants to Slack Off

Normally, when writing about civilians who traveled to Hokage, 95% of authors must write about pig's feet falling in love with Hinata and Uchiha girls. That is, the double standard of life and death. On the one hand, I mentally suggest that I must stay away from you, but physically I must stay close to you.

In the first chapter, the reader is given a test, a graduation test, or someone else's Kakashi's graduation test, and the protagonist is treated as an opponent. Is this reasonable? Will he be killed? If you can't defeat Kakashi, you will naturally stop after being dealt with in two or three times. How could you be killed? And tmd Danzo deliberately arranged this assessment because he wanted Kakashi to kill the protagonist, huh? An ordinary assessment in front of the public, to kill people? I think this wave of wisdom is not the wisdom of the characters in the book, but the wisdom of the author. You don't have to write if you don't want to, but it will lower the average level of starting authors, right?

If you don't have the power to cheat, you want to lie down, and the whole family is looking for death.

Want to lie down with Uchiha status? Do you think your death was not miserable enough? And how could a civilian ninja marry an Uchiha princess?

When I saw the marriage, I was persuaded to leave. It was not because of my pride. First, I was too young. He died early in the Hokage, but he did not get married early. Like Moonlight Hayate, he remained unmarried until his death and had a childhood girlfriend. Pig's feet got married just after she went to school. It's unrealistic and impossible. Secondly, after reading the character introduction, the heroine is estimated to be a genius. Is it possible to recruit a son-in-law so early? Third, I guess I am talking about hugging my thighs again, but the result is that the protagonist has no self-esteem to dedicate himself to the heroine, and does various research and escort to improve the heroine's strength. Then there was a Hinata woman who was flirting with a girl while getting into her arms and hugging her thighs. She had a bad character. Fourth, when I read the comments, the assessment turned into a life-and-death fight, and no one was allowed to admit defeat, and no brains were used. This was because Konoha was not a mist, and it emphasized love and dedication, or it was a Kakashi fight. The internal fighting among Konoha's wealthy families was not so blatant at that time.

Don't worry about those people's bullshit. The writing is quite good. To be honest, it is possible to become a god. Damn it, the kind of 6-year-old and 7-year-old super shadows are all rubbish and cool. Sticking to your own understanding is the best. If you can talk about family, friendship, love and the improvement of strength in this book. , The planning of the power system, etc., If it is meticulous and down-to-earth, then your novel will be a first-class novel. If it also has some characteristics, such as the chuuniu characteristics in the chuuniu girl's journey to Hokage, or the badass characteristics in League of Legends, then you can become a god.

To be honest, even pirated copies of your book are not available

I think it's okay, but the research part is too taken for granted. It's really that easy to produce a finished product. Orochimaru + Nobu are already at the pinnacle of the ninja world.

In the first chapter, I was dumbfounded. A low-level civilian student who had not yet graduated could actually marry into Uchiha. . . I was completely confused by what I wanted when I married into a married woman at the age of 12. . .

It's said that he is lying flat, but he is not lying down at all. A married woman can still be tricked by Danzo. Can Kakashi's opponent for the early graduation assessment be you, a little kid who just graduated and is not even a genin? You put up a fucking barrier to prevent you from admitting defeat. It's better to be attacked by a sneak attack. Not to mention that you told me in advance that many ninjas were watching the battle. This is making everyone look like a fool.