The Pirate's Misfortune Follows

Is the hero's sister too strong? Should she be able to block the great swordsman's attack just by eating a fruit?

Where are the chapters 2, 3, 8, 9, and 10?

You can write about disasters, but not all of them, otherwise it will become the fruit of disaster instead of the fruit of misfortune. If you only write about the later stage of the disaster, it will be easy to collapse and there will be nothing to write about. It is a comprehensive nature novel. Many novels have it. I feel that to come up with the characteristics, I have to start from the misfortune. I can focus on the description of luck a little more fantasy. After all, there are prophecies and divination in One Piece. Writing about luck can also be self-explanatory, and you don't have to be too perverted to add some assistance or wait and see... I feel it will be more interesting.

Come on Jiuxiao, you can focus on it before it is put on the shelves, and then it will explode when it is put on the shelves.

What the hell, my sister is the captain? Is the protagonist still fucking lazy? Isn't it fun to watch pirates? It was really frustrating to watch, and there were too many poisonous points, so I was forced to leave.

If all disasters can be counted as bad luck, then this fruit is equivalent to the aggregation of countless natural systems. Then does the bad luck fruit have the same restrictions as the lucky fruit, such as restrictions on the amount of transfer and release?

Come on, I support you. The tickets are all for you, don't be a eunuch! ! !

The protagonist in the first chapter is 12 years old, and then he traveled to this world for 15 years? ? ? ? ? ? ? Are you serious?

Your unlucky fruit should be higher than the lucky fruit in the movie version. His superior fruit. The Lucky Fruit can only rob others of their luck by touching them, making them weak but not fatal. You should be able to do better than Lucky after you awaken.

The author's imagination is too small. Misfortune = unknown = despair. It is very broad. The specific points are pain, sadness, and unlucky. This is related to emotions. This ability is incredible. Being robbed when going out, having your wallet stolen, and drinking cold water to stuff your teeth. These are all bad luck. So if the robbery is successful or the wallet is successful, the party who benefits must be the one who benefits. Since he can control the bad luck, if the pig's feet eliminate his own bad luck, then he must be lucky. Is the math test very painful? Desperate? This is disaster, this is misfortune. There are also those who get 100 points. They are lucky and can control misfortune. Everyone around them gets 9 points. If you get 10 points, it becomes lucky. The reason why you get a bad test is because you have poor talent. The soul fruit can absorb life, the shadow fruit can absorb shadow, and the misfortune fruit can also absorb , Misfortune and luck are inherently integrated. A negative or a positive can make others unlucky, and you can absorb other people's luck. In this way, talent can solve the problem. At how old can the aunt be able to kill a village of giants? A village in Japan is about the same as a local city. The protagonist has no talent and only relies on fruit to hit the hammer. Can he rely on the plot to kill? The power of the Misfortune Fruit can be as small as causing misfortune, or as large as causing pain, despair, or death. This is only for people, but what about the sea and the earth? What about time? What about space? What about the world? It's terrible that the protagonist has no talent. A person who stands at the top of a world where martial arts is paramount not only has talent, but also has extraordinary talents. The protagonist has no talent, but can still reach the top of a civilized society by luck. In One Piece, not having talent is funny, right? Give me a few suggestions, and your homework will be greatly improved＾0＾~

What kind of fruit did the protagonist's sister eat?

The Fruit of Misfortune is a very good idea. I suggest the author to read the book Shen Gongbao's Inheritance, which can give you a lot of inspiration.

Are you a eunuch? Why not updated?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 70, a bunch of kids👶🏻Are you serious?

Is the male protagonist in the previous chapters a virgin?

I'm finally back 😭 The writing is quite good.

Come on💪🙂

Half of the first ten chapters are gone, I can't read them, so I say goodbye!

The writing is broken, and the fruit ability is so developed that it is difficult for people to accept it.

Chi You's Seven Limits in Hong Kong Comics...

Konoha's Red Moon! Still updated? Boss

Obviously, the author's target of the Tilis Pirates is the protagonist group: sister Tiris has a similar personality to Luffy and is passionate about exploration; Atlas targets Zoro, a strong taijutsu; the protagonist targets half Nami and half Franky, who are think tanks + combat assistants; Black Cat targets half Chopper and half Sanji, the chef + is the weakest in the group; Agnes targets half Chopper and half Sanji. Gish, the ship's doctor + combatant; Aimo matched up with Usopp, the marksman; Justice matched half Nami, the navigator. In this way, the only difference between them and the protagonist group is that they are shipwrights, and their acting style is very similar to that of the protagonist group, only more direct. Overall, the writing is pretty good. Don't worry about the comments written by those who are crazy. I look forward to the author continuing to write.

After reading a few chapters, I'm too young. Don't talk about cruelty, don't talk about talent. The author is just too anxious

There is a lot missing😆