Naruto: Daigurian Hyōrinmaru

After reading them all, the poisonous points are very annoying. After writing, you will find that Kabuto is the strongest king. The protagonist has various king operations in the early stage and various bronze operations in the later stage. I even wonder if the writer changed halfway through? In the early stage, you will be called on behalf of others, and in the later stage, you will be called in person? The biggest poisonous point of fan fiction is that since you have changed a lot, why do you still have to copy the original work? Anxious to finish writing a new book and cut leeks? Anticlimactic

Poisonous point: I saw that the strongest king in the back was completely shown off to death, and he still had to find a reason why he was shown off, all kinds of slowdowns... I was speechless 😆

Danzo can tolerate his love for Konoha, he can tolerate his Death Zanpakutō, and he can tolerate his worship of Danzo as his master, but author, are you going too far by letting the protagonist like 3 or 4-year-old Hanabi 😂️

This chapter feels good, like the plot where Itachi is about to entrust Shisui's other eye to Naruto. I think the author's additions here are very good and not stiff. Although I can't afford a reward, I plan to talk about the plot and write comments every day from now on. It's a little bit of support, right?

Recently, I have been reading more than a dozen Naruto fanfics, pfft... Each one has a plot involving Danzo's important person, and I almost peed with laughter. Every time Sarutobi doesn't give it to him, it's so pitiful that Danzo has been hacked by you authors. . .

You are so drunk when you write about Hokage to whitewash Danzo. What else would he say except for that sentence about Konoha? The simplest example is why Yuan Fei is Hokage and he is not. Apart from the fact that both of them love rights, it is because Danzo is afraid of death and has no spirit of sacrifice. The second generation will not give him Hokage, let alone the following.

As the title states, if the first generation did not assign tailed beasts at the beginning, and relied on the first generation + second generation + class + 9 tailed beasts, the ninja world would have been unified long ago, where would the numerous wars that followed have come from? Where did so many dead people come from? Therefore, the biggest reason for the lack of peace in the ninja world is the first generation. Secondly, the reason why the novices criticize Danzo is because Danzo and Gen are doing things that are not on the stage, but the ANBU and the special operations team were both created by the second generation. At the same time, the plan to isolate and exclude the Uchiha was also arranged by him. All of this led to the subsequent genocide of the Uchiha. Danzo was just the final executor of the plan. It was the second generation who caused everything. At the same time, the Uchiha rebelled, and Danzo had no problem destroying the family. If you rebel, why don't you? Is it a mistake to destroy it? Shisui, as a member of the Uchiha clan, are you really sure that you will continue to love Konoha even if your clan is wiped out? Can you afford the bet? Regarding the issue of White Fang, without the approval of the third generation, do you think it can be implemented? White Fang is not a Hokage sect, but he is strong and has a high reputation. The Hokage sect will definitely jointly suppress him, and that mission is definitely not a simple small task or ordinary information. White Fang can be dispatched on the mission, and there are people dying. So the importance of the information can be imagined. It is very likely that the information is of great importance, otherwise it would not be able to suppress White Fang. The Senju clan did not have the strength to suppress Danzo. Seven or eight of the Senju clan died in the third war. The commander of the third war was the third generation. Danzo could not command the Senju clan, and the Senju clan did not know how to bird Danzo. Moreover, it was impossible to attack the same village during the war, so what happened was obvious. The third generation joined forces with other families in Konoha to secretly stumble in the war because the Senju clan had too much influence and occupied too many resources. It was mentioned in the plot of The Fourth Generation Couple that Obito overheard it, and Danzo had no connection with Obito, so he was really forced to take the blame. Orochimaru attacked Konoha, and the Anbu appeared. The root is a branch of the Anbu, so where did it not contribute? Even if there is no dispatch at all, it may be to prevent other villages. Don't we need reserve troops and security personnel to fight a war? According to your thoughts, when another country attacks another country, all the garrison troops and reserves on other borders should die, right? Only those who fight head-on are patriotic? The same thing happened with Kyuubi and Pain. It's true that Danzo has selfish motives, but who doesn't? Not in the first generation? No second generation? No third generation? No class? Obito or not? No celebrities? It's just that Danzo is responsible for carrying out the work of the dark side, so everyone scolds them, but the fact is that these talents are worthy of admiration, because someone must do the dark work. You noobs are unwilling to get your hands dirty, while mocking those who are willing to perform dark work to protect what they want in their hearts. Such people are a disaster.

I feel that some novel authors think of the Zanpakutō simply. From a level perspective, the world of Naruto should not be as advanced as the world of Death. The Zanpakutō appears in the world of Naruto. To be honest, it is a bit too buggy. It is defined as a sword that can hurt the soul, so it really doesn't require any skills. It has speed as a foundation. It only needs... Well, A to pass~😂 Applying it to the world of Naruto is equivalent to carrying a CD-free and unlimited corpse seal with you. Anyway, don't be hit by me. If you hit it, you will be GG.

It's true, most people who write Naruto fan fiction have perverted minds. Hanabi is three or four years old and she has to be liked by the protagonist? Really disgusting.

The most annoying ones are Black Danzo in Naruto, Black Akainu in One Piece, and Black Aizen in Bleach. I finally found a good Naruto fanfic.

I haven't read it yet, but the review says that the author doesn't have Danzo, so I'm ready to jump in. Danzo loves Konoha, I have always been convinced of this. The third generation is the strong branch, and Danzo is the root of silent dedication. Compared with the gentle policy of the third generation, Danzo believed in iron and blood. To have such means, centralization of power was necessary. Therefore, Danzo could not tolerate things beyond his control, so he committed all kinds of cruel behaviors. If compared to someone, Danzo is a bit like Stalin. If under his rule, the villagers of Konoha may not necessarily live happily, but Konoha Village must be the strongest ninja village.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the protagonist had no sense of presence and was a bit boring, so I looked at the chapter titles and found that the heroine seemed to be Minazuki Shiro.

I saw that many people in the book reviews were dissatisfied with Orochimaru's whitewashing, so I also made some complaints. Think about Naruto, a passionate series that originally advertised hard work, but the protagonist who kept shouting about hard work suddenly turned into a second-generation fairy and became the biggest loser. In the finale, no matter how high your IQ is, how hard you work, how strong your faith, or how hard your will is... They can't compare to your noble bloodline. So, Neji, who had seen through everything long ago, died, and Xiao Li, who had been working hard, died... When Kishimoto saw this, he thought, no, this is a hot-blooded series that promotes hard work, why did he suddenly become a bitch? No, we have to come back! But how to make it round? The hang-up is too big. At this time, he thought of Orochimaru. He was not born (he didn't even know who his parents were), he had no blood successor (he could only study it by himself), he had no girls, he had no sage mode... Orochimaru, who had nothing, had survived from World War II to World War Four, and even had the title of Sannin. What an inspiring story. The only stain is that he rebelled against the village and killed his teacher. What can I say? Clean it up decisively. Besides, Orochimaru loves science. In the 21st century, he is politically correct and in line with the main theme. As long as you love science and can contribute to social progress and human development, killing the teacher or betraying the village has nothing to do with it. Scientists have no national boundaries. So, Orochimaru was cleared

I abandoned this book as soon as I saw the protagonist and thought Danzo loved Konoha. Don't you think it's funny? The Uchiha clan had nothing to say when they were killed, it was the fault of the second generation. Where are Shisui and Itachi? White Fang? Thousand Hands Clan? A four-generation couple... Will anyone know where they are? Do you really think Bai Zetsu and Obito are gods? Tell me why Danzo loves Konoha! Orochimaru attacked Konoha, Danzo and Gen never showed up, Kyuubi didn't show up that time, and Pain didn't show up when he attacked Konoha! It's all hindsight. He actually told him that he loved Konoha. 👍

I've read ten chapters, and it's a novice within a novice. I recommend reading it without using your brain.

If you read too much, you will find that Danzo will always talk to the third generation important person, Sarutobi, to give this child to me, and I will train him to be the best tool in Konoha.

After seeing that Danzo had withdrawn, I read the book review again! All I can say is that if this book hadn't whitewashed Danzo's score, his score would have definitely doubled!

Danzo has always had a Sharingan that can use other gods. Some books have always criticized him for doing whatever it takes to become Hokage, and even cooperated with Orochimaru to kill the third generation. Why go to such trouble and can't it be done by another god? Really speechless for them

The writing is okay, but the combat power and combat descriptions are a mess. The protagonist's power is vague all the way, and everyone can't be defeated. You are still writing about Hyōrinmaru, don't you know that ice is not ordinary ice? Even half of it can easily reach the shadow level. Creating an ice field is a piece of cake.

Brother, the ninja world may not be as big as our moon, but the Soul Society is dozens of times the size of the earth, and its strength is not even close 😥

Although it's over, I still want to say that Hyōrinmaru is actually a mage. .

Nice name. The content is also good, but it got lost in the later stage.

Comments and articles now say that Naruto can't stand it? Isn't it okay to be the protagonist of a hot-blooded manga? At least when I was following it in junior high school, I didn't feel it was inconsistent. The audience is also the same. Conspiracy theories have problems with everything. In recent years, everyone has started to think of it. Moreover, normal characters have to be set up with conspiracy theories to discredit them. In the past few years, Danzo has become the most glorious and upright, but he has difficulties. There are so many foreshadowings because the author started not thinking so much. , Eating books later, comic novels are very common, just like the setting of the first generation and the second generation is definitely not as strong as the third generation, so the third generation is the strongest Hokage, but later he eats books, the first generation did not have the power when it was the first generation. West, I don't know how many times I've read it. I still have the physical book at home. At that time, I stopped buying the latest weekly newspaper for 8 or 9 yuan a copy. I went back and read it again and again, but I didn't figure out that many plots. Now a lot of people who may not have read it all are commenting on whether the setting is brainless and black. Is it true or false? Take the third generation as an example. The author may have really wanted to make a boss in a short story at first and then changed it. This is what I heard you say now. At least I didn't know when I was following the comics. But you can't deny that Sea of Death is a passionate manga about kings, but even Death God doesn't have people with this kind of zhengzhi and dark flow. Wangdao comics are not that complicated. There may be people who plan for dreams, the world, and ambitions, but there are really not many zhengzhi, especially those who don't have many roles. It's terrible to say that this kind of thing is a common feature of my daily comic novels, and other general classics and satirical genres. Naruto's calculations are mostly dreams. Peace, Pirate Ambition Dream, the God of Death is to break the old decay for the world Aizen to reveal the world. If you are interested, you can read the setting made by the author of the official novel. Why Tosen follows Aizen and is willing to die? What is his justice? Finally, he begs Aizen to kill him who has lost his original intention. The two people make eye contact for a moment. They have made an agreement with Aizen before. Aizen After asking for his opinion, Aizen is the one who understands Tōsen the most, and the former Tōsen also understood Aizen (the author didn't want to draw the second season and was forced to finish it early, so he could only supplement the setting and part of the plot in the novel. Now it's not decent, and I don't want to argue. It's just the God of Death who follows the trend without thinking.) Kubo is a setting monster, and I'm going too far. Each of the three authors has his own merits. Autumn (now Oda, I don't want to comment on anything), hot-blooded comics are now all turned into conspiracy theories and intellectual films, but there are a few people who understand the angle of hot-blooded comics, just go and find faults, anyway, I am nb if I am not like you, right now people are doing the opposite to be superior to others, just like whitewashing Yang Guang, the difference in comments It ruined Naruto. Really, I haven't counted the anime and manga as a whole and I've read them eight or nine times. I've read scattered individual books. I don't know how many times I read them in class, but I feel like you still don't understand them. I've also read Bleach, One Piece, Dragon Ball, and some Hong Kong comics. Hot-blooded ones are only sometimes seen in Hong Kong comics, but Japanese comics are basically missing. Unless it's not hot-blooded, Yun Hei also changes the genre.

The writing style of this book is okay, but it doesn't look good and has no new ideas.

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There is nothing interesting about these fan stories, they are annoying and boring, and they also look like family TV series. Alas, there is no such thing as fan fiction! I gave up and will never read fanfics again.

I don't understand why you need to be apprenticed to Danzo. If you show talent, the third generation will arrange a teacher for you. Think about who Danzo has offended to death.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Haha, I accidentally read a novel I hadn't read before.

Fortunately, I read the catalog in advance. I wonder what Danzo has to offer? The author actually agreed with him. In my opinion there is no difference between Danzo and Japanese militarism. What is root tissue? They're just a bunch of emotionless killing machines.