Fish Leaping into the Sea

Why isn't I the top vote-getter? I keep voting every day. Can anyone tell me how many my votes are? 😡

I'm a newbie who doesn't know how to do it, and it took a long time to sign the contract. If I'm looking for support and investment, if you have any recommendation votes, please vote by the way! ! 😆 This is my first time writing a novel, so it may not be very good at the beginning, but I believe it will gradually get better. I am also confident, so please bear with me. 🙏

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Forehead. For cultivators, if they are too upright and holy, will the protagonist die too quickly? In fact, the title and table of contents look pretty good. 85 Points. The second half of the introduction is also good. I'm afraid it's too much for Holy Mother and Xiaobai. In cultivating immortality, treachery and conspiracy are not derogatory terms. This means having an IQ. You can replace 🙄 with violent and dark words such as bloody and brutal. Personal advice.

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Good books should be read slowly, and the author should speed up. 😊

This author's book is not suitable for older readers. . .

Once you become an immortal, you have to bring in a whole family. This is not how you repay your kindness. If you become an immortal, you will become a commodity on the street. Only by cherishing it and cherishing it can you realize the beauty of cultivating an immortal.

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The writing is very good, and I am following the reading

I've only read three chapters. Let's not talk about the materials and food needed for martial arts training. Mortals who can use the storage bag are indeed "favored by heaven".

I hope you all can give me some opinions!

The first thing I do in the morning is read my friends' novels. Wish you happiness!

In the introduction of the book: "Stars" are these two words, right? Isn't it morning?

I suggest you write something down. It's best to be ordinary in the mortal stream, not the kind that constantly encounters adventures and is invincible at the same level. Also, don't be a loser. Think about the world of cultivation, which is very cruel. Don't be the one who always overflows with love, don't be the one who acts like I'm the protagonist and I'm awesome.

Not very reasonable. The two are only twelve years old, and a ten-year-old child already knows the love between a son and a daughter... If the protagonist comes from time travel, it would be consistent if he has past life memories, but the protagonist is an aborigine. In addition, the heroine was written to death, and the routine was outdated and unflattering. In addition, the character dialogue is a bit childish and blunt...

You can't create the world, but it's acceptable to create a genius treasure! Three days of small spiritual energy can open up spiritual consciousness. Now that I have read 500 fantasy books, I feel that there are problems and contradictions in the world created. Isn't it okay for everyone to be like this? Have trillions of people spread this method?

You're a little slow at writing one chapter a day. I want to pick it up.

Step into the stars. . Did you make a typo in Xingchen?

There are only 10 chapters, which is a bit short. Please write faster.

The newcomer came to congratulate you with his new work "Empress of the Sky"~~

It's a pretty good new book, keep it up ＾0＾

Can ordinary people survive without eating or drinking for 9 days? When I wake up, I feel like a normal person. At the age of 10 or 12, I know what love is? They don't have the Internet, so they can't be as precocious as the people on Earth. By the way, I didn't understand a little bit of emotion until I was 16 years old in my second year of high school.

Why are chapters missing at every turn? It's also too unfriendly to readers!

Chapter 5, Chapter 6 Who ate it! ?

Well! Just write randomly. In a world of spiritual practice, you can't think randomly. There is always spiritual energy in the Dantian. How much energy can you cultivate in three days? Others have been practicing for hundreds of years, how can this little energy produce spiritual consciousness? Not enough, simple as that. Doesn't everyone have spiritual consciousness? Not to mention that the chance is directly proportional to the risk, I didn't see the risk? If you encounter problems with your practice, just commit suicide. It's not cheating, the world has collapsed, and there are orphans. Well! If you write it this way, the protagonist will casually beat up a 1,000-year-old monster.

Why is Old Man Li's apprentice better than the monks of the sect? I have only been studying for a few years, and I am fighting alone. Does this book describe the monks of the sect as too incompetent?

No way, why are there so many words but no one is talking. Hahaha let me try

Today's readers are very picky!

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