Dark Tower Rise

I still like this kind of slow-burn fantasy. I once considered writing it, but finally gave up. Come on, keep an eye on you!

Winning a prize of 600 million, haha, I am so happy that I feel so sad. The money hasn't been spent even after the person dies.

I'll take a look at what Brother Bai recommended. It'll keep me watching. It's pretty good.

It is a breath of fresh air in fantasy novels. There is no system or golden fingers here. The protagonist starts from scratch, pulls up his own team of little devils, and sells salt to conquer the world; fresh and refined nursery rhymes, secrets of religion and gods, fist-fighting battle scenes, and even a harem, men should do it with real swords and guns 🪖

I think the reason why some people were disappointed with this book is because the word "Witch King" has a precise definition, but the author invented one. This seems to be no problem for Qidian fantasy novels, but the fantasy category has much higher requirements for vocabulary definitions—or, in other words, a wider reading range. The more well-known Witch-Kings in the general sense include the image of the Ringwraiths headed by the Witch-King of Angmar, who are the villains in the "Lord of the Rings" series... But whether the villain is good or evil is not the point. What everyone is concerned about is whether the author has written the characteristics of the Witch-King. For admirers of the DND series, this is even more unforgivable: in the setting of the DND series of Cataclysm, "Witch King" is a precise and well-known definition - that is, a powerful user of spells/psychic power... The author's behavior undoubtedly violated the boundaries of the DNDer's heart. On the other hand, it shows that the author writes fantasy but lacks understanding. I'm not sure if the author has just come to fantasy development, but I suggest you read more books in the DND series, and then take a look at the entire "Harry Potter" series, and make up for it if you're interested, so that you can develop in fantasy.

Game "Overlord II"

The main recommendation is "Pseudo DND: I am the Village Chief", which is a strong point in the same period. The system farming article of the boss 🤭 in the same period is humorous (The story of a desert village chief growing up to the floating city lord) Passing by Dear readers, you should go take a look 😁 By the way, move your big fingers, it looks good, don't forget to collect it 🤝 ——Afraid of the PY transaction after the cool weather 😭 A helpless move

It has been saved recently and has very few clicks. I have sped up the progress of the plot, and the protagonist has become stronger after finishing here. And I think it is better than what I wrote before, at least it has a stronger sense of immersion. But the collection is still being dropped, and the book seems to have really become cold. If the protagonist in my second volume is more domineering, will the painting style be different from now?

The writing is very interesting, please keep updating it and support it when it is put on the shelves.

At the beginning, he explained that he spent so much money to buy lottery tickets because he wanted to win the big prize and treat his grandfather's illness. It was really true. . . . . . (Funny)

Already ➕📖racked and supported by collection😄

Well written, the writing is first-class, keep it first, and then read it when it gets fatter.

Come on, old man＾0＾~😁

Traveling through the Old Gods, this introduction is a bit poisonous, God who cannot look directly explains everything, the soul of a mere mortal

The author's plot is very interesting! ! The only thing is that the progress is very slow. Sometimes I feel unbearable. Even if I skip five or eight chapters, I can still keep up. This is particularly frustrating. To be honest, I just started watching it because the plot was fresh, but as it got older, it became too boring, and my enthusiasm gradually wore off. Then I added it to the bookshelf and never saw it again. Considering the author's income, I can't do it like this. It will affect it. It's not like writing a novel with a particularly fast pace. Keep a good grasp of it. I hope the author's wallet will be bulging and he will write more good books. There is also a poetry section. Actually, there is no need for so many sentences. Two sentences are enough. It is too long and you won't be able to read it. It will be a thankless task for you to edit it.

The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is to downplay the gameplay and species combat power level system, and present a real fantasy world. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.