The Witch Turtle

I thought you'd just become a turtle and hide forever, but in the blink of an eye you turned into a human? It would have been better if you'd been human with giant turtle blood from the start.

Yes, ah, keep it up, I want the wizard's story.

The poorest novel ever; the protagonist's wizarding organization can't even afford a house, they only have a cave.

When will the contract be signed? When will it be available for purchase?

Author, have you stopped writing novels or just changed your pseudonym?

Uh, I thought it was a fantasy novel about mythical creatures, but it turned into a human before chapter 30. I thought it would be one of those stories where the creatures couldn't turn into humans.

Could you mention that point without the book title, like something about Wang's sorcerer god? 😰

The pacing is a bit fast. It's fine during the apprentice phase, but once you reach the wizarding stage and your level increases, I hope you'll include more content on conquering other realms. The character descriptions could be more vivid and engaging. The first-person perspective needs more intelligence! Keep it up!

How do I design a cover for this book?

Everything else is fine. It's just that the main character is a goofball, which is unbearable. It'd be best to change that, otherwise it's not interesting to watch.