One Piece Everyone System

It was too delayed at the beginning and there was too much nonsense. I suggest you revise it.

I'm in tears, finally someone is willing to play with the tutor! No matter who you are, as long as you play with your tutor, we will be good friends. Suddenly I feel sad. It has been more than ten years. It is normal to feel cold, but I am still blue and thin. 😭😭

I just want to say that Shanks was the Yonko when they first met. It can be seen from his conversation with Whitebeard. ,...... Also, would Luffy still be Luffy without eating the Rubber Devil Fruit? , The original work was ruined a bit too much, the author might as well change the character and redefine the character. Personally, I feel that most people who choose to read the book are pirate fans. At least the important details should be preserved, and the knowledge and color are spiritual power.

I write this post mainly to respond to those trolls, and to those who love Luffy in the original book 1 The author has made it very clear in the first chapter that he is Luffy through the soul So the protagonist Luffy is not as wise and foolish as Luffy and hot-blooded as in the original plot, so please don't say you want to see such a Luffy, because the first chapter of the book has clearly shown that it is not that Luffy, and it is a pity that you are still unwilling to read it. Why bother if you don't force it? It's just the shape of Luffy. As for you who can't accept it, if you still like the original One Piece anime, I suggest you watch it again. Once is not enough, but also a second time, a third time, and a fourth time. What about your brains? It also lowers the awareness of readers who have not read it because of this brainlessness. 2 Regarding the plot, because most of the One Piece novels follow the plot without changing the plot, the author also wants to change the angle to see if it can arouse a personalized reaction. This is also a practice and an attempt. If you find it unbearable and your mentality is broken, then I suggest you stop reading it, because we spent our time thinking about, summarizing, and combining with the author to perfect the subsequent plots. Our efforts are just to bring you a different world of pirates, instead of being criticized by you. Thanks.

You want to comment, right? Let's put it this way, I think fan fiction generally has a few points! The parts of the first original work that were unpleasant to look at are now fun to write about! In other words, those fandoms that only use the main characters of the world and only appear a few times can usually see the introduction and chapter names and see you again! The second character cannot collapse too much! Or maybe it doesn't sound like the person who read the original novel! In fact, it is a sequelae of the first point! Because the tragic past and the present without the characters may change! There are a lot of things to make up for here, such as the protagonist secretly saving the damned people, but others still died looking at it! On the surface, the plot we are familiar with has not changed, but in fact, it has been changed secretly! It feels good to have the whole world (as readers know it) waiting to surprise the plot characters! The third point is reasonable! Of course, some of the plots in the cool novels are not very reasonable (excluding the cool parts), I can accept it because it is cool! The fourth point is the more important point of Shuangwen! Keep the rhythm right! There are many things to enjoy! But you can't just use one point all the time! Such as fighting! Such as your own resources! Money! Identity! These cool (pretending) points need to be replaced! Finally give you a review! The entry point during childhood is a bit early! The various abilities are a cool thing! But it can only be used in combat! The description of daily life is a bit illogical. In the latest chapter, have you started practicing socialism? It's a similar idea to a certain One Piece fanfic that was recently completed! It's not important! Everyone knows that you have to lay the groundwork early to feel more comfortable when the plot officially begins! But you have to remember that the reader's patience is limited. I said that I will ignore small logical problems because of the enjoyable parts of the article! But if the fun part doesn't come in time or isn't fun enough, many grumpy old men will abandon the book 😏

This novel is so well written that I vote for you!

Actually, I don't have much to say in this post. I just want to ask you, Luffy's soul has been worn out and he is no longer the original Luffy. Why do you always want to change back to his original appearance? ? Since it is different, why not experience a different world of pirates.

Set a flag: either code words or do sit-ups!

I recommend that the author of this book must be a short-term and fast seedling, and his writing is getting better and better. . Looking forward to it

Hunting at the age of 3, going to sea at the age of 6, Yonkou at the age of 9 Hahaha

Is anyone reading this book?

Support the author. The main content of the fanfic is that the characters and plot of the original work are reasonable. I hope the author will work hard.

I have a special post for my birthday today. Please leave your blessings. Everyone, look at how many people there are.

Crocodile's old lover turned out to be Robin's mother 😥 Is the author stupid? The poison in this self-advocacy article really disgusts me.

Dear gentlemen, who has traveled through time and can't find a woman? I believe there is no such person! He's so awesome that he probably wants to find three or five girlfriends.

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's so beautiful. I can't get enough of it.

I saved 115 chapters and read them in a few hours. Hey

This is a different kind of pirate book. Compared to the cockroach-like Luffy, perhaps the writing style is more relaxed and casual. I am also a writer of pirate articles. I like pirates, but I always feel that the Superman-style rubber fruit with pig's feet and Luffy is a little inferior. Pirate fans, don't worry, I also love Luffy. I have found a lot of books about pig's feet being Luffy. I remember one book about pig's feet being a monkey fruit, and it also matched Naruto's ninjutsu. It was a good idea, but the writing was a bit poor. However, this book about Luffy's pig's feet also caught my eye. The idea is very good. , A lot of imagination cannot be expressed by just a few words between the lines, it may be the creativity that comes from racking one's brains. The most important thing is that the literary love is good, much better than what I just said. This is probably, oh, no, this is definitely the best article written about Luffy fans. It's time to be shameless and hungry. Feel free to use Wu Fei's treasure land to promote your own books. Everyone is welcome to try the poison. I hope Wu Fei can help me improve. Thank you very much.

It looks so good! Come on ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Spring and snow, this is the feeling I had when I started reading this novel. After that, the more I watched it, the more eye-catching it became. Compared with the Luffy I had watched before, the new protagonist gave me more touching surprises. If I say that this book is a non-rhymed novel, readers will definitely not agree, but in my heart, it is! There is no need to be secretive if you like a book! The author's writing style is exquisite and his imagination is grand. He is born out of originality but not limited to originality. He is truly the best of his kind!

By the way, the Demonic Eye of Direct Death doesn't require melee combat. It only takes effect when the weapon you hold pierces the dead center. The bullets flying out from the sniper are just ordinary attacks. There is also the fact that the magic eye appears after experiencing a death, and then the soul comes into contact with the root. Does the Pirate World have a root? It is impossible for the system to insert the root into the Pirate World out of thin air. If the responsibility is passed to the system, it would be a bit... Anyway, I am just expressing my opinion.

The author wrote that after Luffy arrived in Alabasta, he was completely enjoying himself, right? To be honest, I have no idea what the author is writing since then. I quite liked the subject matter of this book from the beginning, but I felt that the author seemed to be getting more and more excited as he wrote. I didn't know what he was writing until the end, so I stopped subscribing after the third volume. I just looked at the chapter names and the first two paragraphs to get a feel for it.

See Chapter 15. There are quite a lot of fans of One Piece. In order to write a book review, I spent a long time writing it. . . Japanese hot-blooded animations are actually quite similar in core. In view of the differences in social systems and historical culture, Chinese readers will actually understand them somewhat differently. For example, different concepts of collectives and social hierarchies. The original One Piece film has indeed reached a certain extreme in its core expression of friendship and adventure. In addition, in terms of structure, it is basically a small island, decryption, crisis, reversal and the like. It is a looping single line for the immortal dream. This is also the standard configuration of the passionate migrant worker series. But it is beautiful because the group portraits are depicted in seconds, and the narrative line is exaggerated and full. Once you get used to it, you will have a very good sense of anticipation and involvement, and it is especially suitable for young readers. In this book, because the lines have been flattened and stabilized, and the core has been replaced, it has not reached the level of the original work. This type of fandom is quite difficult, because the more you use the original work, the easier it is to interfere with the artistic resonance of the original work's clever combination. The structure of an infinite map like Pirates is even more troublesome. I really admire the author's ability to balance in this book, and I'm absolutely a fan of it. In addition, he tried his best to keep the details and writing style as close to the original work as possible, which is considered a good light modification. If you want to improve, just maintain the current level of writing, try to make light changes, and try to make the culture more suitable for audiences of different ages. Clumsy works of each other.

The author of this book is completely self-deprecating 😅 and there are also problems with the character of the protagonist. It feels very hypocritical, especially the "sunny smile" and "cuteness" and the use of the original Luffy's tone of voice to talk to Garp, which really ruins the original work. 😅There is also a very boring and embarrassing feeling. 😒 Of course, this is just my personal feeling, but it would be much better if the author changed the protagonist's time-travel person to someone else or did not choose Luffy.

You can't do this, the sun god form of Nikka fruit directly beats Kaido

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It's so poisonous and someone recommended it, so I took it too.

That, I haven't read yet, but when I saw that Momonosuke must die, I no longer had the desire to read it. Although he deserved to die, after the author brought it up, I felt that this work must have been a hit and slipped away.

I feel like Momonosuke in One Piece has about the same status as the master in Douluo. The most sprayed.