
Pirates: the Prosthetic Doctor on the Straw Hat Ship
海贼:草帽船上的义体医生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 637k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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272Chapters
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Cut off the waist
In Night City, I saw something that killed one by one. Why did the protagonist also become a scavenger?
I hope the author can take a careful look at it
When I read Chapter 35, it felt awkward. At the beginning, I thought it was mainly about upgrading the protagonist's own prosthetic body, but it turned out that he planned to replace all members of the Straw Hats? So what else are you looking at? Zoron's efforts have become the credit of the prosthetic body. In the future, if his arms cannot keep up with the original version, he will continue to change them, and then change his hands, feet, and whole body. All members can do this, a template. The character's uniqueness is all gone. Usobu's sniping ability is because of his upgraded prosthetic body, while Nami's weather stick has been transformed into a prosthetic body and upgraded. Luffy and Sanji are all like this, boring. There is also the problem of acceptance of prosthetic bodies. Only a few people like cold metal limbs. Even if bionic skins are added, readers will still feel resentment in their hearts even though they know they are fake. 2077 is popular, but it does not mean that it can be adapted to the novel. After all, the sense of immersion in the game is not as good as the brain modeling in the novel. Too strong sense of immersion will cause some problems that are not problems in the game. In the novel, it is very uncomfortable, especially in the Chinese environment, the mechanical ascension is really just a pleasure. Everyone can generally accept psychic ascension, as well as genetic ascension. But only mechanical ascension cannot be popular, including the super-magic mechanics from previous years. Nor is it a path to mechanical ascension. There is nothing to say about changing hands and feet to replace the whole body. The main body is made of flesh, and some chips are implanted. The machinery is used to protect the main body, not to replace it. I originally clicked on this book with high expectations, because I really haven't read a few novels in which a machine transforms itself and is readable. Many similar books in the past became more and more perverted as the plot progressed, so I gave up the book in a hurry. In fact, I refer to the protagonist with the impression of Jennott punched. This kind of self-transformation, coupled with the reduction of the description of transformation in the plot, and the increase of stunning descriptions of the plot performance after transformation, can make me look forward to the follow-up and ignore the slightly uncomfortable transformation process. The most inappropriate thing is the transformation of the female character. The most important failure is that the replacement of limbs can be compared to real-life tattoos. Who is a good person to do this? In one fell swoop, the beautiful imagination of the female ketone body turned into cold metal, and the bionic skin was useless. The concept of coldness has been engraved in the readers' minds. I can clearly say that the number of readers who have been lost since Chapter 35 has definitely increased significantly. Either modify it from scratch, basically modifying everything below the eyebrows. Otherwise this result will not be saved.
Bucky's character is characterized by good luck, nothing else, and a tough talk? This book was not written yet, and Bucky was changed into a combat robot by the protagonist as soon as he appeared. It's weird. I thought something would happen to make him run away. It's really a good thing to dare to change the plot, but the changes are so mediocre.
The main focus of this article is the prosthetic body. I thought I would write about this as the core, but after reading the whole article, the author seems to use this thing more as a detachable equipment. He does not specifically explain how this thing is good, how bad, how to improve it, and he cannot feel the difference in combat performance caused by the differences between individuals. Basically, the protagonist and Luffy are unparalleled, and everyone else is brushed aside.
Speaking of which, when did Kirby leave?
Understand?
Understand?
Frankie flow?
For example, if you play a prosthetic body in One Piece, wouldn't it be Franky?
The feeling of ancient novels
Inexplicably, it feels like reading an ancient novel. It's weird.
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The latest information, Franky is greatly strengthened
The painting style of the main character's plug-in doesn't seem to match that of the Straw Hat Pirates.
Is Pirates out of traffic? Only a few hundred collections
Although I follow the boat flow, I dare to change the original process
The God of Night seems to be one without the strength of the pirates, but there is no cyberpsycho here. Franky only has his head, so there is nothing wrong with him.
I've finished reading it. It's a really cool article. I can defeat gangsters in the first half. What else can I write later?
There are so few people! The trainer's book ranks eighth when I read it casually, and here it ranks 11th after a few monthly votes.
Do you want to add Bucky's fruit ability to Luffy? According to the source of inspiration, aren't the two fruits both cat and mouse? There may be combo skills.
It was so perverted that I quit after watching it for a while. I'm so afraid that I'll see the author later write a plot where a loli and a big white dog transform into each other, and then they say Oni-chan.
It's really good, but why are there so few collections?
It's really well written, why doesn't anyone follow it?