Basketball's Number One Point Guard

Regarding certain settings in this book, you can complain or not like it, but please get some fan points before you complain. Don't create a trumpet account with 0 fan points to make fun of here. Let's discuss what is reasonable and unreasonable, and whether it is embarrassing or not. Thank you.

After reading two chapters, I was poisoned and died. How did I get a quadruple-double of 30 points in 40 minutes in the first and second halves of a high school game? When you were in high school, you signed an agent before you were sure about joining the NBA? Harden is written as an orphan? Do you want to be black about Kobe's father?

NBA in the 1990s was my favorite theme. I patiently read 100 chapters and then skipped to read it. First of all, what you wrote about the opening is a bit hard to describe. Why do you have to report every game (how many points in the first game, how many points in the second game, how many points in the third game because of what, fourth, and fifth). There are also too many repetitive points (nonsense), and the whole article feels a bit like a rundown. The plot advancement is also not rounded enough, and the details are handled a bit too casually, such as the host's rating in the first season, retirement in the second season, and some overly interspersed plots. It's not that this doesn't work, but that the way you set the stage is a bit too stiff, too casual, and too abrupt. The second thing I want to say is that this system in general seems to be a poisonous point. There are also various aspects of the plot, players, and other things. Are your subjective traces a bit too big? It's not that you can't have them. If you add a little more, it will be more interesting and the plot will be more rounded. But you are a bit too subjective, too much is not enough. The writing style is still a bit immature, so I can only say that the author please keep working hard. The next book will be set in the 1990s, and the plot details will be handled more rigorously. I will support you again. By the way, be sure to make an outline. You may not necessarily follow the outline exactly, but at least it will be more organized.

It's okay for you to imitate the basketball mode where a rabbit comes to mow the grass, but can you make the plug-in more normal? It's not fun at all and it keeps abusing the main character. I know you don't want to make it so surreal that you can't handle it later. In fact, you might as well write it without plug-ins. Also, regarding basketball, please can you be a little more professional? I can still watch it in the early stage, but I can't watch it at all after it's put on the shelves. 🙏🙏🙏

Hong Kong True, this is the one with the most poisonous points among the basketball novels I have read. I won't talk about the settings. The game data is completely straightforward. Looking at the protagonist again, he really has both style and style. I admire him.

Although the book has been completed, I still want to complain about that (Sloane's Resentment). Can everyone resent the protagonist? **Novel, suppress the protagonist, don't rely on the skills given by the system, haha, then why do you still write system flow?

Kobe was drafted so low back then and had to train hard in the later stages to become a superstar. Did the author also come up with a system for Kobe? Many players were not on a certain team at the time and were forcibly assigned to that team by the author.

Now that we have a system and a golden finger, why should we emphasize working hard? It is like a man who moves bricks, giving him the financial and material resources to build a building. But he had to work hard to move bricks and build the building himself.

After reading a few chapters, the villain is completely mentally retarded

Why are there two names named Xiao Tian and Qin Tian in the first few chapters?