Bringing the Stars to the Apocalypse

I came from the "Portable Interstellar" book and wanted to give the author some feedback. Please don't always write about systems, politics, freedom, and revolutions; it feels like you're alluding to something. But actually, I just want to read a satisfying story where interstellar units crush other worlds. 😁 Just my personal opinion. Anyway, good luck to the author!

Regarding the character Tang Yan, created by the author, there are some generally accepted facts: this character is a transmigrated protagonist from the author's previous completed novel, *Following the Stars*, and the accompanying system is similar to the protagonist's system in the previous novel. Through the previous book, we can deduce the following points:

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The protagonist's interstellar system gains reward points through a combination of trust and hatred from others, resulting in a significant increase in reward points. "Rewards are based on human emotional feedback, categorized into three levels: satisfaction, gratitude, and trust, corresponding to reward points of 1, 10, and 100 respectively.

Hopefully, I can keep writing this time.

Personally, I feel it's a shame that the StarCraft, Red Alert, Age of Empires, and Mount & Blade series don't feature mass-production unit strategies. More importantly, it's a shame that the authors, with such excellent writing skills, didn't include such strategies – a major disappointment!

I can only say that you're now on my list of books I shouldn't follow. I won't preach any grand principles; everyone needs to eat, right? But your new book... Forgive my bluntness... I won't be reading it until it reaches a million words. I've been waiting for so many days, even setting up auto-subscription, fantasizing about what the future holds... And it turns out to be this ←_← Oh well...

Warhammer 40k had a galactic scale, StarCraft had a sector scale, but this author turned it into a village brawl. The previous book was the same. Seriously, if you're going to write a book with such a narrow scope, don't use such grand settings. It's just awkward to read.

I think the author is better suited to be a writer than an online novelist. Your meticulous writing style makes you a slow burner, and as you yourself said, it can be tiring for readers who are following the story closely. At the same time, your writing is excellent. Therefore, I think you could try turning it into a physical book and finding a publisher. This path might be more suitable for you, @reader

The swarm destroyed our home My noble people have become refugees.