Bringing the Stars to the Apocalypse

I came from the portable interstellar book. I want to give the author some advice. Don't always write about institutional politics, freedom and revolution. I always feel that it is reflecting something. But in fact, I just want to read a cool article about interstellar troops defeating a different world. 😁 Personal opinion. Anyway, cheers for the author.

Regarding Tang Yan, the character designed by the author, there are some generally recognized facts: This character is the former protagonist in the author's last completed novel "With the Star" who traveled through time, and the attached system is similar to the protagonist system in the previous novel. From the previous book, we can get the following points: 1. Tang Yan lived in the space colonial era before time traveling, 2. Tang Yan has more than 18 years of life experience, 3. Tang Yan is a soldier at the bottom of the army in a feudal society, 4. The reason for joining the army should be the livelihood of the family, 5. Tang Yan has brothers and sisters, 6. Tang Yan was plotted by others before time traveling. Then speculate that in this context, Tang Yan should have some experience in life in the space age, have relatively mature thinking, have certain military literacy as a soldier (and it is for the future), and have been instilled by the national army's thinking concepts (it does not rule out that the character does not trust the national concept and does not agree with it) ), has a certain sense of responsibility (working for his family's livelihood), has spiritual sustenance (because he has relatives of the same generation), and has a strong distrust of strangers (being betrayed by his military colleagues). However, because the death of his parents is related to the government to a certain extent, Tang Yan's trust in the government should also be low. Judging from the above points, Tang Yan should be an idealist who has low trust in things in unfamiliar environments and high trust in relatives. In terms of ability, he should have military literacy and a strong sense of responsibility. He is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, and a cautious idealist. The above is an analysis from the background, from the perspective of this article: From the beginning to before arriving at the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is a rational, cold-blooded, logically capable, distrustful of strange things, and confused due to lack of purpose due to amnesia. From arriving at the Pandaren Legion to before taking control of the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is not extroverted but not exclusive. He does not have a strong sense of distrust of strange things. He has a certain degree of sensibility and logical ability. Strong jet lag (of course, this can be regarded as a flaw in the plot rather than a problem in character design. After all, no one is perfect in plot design and it is impossible for one person to take care of all aspects). A relatively rational and non-cold-blooded character. After taking control of the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is a warm and extroverted character, more emotional, with strong logical ability (of course the logic ability designed by the author is extremely strong), weak distrust of strange things, and even sentimental at certain times. In terms of ability, there is more systematic help in the novel than in the background. So combined with background and novel analysis, Tang Yan's character has changed greatly from the background to the current chapter, but from the perspective of plot advancement, it seems to match such a huge change in personality, giving people a sense of huge tearing in the character's personality. Although the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing for the personality changes to strengthen the plot. The unity with character development, such as contact with the naughty and vivid system adjutant, the first murder, photo memories, understanding and talking to Zang Feng, getting along with friends such as Reina, etc. However, these details are obviously not enough to cause a huge change in the protagonist's personality, so in this design, I think the author has not considered it properly. This is my first opinion. If there is any improper analysis or better additions, please point it out and reply.

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The way the protagonist's interstellar system obtains reward points can increase a large number of reward points due to the trust and hatred of others, "Using human target emotional feedback as reward points, divided into three levels of satisfaction, gratitude, and trust, corresponding to reward points 1, 10, and 100. Taking human target emotional feedback as reward points, divided into three levels of disgust, fear, and hatred, corresponding to reward points 1, 4, and 20. Since this is this model, if you master the human heart, you will master the power. The way to quickly control people's hearts is to establish a church and push the stars out to become gods. There are roughly three ways to tell others the truth in the wasteland: one is to use fists like Tyson and violence, the other is to have the eloquence of an outstanding leader, and the third is to use eyeball robots to promote your ideas. Only with a three-pronged approach can you tell others the truth, but one If you are not the protagonist of Mary Suven, you simply cannot have the fists of Tyson and the eloquence of the Führer at the same time, but the protoss can do these, such as Zeratul. For example, Artanis, and look at the appearance of the protoss in the Legacy of the Void CG in front of the ancients and the people who have lost hope in the wasteland. And the fanatical believers who believe in the protoss will give the protagonist a steady stream. I believe that one hundred reward points will be provided by the guys who are new to the church, and those one to ten reward points As a normal protoss, the protoss cannot stand the wasteland humans' attitude of abandoning spirituality for the sake of living. Some protoss have bad personal ethics, such as Alarak, but they are not like the wasteland humans Compared to guys whose average morals are full of chivalry, the protoss certainly cannot stand the dirty behavior of the wastelanders devouring their own kind and mutilating young females, because the protoss have also experienced eons of catastrophe and know the pain. They only need to stand to provide a moral deterrent to the protagonist's settlement Talking about the acquisition of hatred value. , That's even simpler. When the protagonist promotes the Church of the Protoss, as long as the higher-ups with normal IQ and a little logic in other settlements know that the protagonist colludes with aliens, the hatred value will appear and rise endlessly. The protagonist can win a steady stream of reward points without running errands, and his reputation will even spread to the United States and arouse the vigilance of the American Enclave. However, What's the point of fear when you get interstellar equipment? The ultimate goal of the Protoss Church is to use the pre-war moral principles and axioms of the Eight Classics as doctrine and customary law to promote the recovery of human morality and establish a normal community. Of course, before that, we must solve the problem of water purification and soil purification and restore agriculture. After all, the wasteland is a water-based economy, as evidenced by the bottle cap currency. Understand this. Note: When establishing a church, you must be careful not to let the protoss die in front of the wastelanders, otherwise they will betray the gang At the end: My suggestion is just for everyone to laugh at, you can watch it or ignore it, ^ω^

I hope I can keep writing this time

Personally, I feel that it is a pity that the StarCraft, Red Alert, Empire, and Cavalry-Blade series do not follow the Explosive Soldiers style. More importantly, the author is so good in writing that he does not write about the Explosive Soldiers style~ Negative review

All I can say is that you are now on my list of risky books to pursue. . I don't make any big claims. Everyone needs to eat. . But your new book. . IMHO. . I wouldn't have read it until there were 1 million words. . After raising it for so many days. I also specially set up automatic subscription, and imagined what would happen next. . The result turned out to be this ←_←Forget it. .

Warhammer 40k_river-level layout, StarCraft_sector-level layout, to the author has become a village chief fighting, which is also a virtue, I am not telling you, since the layout of writing a book is so small, don't borrow such a grand background. It looks awkward.

I think the author is very suitable to be a writer, not an online writer. Your careful writing style determines that you are slow to write, and as you said yourself, it is very tiring for readers to follow. At the same time, the writing style is also very good. In summary, I think you, the author, can try to turn it into a physical book, and then find a publisher to publish it. Maybe this path will be more suitable for you {"NickName":"Hyperion God","UserId":187188946}

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