Dungeon Player

I have been paying attention to this author since the last book. At that time, I felt that the idea was good, but after it was published, its status plummeted. I felt this way again after reading 200 chapters of this book. I still said the same thing, don't put it on the shelf as the ultimate goal (I also commented on the last book in the same way. At that time, it was released on the shelf and it was more free of charge. After more than 20 chapters, it was scrawled at the end, because after it was put on the shelf, the readers were wiped out). Readers are raised. It's not just a good beginning that can attract a large number of fans. If you say that you are an experienced writer and type quickly, then you should know that what readers see is not your typing speed but your quality.

It is my honor to read such a novel with the characteristics of the times written by Lan Bai with great care. In this multi-polar era of globalization, I am deeply inspired to read such a novel with a broad vision. The pig's feet in the novel are Sherlock - the money-grubbing demon, and Loli - the avenger of heaven. The players are all extensions of the fate of the pig's feet. Yigou Planning wants to use the power of the fourth natural disaster to realize his dream of becoming a great nation? The number of players has reached the order of 10,000, causing an impact. . . The destructive power is hard to estimate, and the writing difficulty is also greatly increased. It is very difficult to write a lot of player images. Blue and White wrote posts and speeches of various players in the forum. I read them with great interest. The strategy posts and introduction posts are very interesting. Blue and White gives players a lot of freedom. This is a characteristic. There are players who are whistle-blowers and players who have a tendency to abuse themselves. . . Hehe. Er Blue and White's unique player-style humor ranges from dog planning to brain-filling Emperor Lich, to naughty kid Black Dragon, to naughty girl-loli. It is particularly fun and interesting for players who eat dirt, to disgusting underground world characters, especially slime characters (Tara Hatred) who love to learn from the Holy Light, and corrupt capitalists. Of course sand sculpture players are indispensable. The creation of the three characters is particularly meaningful. Sherlock's classmate routine led to the Loli-Paradise Avenger. Sherlock's character began to follow the path of the Great Demon City Lord-the Successor of the Devil King-the Creator of Great Deeds. And our player group has a variety of personalities, from the girl who grows flowers, to the leading brother Arthur, to the brave man who counterattacks and grabs the root treasure, and the interactions between several guilds are also vividly written. There are also Zhao Si and the bandits on the ground. . . All very stylish. Because this is a book review article, I won't describe it one by one. In short, the personalities and backgrounds of the characters are vividly written. Fourth, there are some logical noises that are recommended to be corrected. For example, in the underground world, evil is regarded as beautiful, and reactionary is regarded as self-consistent. These are all noises that lead to the creation of a great IP. If the novel is to be adapted into anime or adapted for the screen in the future, this will become an obstacle. In the new era, China is importing food from all over the world, selling light rails along the Belt and Road Initiative, selling telecommunications software and hardware to foreign countries, and the IT industry has also gone abroad. The words written in blue and white have both the shadow of economies of scale and the deep connotation of pursuing freedom and independence of human nature. In the new era, everyone is his or her own CEO__ from management guru Drucker. Thanks to Lanbai for the above, and thanks for the book review. . .

As soon as Lan Bai Tian arrived at the store, all the people studying looked at him and smiled, and some shouted, "Lan Bai, you are the number one socialite in Qidian!" He did not answer, but said to the cabinet, "Warm two bowls of poisonous milk and ask for a recommendation from a great master." Then he wrote an update chapter. They shouted loudly and deliberately, "You must be trading again!" Lan Bai opened his eyes and said, "Why do you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? I saw you trading with a certain author the day before yesterday, and they pushed each other at the end of the chapter." Lan Bai's face turned red, and there were blue veins on his forehead. The article burst out and argued, "Mutual promotion cannot be counted as py... Mutual push!... Can the author's affairs be counted as py?" Followed by difficult words, such as "collecting poisonous milk", "surviving tribulations and asking for votes", etc., Caused everyone to burst into laughter: the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy. Congratulations to "Dungeon Player" for its upcoming release, please support~

I have a dream to open a gourmet shop in the underground city, selling two-headed bird egg bagworms, goblin hand-made mud noodles, minotaur cream puffs, cat demon boutique cat poop coffee, puppet master's freshly mixed nut salad, and high-end delicacies such as Golden Demon Envoy's recommended breakfast (selected mealworms, piranha jelly, succubus kiss, bullwhip vermicelli soup), Yasha grilled wings, charcoal grilled chapters Fish monster tentacles, tree essence juice, etc. I have a dream to open a bookstore in the underground city, which mainly promotes "Friends I Dealt with in Those Years", "Peach Blossoms in front of the Succubus", "The Overbearing President Tauren Falls in Love with Pretty Sheep Noodles", "After spitting at me for a hundred days, she fell in love with me", "Stories that the innocent wage earner and the evil boss have to tell" and so on I have a dream to carry out decoration services in the dungeon, such as providing exquisite reliefs of sinful eyes, dryad-shaped beds containing tree root drawers and fruit lamps. The first ten buyers will also receive spider silk mosquito nets, blue octopus tables and matching tentacle stools (3-4 according to the number of family members), faucet bedside lamps, giant elf beast style bedside tables, everything. There is nothing you can't think of, nothing we can't do I have a dream to develop a breeding base in the underground city, plant some abyssal piranha, giant mealworms, some edible minotaurs, and cultivate some monster birds to be responsible for placing orders, to achieve the goal of self-sufficiency The above is the new advertisement of Pants, come and join our alliance! !

Strictly speaking, I am a poor person. There are really very few people who write about dungeons now. I can only vote for recommendations and give a small reward. The writing is really good. The writing, plot, and plot advancement are all very sophisticated. Come on! Please keep writing

Instead of having a bunch of female characters that are of no use to dungeon players in conquering the underground world, why not write more sandbox players?

There is a dungeon under the mountain. The city owner is a sinister and naughty one. He is a demon silver. One day he bought an abandoned city and activated the core of the dungeon. From then on, he started a happy construction path~ Oh cute Goblins~ They are human players from another world~ They always talk about strange things that they can't understand~ They don't want to be paid to work happily~ Oh cute goblins~ They like dungeons~ They always harass the blacksmith instructor and always say the same thing~ They don't want magic stones to lie down everywhere~

It's a very interesting novel, but I would like to make a few suggestions. First, you can accept some aborigines, sign a soul contract, and tell them some settings of the other world, so that the aborigines can send out tasks, and you can also let them set their own favorability to protect them from harassment by players. Secondly, I think the equipment should not be auctioned, or players should be allowed to auction it themselves. They only provide auction occasions and charge auction fees. Otherwise, if there are too many people in the later period, they will not be able to auction it, and if you auction the equipment that players themselves have acquired, players will definitely feel uncomfortable. As for currency, it is impossible to keep players away from stores forever, so it is better for the protagonist to set up a store in the territory, buy goods from the business alliance, and set up the store prices yourself. Even if the player comes into contact with magic crystals in the later stage, just set the exchange ratio of metal currency and magic crystals. After all, as a lord, you cannot let players work voluntarily forever, but you can exploit a lot. All you need is reputation, favor, and decorations specially made for the territory. Regarding life skills, the author can ask people to publish tasks to teach players life skills, which allows players to work for free and also mobilizes their enthusiasm for learning life skills. Although the equipment created by players will be used by themselves at the beginning, the equipment that is not used later or made after practicing skills can not only be sold to the lord's store. It is equivalent to the lord only needing some copper coins to get so many blacksmiths and rune masters, and they can do it for free through tasks, as long as they have some favorability and reputation Final level At the core of the castle, it should be equivalent to an artificial intelligence supercomputer, and since it can instantly recover the player's consciousness, he can basically monitor the player in real time, so he can improve the player's proficiency. Otherwise, the player cannot really learn for a year or two. The core only needs the core to send out something in their consciousness, such as: "You feel that the forging has reached a critical moment, and you hit the middle of the sword hilt with more strength." Later, the player can make a difference in combat and forging, and even if he doesn't like it, he can turn off the sound reminder. Actually, players are just tool people at the core of the castle O(≧∇≦)O

Passersby, coming from the mechanic's place, looked at dozens of pictures. The themes and backgrounds are quite big, but the dungeon framework of gamers limits the unfolding of the plot. Whether it is the use of players or the exploitation of NPCs, they are all poisonous points. After all, it has been deceiving players, restricting their development, and using players to build dungeons. This series of operations cannot last long. It is estimated that it will lack stamina in the later stages of writing.

As a full-subscriber, I would like to express my thoughts. The chapter says there is a word limit, so I will express my thoughts here. These pictures of Yucha are quite uncomfortable to watch. On the one hand, the girl is hurt by online violence, and on the other hand, the characters of Arthur and Zhuo Genbao. To put it simply, they are not responsible. I think the best way to deal with the Yucha incident at present is to let Yucha launch the dispute between this group of players, farming and raising flowers and medicine with the little goblins. After these few actions of Arthur, his character has basically been ruined. The perpetrator of this online public opinion is the enemy union, which is also the most damnable, and the accomplice is Arthur. Arthur did not clarify when public opinion was fermenting, which led to further fermentation of public opinion, and there were problems with his three views. Of course, from their standpoint, he did the right thing, and he was not legally responsible, but I think they are no longer suitable for a simple girl like He Yucha. We were entangled together. As a grown man, I feel that if a girl and I are more playful and get along better, and someone spreads a scandal, I, the person involved, should come out to clarify the scandal as soon as possible, instead of trying to make up for my female friend after the damage has been caused. It doesn't matter that he continues to be the leader among the players, but it is very disgusting to get entangled with Yucha again. When Yucha needed help the most, when the matter could have been resolved, he did not stand up when the injury was not a fait accompli. The remedial measures he took afterwards were just like that. Punishing the perpetrator did not mean comforting the victim. The so-called revenge was out of breath, and the injury had become a fact. Yucha's injury was not really comforted. I hope that the little goblin can interact with Yucha in the future. Arthur should go away and work as a tool man to clear up wasteland. I think a perfect succubus girl is very suitable for him. I don't think the interaction with Yucha will be appropriate in the future, and it may also affect the perception of this good book. In addition, there is Zhuogenbao. Although he himself is quite innocent, if he likes Yucha and does not take any action, maybe the author has marginalized him, but he can only be regarded as an ordinary friend. Yucha's best friend is still a little goblin. I really want to see Julijuqi [fn =4] In my opinion, Arthur doesn't need to be cleansed. His character has been defined in these few photos. I want to use this incident to say that he deserves death. He has nothing wrong himself. The name of a criminal cannot be pinned on his head. It's just that we can't have close friendship with this kind of person. In short, it is still the same sentence. As ordinary friends, strangers, and business partners, it is understandable and understandable not to tell the truth in order to protect one's reputation. But if you treat the person you like, true love, and you are not even willing to bear this price, and think that punishing the perpetrator is to protect the victim, I can only say to this kind of person, your cuckold is really beautiful. I hope that Mr. Lanbai can read this paragraph of mine, and that your book will become more and more popular. I also hope that all book friends can find a responsible partner who can save you under the colorful auspicious clouds when you need help the most.

It's a very good book. The opening is very interesting and innovative. It really made me laugh to death. Until I saw the heroine (?) Appear later... I was really shocked... There must be something strange in that description! Originally, I didn't care much about the male protagonist's identity, but as soon as she appeared on the scene, she immediately turned the funny article into a who-knows-what article? I feel that the author's writing is very interesting, but the problem with the characters is very big... I have read more than three hundred chapters, but the image of the characters has not yet been established. I know that Lao Xia is very stingy and a high-ranking devil. What about his other qualities? What about other characters? Gone? Forget about other players, they are basically tool people. I didn't realize this until the character Li Luo appeared. She failed to arouse the curiosity about Lao Xia's identity, and it only made me feel that something strange was mixed into the funny article. I still prefer to watch sand sculpture players. Please Lao Xia, please be nice to the poor players! Are you a devil? Yes, a superior demon.

It's very interesting. I'll give you five hundred coins.

Laughing until my stomach hurts. Come on, author. It's nice to look back at how we used to be addicted to games.

From the beginning of this book to the present, I feel that it is gradually losing the fun and excitement that I had when I first read this book. I thought about the reasons carefully, and on the basis of understanding the difficulty of the author's coding, I sincerely expressed some of my own opinions. If there is any bias, I hope you can correct me. The main reason why the feeling of pleasure has faded at present is "slowness" 1. From beginning to end, Lao Xia was crazy about showing off. But after more than two hundred chapters, I only know about Lao Xia Zeitiao, and there are many stories from the past. Demons have an unusual view of right and wrong. But I still don't know what exactly Lao Xia wants to do, to unify the underground? Counterattack on heaven? Unblock yourself or not? Neither the overt nor the hidden line understands what motivates Lao Xia to persist in the construction of the dungeon... Why does he do this? Why not do that? Seriously, I'm confused and I kind of want to know, so can you at least reveal it a little bit? 2. Let's not mention the long-term goal plan of the protagonist. The short-term goal is guided by the update of the game version, which is still OK. But I am still confused, what are you trying to do, and for what purpose? There are reasons for farming. The long-term is unknown, and the short-term depends on external emergencies... Maybe the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. But I can't stand it anymore_(´ཀ`∠)_ I feel like the rhythm of the book has been a bit messed up since the second test. It feels like the drums are beating in the east and ringing in the west. I hope I can get my feelings back in the future. Come on, I will continue to subscribe. As long as you let Lao Xia show off more

The book still has a lot of bugs. Judging from the current stage of development, it is impossible to achieve the later stage as mentioned in the book. I think the model of this book should still follow the route of elite players. A local tyrant uses money or other benefits in the real world to make passerby players carry weights for construction and receive rewards for providing the tycoon. In this way, passer-by players will have the most fundamental motivation to continue playing, that is, to feed back reality through the game and benefit real life. (This game cannot use plug-ins, and the studio cannot open more accounts to earn gold. It is recommended that the author go to B station to watch Mango Ice OL Up's video about online game narratives) And because the holographic full simulation of this pseudo-game will make the rich more addicted, the demand for basic supplies will be greatly increased. In the later stage, there is no need to use gold coins to make money, and you can directly use magic stones to change races, revive, and other core needs. Players are born to be on the side of the lord, and the interests of the lord are directly linked to the players. After all, the bosses are the ones who have the monopoly

Such a talented person would not be able to serve his country as a diplomat. Just shrink here and be a small author? (Funny)

I really like this unique type of dungeon farming~~Supported by all orders! ! ! 🤭🤭🤭

There is no need to make some messy things such as animations, movies and TV shows. It is too dramatic, and it feels like the number of words is too low, and it is boring. The dungeon elements are just the dungeon elements. Is it necessary to engage in dungeon entertainment and film with actors from other worlds?

Dungeon is finally on the shelves ~ Spread flowers 🌸 What attracts me to this article is that it does not follow the routine, the jokes, the very unique character design, the silly readers (crossed out), and the daily py (crossed out). In short, it is interesting. I hope that we can continue to maintain our advantages in the future, stay true to our original aspirations, and write a great chapter in underground city construction together (?). As long as you make me laugh, I will give you all the tickets (⑉°з°)-♡

I~I can't do it~no! Can't! Not allowed there! I really didn't order anymore. . . .

The king of selling py comes here because of his reputation...

This dungeon is much more interesting than I thought, thumbs up 😍

In fact, this book is indeed not as popular as it was at the beginning. At present, both monthly tickets and recommendations are much less. Many people say that "it has been boring recently" and "it will not be fun in the future". In fact, these are very subjective feelings. I personally feel that the rhythm is not good, but it is getting better recently. The big difference between old authors and newer authors is not the writing style (most online writers don't bother with writing style and don't have the time), but the rhythm. Readers are like picky eaters. Most of the loyal readers of a book have similar tastes, but the tastes they need to read all the way are not exactly the same. Looking at the same cool spot for a long time will make you numb. For example, Umekawa Kuko's report and the update log of each minor version. Players like to move rags, and forget about it once or twice. If it happens too many times, it will naturally become boring. Some settings are difficult to describe, so I just mention them in one sentence. For example, I feel very good when Blue can help resurrect and liberate the top students recently. People will not worry about this type if they struggle with the settings. Others include the amount of magic power used. These things will become darker as they are drawn, and should not be too thin. The following are just my personal thoughts. I feel that the section of Winterfell was not well written. The battle with wild monsters in the forest is a bit repetitive, and the setting is a bit confusing. Winterfell originally felt quite high-end, but it was captured in an instant. Readers are not from the player's perspective, so they cannot feel this kind of excitement. There should be a better way to deal with it. Some other honey operations such as Li Luo's character design, Yu Cha's Shenyin (pseudo) hope there will be some explanations later. In terms of update speed, I personally hope that quality > speed (although the essence of online writing is that quantity is greater than quality). After all, blue and white, you probably can't improve your speed (loudly). It's best to have a fixed update time. If you have something to do, take a leave of absence. It's best if the funny daily genre can become readers' daily life, and it doesn't need to be brewed to be enjoyable like Infinite Streaming. But the premise is that it needs to be updated and stable, and you have to eat enough no matter how full you are. (Although I am a fattener) The other thing is that this book is still better than many other books now. Don't be scared off by yourself, I feel there is still a lot of room, come on~

I have followed this book from the very beginning, and witnessed the glory of the first order exceeding 10,000, and then witnessed how it continued to decline from the best-seller list. This chapter said that it went from thousands to hundreds to tens, and finally, the monthly subscription for half a month is only 800+. Similarly, I have exhausted my patience and am ready to abandon the book. It's time to get together and part ways. How to put it, in fact, the plot is not broken, but the author takes it too much for granted. The starting point is not your original customer, and the otaku flavor is not that strong. The plot that is too otaku-oriented once or twice is enough. If there are too many, everyone will be bored. For example, some stores also have characters named, which was interesting at first, as the octopus pills will definitely lead to death in the hospital, but as similar low-IQ titles appear more often, people will gradually start to resent them, feeling like they are being treated as mentally retarded. There is also the protagonist's exploitation of the characters. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist gets all the benefits. It's okay to be a white wolf once or twice, but you keep exploiting the characters (such as Goudan Xueba). To put it bluntly, it is deception. Readers will naturally feel uncomfortable after reading too much. That's pretty much it, it's easy to get together and part ways, some of the previous plots are quite good.

A long time ago, under the light of Lagrange, there were several cities: the two brother cities of ordinary differential square city and partial differential square city, as well as mathematical equations and random crossing cities. Several streams flow out of these cities, the more famous ones are: Ke River, Mathematics River, Functional River, Regression River, Time Series River, etc. Some of the streams and tributaries converged together to form three major rivers: the Analytic River, the Differential River, and the Riemannian River. There is an ancient Heisenberg by the river, where mother and son Heiho live, wearing Debro suits, Luther suits, and Mendele suits so that they will not be harassed by Kele mosquitoes or bitten by Schrodinger's crocodile in the river. There are Niu Dun and Doyle Dunes on both sides of the castle entrance, and Pauling is on the way out. There are many trees in Pauling: there are higher generation trees, abstract generation trees, linear generation trees, real variable function trees, complex variable function trees, numerical generation trees, etc. There are also level trees that are full of Fouriers and full of Van der flowers... People specially put many covered (roughly) barrels and high barrels beside these trees, which are used to put corpses, because, There are too many people hanging on it, too many... After their death, these people were buried in micro-graves. Behind the graves is a vast McLaughlin. There is a Fermat in the forest. It likes to drink water from Kexi. There are epsilon nets made of high wire in the stream, and sometimes secondary leftover fish can be caught. Later, Fensler changed the course of several rivers, and the rivers could not be adjusted at the same time. Engineer Li Qun had to differentiate the manifold and adjust the rivers to separate streams. After several rivers were divided into brooks, the water volume increased greatly, and even building a test crossing had no effect. Many people were still killed, and even the non-exchange generation trees were full, so they had to be thrown into the power system bucket. Some people don't want to hang on a tree and simply invest in numerical simulation (near). As a result, people who jumped into the well discovered that there were two types of turtles: linear turtles and nonlinear turtles living underground: the former is the most common, simple linear turtles and multivariate linear turtles, both of which like to eat the smallest two oranges. Kexi passes through Bengcheng City, Xiangyang County and Ji County. The roofs of the houses here are all covered with Galois, and people's staple food is infinitesimal grain. There is a Taoist temple next to Ji County called Xingxingwuguan. There are many Taoist priests in Xingxianwuguan called Duojiangshi. The Taoist priests are two, also called Erxiangshi. There is a temple next to Xingwu Temple called Xiang Temple. The elder is called Manzhi, who forms a formation to guard a pagoda. One day, the Erxiang Master came to the gym with a Markov chain. Manzhi said: "Zhengding! Zhengding! My level is too low. I would like to ask for peace with Zheng Tai. Do you agree with me?" The Erxiang Master exclaimed: "It's really worth it!" He immediately retreated. Unexpectedly, Manzhi's trust was too low and he did not seek peace with Mrs. Zheng, but wanted Mrs. Zheng to return. The binomial fury expands the standard distribution under the density function tree, and the buli includes two distributions, namely the standard distribution and the square distribution. Seeing this, Manzhi begged for mercy. Binomial shut it into Hilbert space and ordered Banach to guard it. Later, Banach asked him to pay for the meal, and he ate too much after paying for it. As a result, he choked to death under the ginseng tree (Bayesian).

"You must be a devil." "Yes, where is the upper demon."

After voting for five monthly votes, is there any extra information? By the way, what is the use of adding finesse 😅

RT In addition, if you have anything you want to see or like to see, or any interesting jokes, plots, settings, or lines that you encounter in online games or games, you can post them in this thread for Blue and White Chao to test (xi)

Regarding the design of the airship, because it flies in an underground cavity, speed is not important. If it goes too fast, it will easily hit the wall, so the main indicators should be the following three: 1. The armor must be thick, so that it can withstand the most severe beatings (cross out) Guaranteed Survivability in battle; 2. There must be more turrets, so as to comply with the teachings of the Multi-turret Cult (cross out) to ensure the density of firepower; 3. The gun barrel must be thick, so as to ensure a large yield of art (cross out) to ensure deterrence. At the same time, in view of the actual use of bladder bombs 💣 by the boss of Hemp Rope Science and Technology on the battlefield, it is recommended to add a few ejection ports for ejecting Goblin bladder bombs 💣Soldiers~ Goblin Bladder Bombs 💣Soldiers: It is a disposable weapon. It carries a glider on its back and is strapped with bladder bombs 💣. It glides down from high altitude to carry out precision-guided strikes on targets.

As the title of this post indicates, it is for suggestions, complaints, finding loopholes, etc. I will reply to each floor as soon as possible.