The Rise of the Heir

It should be said that this book is generally good, it is written in detail, relatively coherent, the characters have distinct personalities, and there is no particularly intellectually depressing description. The only thing that feels a bit regretful is that the protagonist traveled through time and knew that the expedition against Liao would fail, so why didn't he do anything to stop or remedy it? In addition, when the protagonist was exterminating bandits, the new weapons showed great power. Later, the Northern Expedition did not use new troops or even new weapons. It does not make sense logically.

I am particularly disgusted with these ancient novels, interspersed with modern technology, even if they are briefly explained, most of them are explained, and they are made into nondescript psychology, right? I'm here to read novels, not to learn the popular science that I usually know, the novels about four different things.

Personal opinion: Generally speaking, the author's writing style is quite good, and he has a deep literary foundation. However, there are too many narrations that make up for the number, which is also a demerit. It can be scored as 8.8 Out of 10. It is suitable for old bookworms to watch and savor, but not suitable for novices.

This is a piece of psychology mixed with fictional history, just like a TV show inserted into an advertisement.

I have already written about how I have cannons and guns, but I encountered a war in another country. I also wrote about what to do. I am so scared. What should I do? It is so scary. This IQ is also scary😱

On average, one and a half of the three chapters are science popularization. The author just makes up the number of words and intersperses variously. The content of one chapter is finished in the first half of the chapter. When the second half of the chapter cannot be written to pave the way for the next chapter, the science popularization will start, or the scene will be changed directly, and it will be used as a change of scene in a TV series? One scene jumps suddenly to another, with no beginning or end at all. There is no way to connect the previous ones or to set up the following ones. Anyway, it's just ramble on here and there and mention the deeds of various dynasties. These deeds can be mentioned in one stroke. What needs to be written Are you sure you want to popularize science? Maybe these deeds are what you suddenly thought of and then wrote them out of emotion, but this does not mean that people who read them want to read them. You can write about machinations, military affairs, agriculture, and intrigues. Everything you write has a little bit of it. , But it's really just a little bit, and in the end, the novel is completely different. The author can really read more about how other people write novels. You can read more about various novels to learn how the content connects the previous and the following, and how to write to better express the meaning and content you want to express. Only when you understand what you want to express will people know that you deliberately left doubts before moving to the next scene, instead of making people feel that they suddenly transferred to another scene before the words were finished. That's it.

You can read it after skipping all the technology chapters. What I read was ancient strategy novels. Modern technology was everywhere, so I might as well just read urban novels. To sum it up, it's a three-part novel! I wrote three kinds of nondescript novels based on ancient politics + modern technology + business. After skipping chapters, it doesn't seem that there are too many chapter breaks before you can continue reading.

Rambling here and there, explaining a lot of words like a paper, and constantly quoting the information found to show that the protagonist is awesome

Start with a paragraph, then give an example in the middle, and then end it. It's all over the place, boring.

There is not a lot of nonsense, most of it is popular science, popular science