A Dream Called Football

This is a very toxic start. There is a written test to select youth training players, and they have to use physics to explain free kicks. Don't you know that most players are poor students?

I hope I won't have a disgusting cousin as my agent like the last football novel, and he has too many roles. I'll keep this one for now.

The protagonist has too little ink, and the portrayal is not clear enough to lack a sense of substitution. The supporting characters related to the protagonist appear to be very tool-like, whether it is the agent, wife, parents, or Raven, lacking reasonable foreshadowing and necessary follow-up description. After reading the whole article, it feels like it is a dream of Li Qiao. There is no rebirth, just a dream.

I don't like two-parters, so I watched it with just the main character, and I had to bring a friend with me, so I can probably guess what it means. It should be the two who lead the national team to win the World Cup!

Li Qiao is definitely with Lorinda

Now that I see it, I feel like I don't want to read a novel, it's like reading a news report, you know. There is no detailed description of the game scene, and there is no painting of the protagonist playing football. I just felt like I was watching a report of a game.

Without a golden finger, how can one break through? You don't have talent, you don't have any connections, and you don't know how to make money to support yourself. How can you be gifted after just a few runs? I didn't see much of it. When teenagers were selected, the head coach followed me and kept an eye on everything. I thought he was a genius.

It's not that you, the author, don't write well, but I would like to give you some suggestions from my personal perspective. First of all, the opponents in the Champions League are different from the historical ones, and then adding trouble to the protagonist out of thin air will definitely make some readers unhappy. In my opinion, playing against Milan is redundant. This kind of "suspense" is very boring. If you don't want the protagonist and Mourinho to win the Champions League this season, then that's a different story. Otherwise, if you make the protagonist have more difficulties and then let him come back and win in the end, it will make people feel routine and boring, and it is better to just skip it. In addition, such things as coming back after falling behind by a big score are rare after all. I hope the author can control the number of times.

It's a bit uncomfortable for foreigners to call the protagonist by his full name instead of his surname, because all the books I read before were like this...

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