A Dream Called Football

This opening is awful! Selecting youth players involves a written exam, and they're expected to explain free kicks using physics? Don't they know most players are academically weak?

Hopefully, it won't be like the last football novel where they had a disgusting cousin as the agent, and he had too much screen time. I'll put this one on hold for now.

The protagonist is underdeveloped and lacks vivid characterization, making it difficult to immerse the character. Supporting characters, including the agent, wife, parents, and Raven, feel like mere plot devices, lacking proper setup and necessary follow-up development. After reading the whole story, it felt like Li Qiao was just having a dream. She wasn't reborn; she was just having a dream.

I don't like duos; I only watch shows with the main characters, and I even brought a friend along. I can roughly guess what it means. It's probably about those two leading their national team to victory in the World Cup!

Li Qiao is definitely with Lorlinda.

At this point, I don't feel like reading a novel anymore; it feels more like watching a news report, you know? There are no detailed descriptions of the match scenes, nor any illustrations of the protagonists playing football. It just feels like I'm watching a news report about a match.

Without a magic touch, how can you break through? No talent, no connections, and no money to support yourself—just a few runs and you think you're a prodigy? I didn't really see it. They drafted some teenagers, the head coach just followed them around like they were nothing, and they thought they were some kind of genius.

It's not that the author's writing is bad, but I'd like to offer a few suggestions from my personal perspective. Firstly, the Champions League opponent is different from historical ones, and creating unnecessary trouble for the protagonist will definitely annoy some readers. In my opinion, the match against Milan is superfluous; this kind of "suspense" is uninteresting.

It feels a bit strange that foreigners call the main character by their full name instead of their surname, because that's how it's always been in the books I've read before...

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