The Snow and Ice All-Rounder

The topic is good, but the writing is rubbish! Which school would expel a fifteen-year-old student just because he had a quarrel with a teacher? Aren't you afraid of being hacked to death by your parents when you go out?

How should I put it, sports novels should be about competition. There is no need to write about teachers and monitors at the beginning. I have been studying for so many years and I have never encountered any unfairness or frame-up in novels.

It's too poisonous, it's too poisonous I just ran away Figure skating is a sport that pursues beauty, but I really can't see any beauty in the protagonist The setting is also very strange, the hatred value, help, so low

I want to read an article about ice and snow sports, but the author's primary school student writing style is poisonous. The hatred value is a failure. There is no normal person in the whole article. They all seem to have been lowered by the author. They all hate the protagonist, and the protagonist is just a loser.

1. Don't rely on the author's golden fingers for assistance. 2. Since the opening chapter is about figure skating, it should be centered on him. 3. Other projects can assist, but the schedule must be arranged well. Don't overlap. This makes the protagonist very tired, and he is not a god. 4. The emotional line must be stable. There are too many stud books now. Don't collapse 5. Some activities can be added to the story to get to know people in or outside the circle (sports circle) 6. You must have endorsements, but don't be too high-minded at first. 7. But provide some tips or guidance to help teammates and improve their skills a little (limited, not too much.). In this way, the rise of this project will not have too many side projects. You can start new projects, otherwise the protagonist will die of exhaustion. I'll think of this much first, and I'll mention it later.

I read a lot of praises in the book reviews, but I don't know what else is commendable about this book besides its creativity. The characters are dry, the protagonist is just pretentious, the villains and supporting characters are villains for the sake of villains, the language is childish and ridiculous, and the emotional intelligence of the characters in the book is below the passing level. The priority of the plot does not matter whether 9 of the 10 chapters are urban campus plots or the old-fashioned campus slap-in-the-face plots from a few years ago. There is also a problem with the protagonist's setting. The only way to improve his abilities is through pretentiousness, annoying people and a few tasks. If you name this kind of thing "Figure Skating is the Strongest Pretender and Face-Slap King", I won't even click on it. It's a good subject in vain.

Let me tell you my personal thoughts. First of all, the subject matter is rare, and I was attracted to it by the name. At first glance, I felt that the protagonist was a little childish, the plot was a bit cliche, and the slaps in the face were too blunt to give people a sense of empathy. When I saw the part about kneeling, I really couldn't resist. I feel like Director Zhuang was really poisoned. He even knelt down to a student. I'm sorry for disturbing you. I hope the author writes better and better. I think this genre in sports is pretty good.

I just want to say one thing... I'm really not happy about it... The setting of Goldfinger is too... Der...

It's too poisonous and I can't hold it anymore. The characters in it have water in their heads. The trials are shady. The staff members yelled in black faces after being provoked by the protagonist. The school monitor thoughtlessly said in public that the protagonist was not qualified to compete for Olympic gold medals. Is this what a Chinese would say to a 15-year-old athlete? Even if the person who said this is still 15 years old, he really has no IQ. He is the class monitor and he is sarcastic loudly in public. I want to report it

It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity that it was ruined by him.