Pirate Navy Thunder God

Your protagonist has a twisted personality and perverted thoughts. Why does he want to become a navy? As a pirate, it's okay to write a hero like Blackbeard, but for such a villainous person, you want to write him as a navy? Can't stand it

After reading 200 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The development of the plot and the writing style of these authors are all good. But in terms of shaping the protagonist, I can only say that I cannot accept it. The character of the protagonist makes me think that the protagonist is mentally ill and has a split personality. And private goods have too much negative energy.

There are indeed some problems with this book, but after seeing more than 600 chapters, I can at least accept it, but it is a bit alienating. I can understand the feeling of the original party, after all, I am too. After all, this book is a fan work, so most of the readers are fans of the original work. However, it is precisely because it is a fan work that there is no need to follow the original work. Otherwise, everyone can just go back and read the original work. What kind of fan work is it? As a reader who spends money to read books, I personally feel that it is actually okay for the author to write this way. There is no doubt that the adaptation will definitely arouse the reaction of the original party. But I think the biggest problem of the book is itself. From the first chapter to more than 600 chapters, the biggest feeling for me is the protagonist himself. It is acceptable to foreshadow the potential fruit in the early stage to quickly bring the protagonist into the army to follow the plot. However, in order to improve the protagonist's strength, the statement of potential fruit is postponed until the battle power soars later and cannot be filled back. If the fruit does not exist, it is better not to write it in the first place. This is one of the bugs. In fact, the former is a trivial matter, but later on the problem arises when the protagonist is specially given the immortal lieutenant general buff. The purpose of immortality is to let the protagonist fight against the four emperors before they have reached the battle strength of the four emperors. This is acceptable, but immortality does not mean that he is not disabled or injured. Well, he should have at least rested for half a year and a year after fighting a red-haired man and not being beaten to death, and then use this as his training time so that he can deal with the problem of soaring combat power. But later, the aunt and the white beard were beaten back and he was not dead, but he was injured at least, but the result was nothing. This kind of effect is not as good as giving the protagonist invincibility directly. It is uncomfortable. This also makes me watch the plot of "The War on the Top" later. I feel that it is so uncomfortable for the protagonist to pretend to be 13. After Whitebeard dies, Wushang is standing there pretending to be 13. You said that you should fight with Whitebeard in a duel and then kill alone, and then describe how good it is to be the best in the world in solo kills and then pretend to be 13. The result is to write a five-on-one to force Whitebeard to be the world's number one, but he was still killed later. So what the hell? It looks weird. The author added this immortality and invulnerability buff to the protagonist, and the recovery buff after being injured for a few days is the biggest problem in my opinion. This is also the place where I feel most disconnected.

I would like to recommend a One Piece fan theme that I think is good Mumu Fruit 😁, the son of Immu, the Vice Admiral of the Navy (the one who makes soy sauce), Shirahoshi's husband, (why? Because Im learned about Shirahoshi's ability after the protagonist discovered it). Following the path of Kizaru and Aokiji, the non-returning naval officer sleeps on a "wooden boat" and wanders with the waves all year round (actually developing his abilities). He likes a child and once rescued the young Robin. After the Justice Island, the protagonist replaces the Aokidan group to destroy the Straw Hats (doesn't this need an explanation? Have you watched Naruto?) And then has a daughter with Shirahoshi. Finally, I would like to say that the protagonist's name is a no-brainer. He came up with it after being beaten by Warring States and Garp, (Big Wood Iron Ape), and then secretly learned Tenghu's ultimate move (Big Wood Planet). A large wooden pillar with armed colors fell from the sky. By the way, the author can attack Robin 😃 but I'm leaving a way 😃

The most annoying thing is meeting Garp as soon as you get started. Damn, if Garp doesn't exist at the beginning, it's like he's not the protagonist. I've seen it all🤮. Why is the sea as small as the protagonist's bathtub in the novel? I can see whoever I want.

No, no wonder you don't have a monthly pass. What you write is really hard to read.

This novel can sharpen your Taoist heart, which has been broken several times.

It's so written that I can't stand it anymore. It's only been a few years since I dared to fight Shanks, and he's not dead yet. I can't understand the plot development and it feels like the writing is a bit like two people. I still feel a little confused when I read it earlier.

The first reason I read this book was that it was about pirates. The second reason was that the protagonist held a halberd instead of a knife or fist. The third reason was that there were no golden fingers. Look at the Infinity Gauntlet. It was too open and I was not in the mood to read the rest of it.

The plot of the first ten chapters is too fast, and it's all coincidence

I was attracted to this book by the Thunder Fruit, and I couldn't stand it until chapter 36. The plot is slow, too bland, and has no special attraction. Garp asked the protagonist what his dream is? It's too boring for the protagonist to directly say "not willing to settle for the ordinary". If you don't rebel through time travel, what else is there to do?

I just rewarded the author with a reward of 500 and a bottle of drink. I would like the author to add some introduction when writing, so that it can be convenient for those of us who have never watched One Piece.

I flipped through the table of contents... The name of the new volume... Did you listen to the big song 2333?

I don't like the character of the protagonist, and I think it deviates from the theme of the jump comic. The protagonist's strength is too exaggerated. He can transform from an ordinary person to a being who escapes from the four emperors in one year, and the infinite healing is too buggy. I can't see it even if I try hard. . In addition, the protagonist feels a little twisted, crazy or perverted. . Unification does not have to be this way. . . Where is the friendship? Let's not talk about victory. I feel that the protagonist was basically crushed without any brains and could not realize the victory.

Characteristics of Thunder Fruit: 1. Completely ignore physical attacks 2. Possess the ability to move in straight and curved directions at lightning speed 3. Thunder's attacks are the most destructive, violent and highly penetrating. 4. Can control the magnetic field, gravity and repulsion can also intervene 5. Shock the heart and bring it back to life 6. God's Sanction combined with the magnetic field blessing can bring down thunder from a very long distance. 7. Be able to develop the absolute strongest ultimate moves such as Lei Ying, Wan Lei, etc. 8. It can generate electric heat that far exceeds the heat of lava, and is completely unafraid of the abilities of the three generals. 9. Use thunder and lightning to forge the body + strengthen the body very quickly 10. Lei Metallurgy: Use electric heat to melt metal and then make it into the shape you want. 11. Thunder Shock: Use the supersonic shock wave generated by thunder and lightning to break the air, shaking away all attacks that come close to you. 12. The attack speed is extremely fast, and people are already hit before they can fight back. The physique becomes electric, and physical attacks are ineffective against it. Can release high-voltage current at will to attack. Can teleport at lightning speed. Radio waves can also be used to enhance the range of sight and color. It can be used as spacecraft power and robot power, which is equivalent to the owner having inexhaustible electrical energy. The most powerful thing about the Thunder Fruit is its unparalleled attack power and destructive power. It has absolute air supremacy. It is like the power of heaven, and it is like the gods sending down judgment. It can also create a super powerful Lei Ying/Lei Emperor condensed with thunder, which is more destructive than the Fire Emperor of the Burning Fruit. You can also use a fire fist similar to the Burning Fruit but turn it into a thunder fist, or condense the thunder halberd in the sky, send some barrages, etc.

Why do you feel there are so few book reviewers? Everyone, come and sign. Let me see how many people there are.

Actually. Writing fan fiction shouldn't have too much to do with pig's feet. Mainly using the background of the world where Pig's Foot is to write my own story.

After seeing that the three generals of the navy in the original One Piece novel are all natural ability users, I have always wanted to read a novel in which the protagonist travels through time as a pirate and eats the Thunder Fruit to become the fourth general at the same time as the three generals.

No matter what, Garp saved your life and taught you something, but you want to blackmail Garp through Ace and make him use you. I'm really confused, why doesn't Garp punch you to death? Pig's Feet gives me the feeling of a psychopath who has gained great power. If you want to write dark articles, please be more serious. (Ps: If you have any good fanfics, please recommend (⑉°з°)-♡)

I hope the author will not write a paragraph in which the strength of the elderly should be due to age, because the author said that no old man in One Piece will have a decrease in strength due to age. Zefa should have asthma, and Whitebeard should have an illness, with drips all over his body. . .

Saw Ace there. I know why so many people don't like this novel, mainly because of the character of the protagonist. It's the kind of character that everyone hates. Bullying the weak and fearing the strong, seeing CP0 compromise, give in. At the same time, the protagonist also believes that strong means invincible. You can do whatever you want, be a shark pirate if you want. If I'm strong, I'll kill anyone who doesn't like me. The character of this protagonist is very strange. A moment of iron blood. One moment he is pushy, the next moment he is ungrateful. But the fighting description is pretty good. Remarkable

After reading two chapters, what the hell? Pigfoot said he liked watching One Piece so much in his previous life. As a normal person, his whole personality changed drastically as soon as he found Enero. He even ate the fruit and wanted to kill people. Why didn't you go? What are the real legal restrictions? Pirates have no restrictions. Can a person's psychology change so quickly? Then you write about Mao Haijun, you are really speechless! Since you are writing about the navy, don't write like a pervert. People can be selfish and have their own personalities, but it's boring if you write like a murderer. The book is called the navy, so you can be a casual navy. The first two chapters are poisonous. You also need to understand some psychological knowledge in this book. A normal person will not have such a big psychological change immediately no matter which world he travels to!

There are too many elementary school chicks who were brainwashed by pirates, so that's why this book has so many bad reviews, right? Anyone with any sense would not see the protagonist join the navy and start spitting shit.

They killed Garp, so they immediately persuaded him to quit.

There are many loopholes in this book. First of all, breaking through the limits of the human body actually requires breaking through the mind? With the current stimulation method, theoretically speaking, it is only limited by the fact that the current is not large enough or the cells themselves have reached the upper limit of cell structure strength. It is useless if your mind breaks through. If the mind breaks through and you can become stronger, the philosophers of the pirate world will fly all over the world. Secondly, you can't notice a giant snake hundreds of meters long following your butt. Are you really blind or selectively blind? Furthermore, there is almost no development on the Thunder Fruit. It is purely used to strengthen the body. If you want to write a pirate who can punch hard, then why not give it to the animal type or simply not eat the fruit and eat the Thunder Fruit? As a modern person, it is impossible that the brain is not big enough. Even if it cannot be developed, as a Navy with the help of the Science Department, the fruit's ability has not been developed? It's simply a matter of sacrificing the basics for the last. Strengthening the body can be done, but as a natural ability user, the main method is fruits rather than physical skills.

Newbies, don't read this book. It doesn't have Enelu's strong character at all. A person with the strongest natural element goes to practice swordsmanship and just becomes a thunder swordsman. He also gives a bunch of bad names to his moves. It's better to use Enelu's name, Lei Ying, Wan Lei, God's Sanction. Doesn't it sound good? The most unacceptable thing is that the protagonist seems to be a stupid second-rate, and the dialogue is all nonsense. He is just a mindless and uneducated spiritual young man...

After three chapters to persuade him to quit, the author's setting for the protagonist changed many times in the first three chapters. From the beginning to being a nerd, to killing people and grabbing treasures before time travel (and insisting that he was forced to do so) and going through hundreds of battles, to later being selfish, brutal and ferocious. I was confused when I watched it. Are you sure the latter two types of people will watch anime? I can't even control the character of the protagonist, it's really extremely poisonous.

It feels like the protagonist is a wanton psychopath enslaved by power.

In fact, the Thunder Fruit is the strongest when it develops into the microscopic aspect Wan Lei, Lei Ying, and Lei Shen are basically meaningless. They are all the skills of the clearing soldiers. If the real physical strength is enough, a direct discharge of electricity is still the map cannon of the clearing soldiers The electromagnetic force, electrons, and magnetic fields in the microscopic aspect are the really powerful places. For lethality, there are electromagnetic cannons, positron cannons, and plasma cannons. The penetrating power of the positron cannon is estimated Aunt Ji can't prevent it even with all her efforts. The ultra-high temperature of the plasma cannon is aimed at Kaido. The electromagnetic gun is used to hit ships with accuracy. There are also negative ions for health and disinfection In addition, if I remember correctly, light and electricity are unified in physics. Light waves seem to be electromagnetic waves. In other words, if the Thunder Fruit is developed seriously, it can actually show the characteristics of the Sparkling Fruit. This seems to be even more exaggerated if it is derived.

The beginning of the movie is very toxic. The protagonist's character is like a shitty navy, but he is also a rat navy from Nami's hometown.