Pirate's Golden Griffin

To tell the truth From the time when Allen defected, something was wrong with this book, as if someone else was writing it The various arrangements in the early stage were okay. I should have put some effort into the outline, but in the end, I felt it was a bit rushed. The author should have all the subsequent thoughts in his mind, but the details are not felt. This makes people feel very sudden when reading it. Really This is directly writing what you think, a bit like writing wherever you think, without any foreshadowing, even if you explain what you are going to do next. But that's completely different Now that I've seen the confrontation after the defection, the more I watch, the less interested I am in what follows It's a bit like the second part of Shokuki Not much to say

It might be a bit too much to say that the giants all have brain problems. But basically he is not a wise person. With such stubbornness, does the protagonist think that he can be persuaded just because there is a disaster in the giant village? They will only say yes, and when we decide the winner, we will rescue them. Because this is the glory of the giants. The two giants who had been deceived by the navy and guarded the island for 50 years actually said that there was nothing they could do about it when they heard that Tori and the others were still on the island. It can be seen that the giants are all kind of virtuous. The author's description in the new chapter is too cliché.

The most fearful thing among Pirates fans is to insist on following the plot! There are many fans who have died at this point. It is right to use the advantage of knowing the plot to benefit yourself, but too many authors do not have the ability to turn the advantage of knowing the plot into benefits, but instead become Cheng didn't know that the protagonist insisted on following the plot, and what was even more exaggerated was that he was obviously an enemy of the original character, but because he didn't want to lose the advantage of knowing the plot, he should kill him or not, which was even more embarrassing. He ran to find it. Luffy is obviously an enemy but he insists on letting go. What's even more disgusting is that his identity is set in the navy, which is even more addictive! The corners of his mouth are bleeding! The author's setting for the protagonist is that there is no conflict with Luffy, and he may even be a hidden ally, but I don't want the author to do it for Being related to Luffy, and forcing the protagonist to kneel down and lick Luffy, it was as if I wanted to vomit blood when I saw Luo being completely taken away by Luffy. These are just my personal wishes. The author wishes you that this book will become more and more popular, and you don't have to be angry with the trolls. Come on!

I have always disliked the current big bad world fan fiction, such as time travel, Goldfinger, and Invincible. It is rare to see original and good fiction, and the original ones have a bunch of weird entry points, most of which are poisonous points, which mess up the originally good world view. The original characters are also beyond recognition. It is really disgusting. I really like the entry point of the current plot, Ming Ge's character, and the sex of Ming Ge's family. The character is well drawn and very delicate. I am looking forward to the development of the plot. However, the title of the book makes me feel a little uneasy. If I am invincible or transcend the power system of the pirate world, or the integration is not perfect enough, then such a perfect beginning of the plot will make me feel regretful. I have some thoughts from my brother. I have followed several of Meng Ge's works. Thank you very much for the happiness you bring, and continue to support me.

I have never understood why you wanted to join the navy if you wanted to take revenge. Brother Ming doesn't know you anyway and has no obstacles in your way, so why would you join Brother Ming's family? If you join the navy and then take revenge, that is called enforcing justice; if you join the Mingge family and then take revenge, that is called betrayal. And why do you think Brother Ming can't find out your identity? As long as people want to check, you can't hide anything. He even foolishly ran into the enemy's sight, calling it revenge, but it was seeking death and was a bad thing.

Author, please don't use fantasy beast species. Just ancient species or ordinary animals will be fine. When other birds fly, their arms turn into wings and they can only use their feet. Your gryphon has separate wings to free its limbs. It's already good. Ancient species are fine. Don't use fantasy beast species. Thank you.

I wonder if the eyes on the eagle have something to do with the eagle eye, which is super insightful. The claws on the forelimbs develop into eagle claws, similar to those of Sabo, with super strong armament. The lion evolves into a regal color.

Between Chapter 44 and Chapter 45, the author set the griffon fruit. It has no special abilities. It only has the abilities of a lion and an eagle, such as flying and attack power. I wonder if the griffon fruit does not have these two abilities, so does it deserve to be called a griffon? The key is that the author also set it as a fantasy beast species. What a big joke. My understanding is , the gryphon fruit originally has the two abilities of a lion and an eagle, and the author's setting is that the special abilities are the eagle and the lion. Haha, the author is probably setting the most useless fruit. I don't want this fruit. It is not good to set the ancient species, but the phantom beast species. It is a defeated phantom beast species. The author is really the designer of the defeated phantom beast species.

It's a good book, not too bad. Although it seems to be progressing slowly, its strength is steadily increasing. Anyway, I like it!

The main character's strength ceiling is at the level of the Emperor, Deputy, and Three Disasters. In the original novel, no one with animal-type abilities has ever reached the top. Characters above the general level are either superhuman or natural, and there are very few fantasy beasts.

It is recommended that the author change the fruit ability or re-open a new book, for example, change it to the angel form of the human fruit fruit, which has both strength and phantom beast species. It is very interesting. Author, look at the fics written by others. Those who are not aiming to be the strongest. Author, if you write a weak chicken fruit ability, who will read it? In the end, it wasn't about the halo of the protagonist, so I summed up the reasons for the poor performance of this book.

I find it so exciting to enter the enemy's forces for revenge. You can obviously join the navy system to learn, but if you have to break into the enemy's interior, you may not be able to learn anything and you have to keep hiding yourself. Life is too tiring.

Pirates don't care about anything else. The protagonists are usually of the natural type. Special phantom beast species, superhuman species, and ordinary or ancient species cannot be written in the later stage, because these two species cannot reach the emperor level after awakening. Ming Ge's talent is extremely powerful, but because of the thread fruit, even if he awakens, he will never reach the peak.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not criticize this novel, please forgive me if you are not satisfied.

The author is missing? Should I call the police?

I still feel it's okay. Fans with good grades push all the way to the Yonko, and are finally strong enough to kill a Yonko pirate group by themselves. It's fun all the way... The author's power system in this book is more "realistic" and not too fast and invincible... Quite unique... (∩˃o˂∩)♡

I hope the author can write a Godfather-type pirate fanfic. Something like the One Piece Code is definitely going to be popular. After all, the author already has the writing power

Just started watching, Corazon! Will it die? Or will he become a member of the Pig's Foot Pirates? ! Combatant ~ Baby5 (weapon fruit), ship doctor ~ Luo (surgery fruit), first mate ~ Corazon (silence fruit).

I have just read Chapter 45, and I think the author has a good idea. From the profile description of the character Ming Ge, we can know a few pieces of information. Vice Admiral Tsuru of the Naval Staff once hunted Dover's pirate group all the way until he became a Shichibukai. Very few people know the news that Dover is a Celestial Dragon. It may only be the government and some high-ranking navy officials. Dover became the king of the dark world after he became a Shichibukai, and Dover's strength will not exceed the level of a general candidate. The main reason is that the Thread Fruit limits his upper limit. After all, fruit development in One Piece mainly depends on two points, scientific and cultural knowledge and snake skin thinking. In addition, regarding the protagonist's fruit, I read the book review and it is intentionally set to be an ancient species, but if it is not a fantasy beast species, it seems to be much weaker. After all, the professions related to griffons in World of Warcraft are either a thunder hammer or a wave of flame storms. If it is pure physical damage, it seems too weak. After all, Kaido's fruit ability is related to Long Xiang. In my personal opinion, the main factor that determines whether an animal is a phantom beast is its additional abilities, such as the fire of the phoenix, the vampire's ability to extract life and restore youth, and the impact of the giant Buddha. The Thousand-Year Dragon in the original book is also called a dragon, but it is very different from Kaido's Eastern Dragon. If it is an ancient species, after all, it cannot keep up with the pace of history. Species that are eliminated by the world process, and creatures that cannot evolve with the environment and become extinct, are they too weak?

I feel that the protagonist will never be able to get revenge in this life. He and Doflamingo are so far apart in strength. How come it will take more than ten years to catch up? Ten years later, if your hatred can still be the same as it is now, and you have lived together for more than ten years, and you can still let go, then you are really convinced.

There is something I have always wanted to say. This book should not be called The Golden Griffon. I feel like calling it "Ellen's Diary" is more appropriate.

The ability of the fruit is not reflected at all. The title of your book is Golden Gryphon, and even the gryphon is just flying. Where has the gold gone? If you said you don't want to write about fantasy beast species, then you shouldn't add it. This will make people who read the title of the book disappointed and leave.

I don't think the general is worse than the Yonko. At that level, you can only fight for physical strength and willpower. I feel that it is possible for the general to fight to death of a Yonko in singles.

Although there are no waste fruits, only waste people, Luffy's rubber fruit still showed off. The ability of the Griffin Fruit can develop the abilities of lions and eagles. Lion's roar? (Group attack to clear the mobs) Low-match overlord color and domineering? And the lion is born a king, ruling all beasts (can understand animals' speech)? The physical attributes must be very abnormal. Develop your eyesight to see through the enemy's moves. (Refer to Chopper) Eagle Claw Kung Fu? Break defense? And they say that the eagle will survive the eagle. This animal has a strong will and can resist mind control skills. Generally speaking, it has strong strength, high armor penetration, can fly, has high combat awareness, and has the ability to clear troops without being controlled by confusion. Don't miss out on swordsmanship either. It can fight, resist, and chase people (and run away) perfectly.

The protagonist's fruit is pretty rubbish. Everyone should know in advance when watching it. It's an ancient species and has no special abilities.

The writing is very good. The balance of strength in the book is very good, including the fruitful ideas. It is not overwhelming. Come on.

What is the protagonist's development plan? Are Devil Fruits animal-based?

Homework guy! The protagonist Luffy just needs to be a little taller, don't be too perverted, he's ten years old and 1.8 Meters tall!

The author started to include strange things in the book again. The first one. Drax the Destroyer, from the Marvel Universe (Guardians of the Galaxy)