The God of Death

It's a very good work, I like it very much. The characters are outstanding, the story is reasonable, and the writing is not bad. The only problem may be the lack of communication between Dot and the Zanpakutō. Kubo and others put a lot of effort into this part and Ichigo Kurosaki, but he didn't mention it at all in this work. Will the author still write Bleach fanfics? If it is still written, I will also read it, because I don't really like comprehensive comics and unlimited streaming.

Can this protagonist be used to make soup? He always thinks about who his eldest brother should be with, but how do he know that he is not good with someone else? This kind of mentality can be used to make soup. If it changes, it will change.

The protagonist is very social. When he first met Kotetsu Yuune, he mentioned his elder brother and said some good things, and then lightly matched him and then took the opportunity to occupy the future sister-in-law 😍

I think it's really great after time travel, especially the plot with Sister Hua, it's great

I beg the author to give Sister Hua a good ending!

A love that spans thousands of years. No matter what, I still love the unprecedented villain Yachiru and Unohana Retsu who abandoned the sword.

Author, you are a liar, where is Sister Hua as promised?

It is a very well-written Bleach fanfic, with the author's own understanding and description, especially the light feeling about the living environment described in the article, which is very attractive. It's just a pity that it would be better if it were longer, but it's not enough to read.

How should I put it, even though the protagonist and so on are all "lucky". However, most of the time what people see is their unwavering faith. On the contrary, the various villains or supporting characters have indeed been wavering. Even if you master the plot of the Death God's world, it cannot be played by a person with great talent but a weak heart. From Landa's domineering appearance to the final seal, he was still strong, leaving a very deep impression on people. But even such a person would be surprised by the difference in one household. Similarly, other people have never panicked him. Talent is important, but Lan Da himself is a super genius. For a mixed-up person like the protagonist of this book, I really don't think the plot of this book will be enjoyable without the help of other external forces. But after all, every book is the child of its author. It should express that kind of difference. Personally, I feel indecisive. Novels should have infinite possibilities to be fascinating. When its tone has been set, it loses its infinite possibilities. All I can say is that this tone is not suitable for me. Please don't mind me talking too much. Because I really love Death, I always want to compare it with my own inner world.

Wow, when I saw the protagonist and the girl who had a crush on his elder brother, I felt so estranged. After thinking about it, wouldn't I feel that my wife was my former sister-in-law? Unable to accept it, I had to abandon the book. I'm sorry, the author. . .

Oh my god, author, aren't you going to come back and fill in the missing chapters?

I want to know how you, who has no system, can be better than the characters in the original book. Why should you travel through time?

The author should check the timeline of the God of Death before writing. I feel embarrassed every time I read it.

Sister Hua competes at the top! ! Sister Hua competes at the top! !

Why are there no novels in which the heroine is a virtual character?🤫

Me, what did I see? Sister Jiao! ? ? !

I just looked at it, is this a god of death? What about the exchange of Zanpakutō? Was it eaten by you, or was it made by you? I didn't understand it clearly at first.

Well. How to say it. It was pretty good before time travel. Everyone has their own love

The last sentence of Chapter 3 couldn't help but laugh out loud and make me cry like a pig.

There are too many missing chapters, the writing is a bit immature, and the setting of the protagonist's soul-cutting sword made me a bit confused, so I gave up.

This book is okay, but the author's writing style is lacking.

It was a very unexpected arrangement. You were afraid of the risk and gave up everything, but then jumped back after a while? None of the Konghe siblings have joined the establishment, and there are so many nobles who have not entered the establishment!

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I have to say that it can take advantage of all the shortcomings of male and female writing methods at the same time, but not touch on any of the advantages. It is also very strong to some extent.        ， But if you take a closer look, if it is written by a woman, even if it is a flamboyant, her ability to render emotions is not that bad. The female author's character's behavioral logic is very unclear and artificial, and it looks very sick, and the disease is very abstract. But even if the female author of the female channel is a provocateur, her emotions are exaggerated. The abilities are stronger than this. It's an eccentric Kung Fu style Although the writing is physically and psychologically disgusting, you are still affected by her and your emotions are brought into the character. The mainstream writing method of most male authors or male videos is to make logical supplements to the character's behavior (although this logic may be absurd, wrong, outrageous and abstract) through logic to allow readers to identify with the character's behavior and then substitute it. But this book has succeeded in making the protagonist's behavior neither logically logical enough to make people identify with it, nor capable of rendering enough emotions to force people's emotions into it. It belongs to the righteous Kung Fu, and you can practice all the ungodly Kung Fu. But if you practice the righteous Kung Fu, you will become twisted, and if you practice the ungodly Kung Fu, you will become rigid.

In the first chapter, I couldn't stand it. A time-traveler P's feelings just said that it would be okay to leave the family. He could have left directly. You said, either die or join. Then there is really no choice. The most speechless thing is that I should join for a night to make arrangements for him. Isn't that a bird-like behavior? It's better to just give him a generous plug-in, The queen is chirping.

I didn't understand the ending. Is the protagonist a cartoonist?