With the Demon

Because the story is finished, this book can't be published right now. I thought it would be free to publish, so I can only create a new book. I'll probably upload it during the Qingming Festival holiday. 🤝

I finished reading this novel yesterday. Well, I really like the author's writing style, but I feel like the author probably doesn't have much experience, as they didn't quite grasp the nuances of giving supporting characters much screen time. In a good novel, well-developed supporting characters are crucial. However, in some parts, the supporting characters are given too much screen time.

I truly believe the author will become famous... Even if it's not this book I like it so far. But there's a reason why it's not popular. From a utilitarian perspective, the following reasons are not shortcomings, but simply what I believe the current market demands. The scope is too grand.

I think the Cold Mountain Black Market arc will be written in detail later, right? I have a feeling that the person who is willing to kill for strong liquor will appear in the Youzhou arc. Moreover, it seems that Yuanzhen must have a lot of stories. Could it be that he can't understand the fourth volume because Xiaoman died? I guess the hawthorns from my junior sister's garden will eventually become the hawthorns from my senior brother's garden, right? 🤫

The plot is indeed good, and the descriptions of the powerful figures' methods are quite interesting and enjoyable, with no particularly awkward moments. However, the fight scenes are a bit too bland. I hope the author can add more detail and make the fights more exciting, avoiding excessive violence. Also, the frequent use of modern measurement methods feels strange and slightly uncomfortable.

What do you mean by "completed"? ... Will it still be updated?

This book is of high quality, with a mature writing style, and excellent plot, character development, sentiment, and artistic conception. From a reader's perspective, I hope it achieves good results (so that the author can stay motivated and finish the book 😏).

Some people like to feign sentimentality, and that's what makes a good article.

Wow, he said he was taking a few days off, but he's already finished writing it.

I've only read 20 chapters, which is far too few for a web novel, but I'm still eager to write down my thoughts. At least in my opinion, this is a good book, and I habitually try to find a book as a template, and after thinking about it, I feel the writing style is somewhat similar to *Ever Night*. It's been a long time since I've encountered a story with this kind of writing style.