With the Demon

Because of the completion, this book cannot be published now. I thought it could be distributed for free, so I can only create a new book, which will probably be uploaded during the Qingming Festival holiday 🤝

I finished reading this novel yesterday. How should I put it? I really like the author's writing style, but I feel that the author does not have much experience and is not very precise about the roles given to the supporting characters. In a good novel, it is very important for the supporting characters to be well-rounded. However, there are places where the supporting actors are given too much role. After reading other book reviews, some said that the main character was too weak and was overshadowed by the supporting characters. In fact, this does not have much impact on the halo of the protagonist. As I said before, this article feels very similar to the writing style of "Jiang Ye". The protagonist in the early stages of "Jiang Ye" is also very weak, and it can even be said that he only has combat effectiveness in the middle and later stages. I feel like there is still a problem with the distribution of roles. This is a matter of experience. The more you accumulate, the better you will get. Actually, I have a lot to say, but after thinking about it I let it go. After all, you are not familiar with me, so it would be a bit disrespectful to give suggestions directly. I'll talk about it slowly after I get acquainted with it. However, I suggest you make some improvements to Mao Ni's writing, because the writing style and techniques are really similar to Mao Ni's. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better, don't be too eunuch ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ! ! ! !

I really believe that the author will be popular... Even if it is not this one I like it so far But there is a reason why it is not popular Analyze the reasons from a utilitarian point of view. The following reasons are not shortcomings, but I think the current market needs The layout is too big. Although I believe in the author's writing power, I vaguely feel that it will not be able to finish. With such a large layout (coupled with such a slow speed), it is easy for people to lose patience The characters are too rich and many supporting roles are very vivid. (Comparatively speaking, the protagonist is the least vivid) But the aura of the supporting characters has surpassed that of the protagonist. This has been improved recently. The vividness of the supporting characters is not a shortcoming, but this book does have too much ink about the supporting characters, which does not conform to the aesthetics of today's online literature (but I read it very happily) There are too many branch plots. I remember clearly that there are many chapters that simply describe branch plots. My impression at the time was that the author must not have written many online articles. The description of branch plots is really helpful in reshaping the world view and shaping characters. But... Writing too much does slow down the pace of the whole book But the above three points definitely do not mean that this book is bad, and it is definitely not a shortcoming or a problem. It is just a problem of the market in my opinion. If the author thinks it is wrong, just think of it as my crazy words. The author is happy enough Everyone said it was a tricky book, but I felt a bit like Jian Lai or Xue Zhong... This book is really the book I look forward to seeing updated every day. I hope the author will write better and better. By the way, is there a novel group?

The Hanshan Black Market chapter should be written in detail in the future, right? I always feel that the man who is willing to kill people in exchange for strong drinks will appear in the Youzhou chapter. And it seems that Yuan Zhen should have many stories. Chaohua can't understand the fourth volume. Is it because Sister Xiaoman died? I guess the hawthorns at my junior sister's house will become the hawthorns at my senior brother's house in the future, right? 🤫

The plot is really good, and the description of the big shots' methods is also very interesting, which makes people like it very much. There is nothing particularly embarrassing. But when describing the fighting, it is really a bit too bland. I hope the author can add more details in this aspect, and try to write more excitingly when the killing is not possible. There are always some modern measurement methods that make people feel strange and slightly uncomfortable.

What the hell is this? . . . . Still updated?

The quality of this book is quite high, the writing style is sophisticated, the plot, characterization, feelings, and artistic conception are all very good. From the reader's point of view, I hope it will achieve good results (so that the author can stay motivated and finish the book 😏)

Some people like to be pretentious, this is good writing

Awesome, I was talking about asking for a few days off, but in fact I have already finished the book.

I just read 20 chapters, which is too few for an online article, but I still can't wait to write about my feelings. At least in my opinion, this book is a good book, and I habitually want to find a book as a template. After thinking about it, I feel that the writing style is a bit like Jiang Ye. It's been a long time since I've encountered an article with this style of writing. In the past two years, the trendy writing style has tended to be funny. This kind of writing style that is more serious and not nonsensical is really rare. I hope your results will get better and better.