Ash Wings

I said that I haven't had a successful novel in which there is always a woman next to me. Don't you think it's too cliche? I thought it was pretty good at first, but then the more I watched it, the more I watched it, and it felt so boring.

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Thoughts after reading 100 chapters: As far as the first new book for a newcomer is concerned, it is well written, and the beginning of The Dragon and the Maiden is quite satisfactory. Although there are flaws, the overall smoothness is no problem. When I quickly ran through it in my mind, I couldn't think of any big flaws. As far as what I have seen now, the author has basically achieved the darkness and seriousness he wanted to write. The Abandoned Land chapter is too compact and feels like it doesn't have enough entertainment power. The North Wind chapter has a dark and serious tone, with multiple forces from one to many entering the scene, leaving limited room for fun and refreshing play. So my current feeling is whether it's more serious than more interesting and less interesting. I'm not saying this is bad. It depends more on the individual reader, and I prefer people who are humorous and interesting.

Newcomers writing books must at least ensure that each chapter has at least 2,000 words of double updates every day in the first few months. Otherwise, it will be difficult for you to improve your grades without recommendations from editors.

To be honest, I think I am a normal person. So I only followed the first few books with normal brain circuits. And the result is one, one, one! The works are all tm tj. What does this mean? Is there something wrong with my brain circuitry, or is there something wrong with the brain circuitry of people who are angry when reading? As early as five years ago, I complained: In addition to cheating on the Internet, there is no limit to the stupidity, right? The writing of each so-called boss is as visual as a country man with his afro hair cut and blow-dried! Nausea! This book, as well as Qi Qi's book, Bardic Assassination Records, are rare books that have the feel of a literary work. Except for Qiqi's persistence, it is now popular. Many were tepid and eventually died! Get rid of! Can't the brain circuitry at seven o'clock be normal? !

Dear bosses who passed by, would you like to add it to your favorites or give me a recommendation vote? Please be kind to this newbie like me_(:з∠)_

I came to learn about writing by reading excellent novels. Summarize your experience and thoughts after reading this book. Although the setting of the dragon protagonist is not a major innovation, it is still unique. Especially the opening image setting gives people curiosity and desire to explore from the beginning. The chapter with the previous generation is very well written, with a complete explanation of emotions and personality. It not only reveals and improves the protagonist's setting, but also leads to more fascinating suspense. Especially in the part where the two generations from the past to the present are combined, the scene shots change very smoothly, and the changes in color, shape and other attributes create a strong sense of the picture. Furthermore, important props are naturally introduced (is this considered a tribute to Prince of Persia?). It can be said to be the best chapter in the book. Later, the plot advanced to the northern chapter. Although the author's efforts in grasping the rhythm can be found very obvious, the runaway feeling of the plot still lingers. From the very beginning, the protagonist has had no connection with the main plane for thousands of years. As soon as he arrives in the north, he just catches up with a big event. There is no other explanation for this except "coincidence". Morrowind is an auspicious person and a prophet, and his contact with the protagonist is full of a sense of destiny (maybe the setting is driven by destiny?). To sum up, the development of the plot is often accompanied by deus ex machina, just like a table of stir-fried dishes with crazy ingredients. The climax keeps coming and going, but the sense of tearing is very serious. In terms of details, it can be felt that the author has worked very hard to portray each character vividly, but due to the problems mentioned above, there is basically no buffer room for the addition of character settings, so it is forced to evolve into a situation where the author desperately piles up settings, and the reader is confused and memorizes each setting into his mind, which is like a cram-feeding education with no foundation and rapid expansion. Combining the above two aspects, the overall grand and empty historical perception has become a very unavoidable result. But if we turn our attention back to the protagonist again, we can think that the setting and character description of the protagonist are one of the most anticipated aspects of this book. The character creation is very distinct, and the pretentiousness is just right. It is a successful character creation. Overall, whether it is positive or negative, it is very profitable. I would like to thank the author for his hard work. I wish his writing skills will improve day by day and his performance will be great.

Reciting this book aloud can effectively judge a person

I would like to recommend to everyone the book "The Guns of Ember" that the author is currently serializing. The progress is really great. There seem to be many pitfalls hidden in the setting. The plot, characters, and writing style have all been greatly improved. (So ​​much so that if you look at this book by the standards of that book, you will be poisoned to death...)

The main character was pretty well written before the lockdown was lifted, but the plot of fighting for freedom after the lockdown was really disappointing. At the beginning, the protagonist was found in a daze while still struggling with the seal. I don't know how many magicians and warriors came before adding another layer of seal. The undead king looked like a younger brother to the sealed protagonist. Within a few minutes after being unblocked, his body was reborn from a pile of fossils and became a complete red dragon. Then what? Being shuddered by the smile of a prisoner who has been imprisoned for hundreds of years? Being hit with a "broken dragon wing" by a mage who had just stepped onto the threshold of legend? What about the recovery ability of your previous flesh and bones? You have been conscious for 4,000+ years alone, let alone the time before your consciousness has recovered, and the time before being sealed, you are a dragon that is at least 4,000 years old? So weak all of a sudden? Why not write from a dragon egg?

Hey, hey, the author who wrote about the most powerful man actually has such a dark history, hehehe😃

This is another novel about a man wearing dragon skin. Ever since he learned the art of transformation, he has basically appeared in human form.

Thisdragon was so weak that it sucked away the magic power of a small plane. After it came out, it was beaten all the time. Otherwise, it would be difficult to beat anyone!

Holy Dragon. For a person whom you have only known for a few days, you will have emotions such as anger and self-blame after death. I was a Buddha and was watching well, but suddenly the Holy Mother had a seizure and I was so angry.

🤫Comments after the exam emmmmm Dragon Skin Man... Can anyone recommend this pure dragon novel? Black Dragon and Blue Dragon are Chasing. I have finished reading Red Dragon. If you don't want to read it, White Dragon is also a silly dog ​​man wrapped in dragon skin with four or five different personalities. The golden dragon's character does not fit. Are there any others?

La la la, look what I found! Guy A's dark history! I want to humiliate Guy A severely! I'm going to take a screenshot and send it to his new book!

This is not good. After seeing a few pictures, I want to become a human. I came to see dragons, not people. It's really not as good-looking as the roar of the red dragon.

The author of Salted Fish feels that it suits this character quite well.

Much better than Xiao Baiwen. I don't know why everyone likes to read those mindless harem stories.

I just finished reading Guns of Embers and came to check out the author's earlier works.

A Dahei History, the writing style is indeed quite immature.

Come to Whip Corpse to see hahahahahaha, A University's recent upgrading eve of the completion of this book, enthusiastic readers shared what they saw

Came here specifically looking for the QR code😃

This book seems to be hidden?

I came here from the QR code I found in the comments section of the latest novel that I finished.

I want to crawl on Guy A! Hahahahaha

Give me a Luoyang shovel! 😃

Ignoring a little bit of poisonous details, it is a good book. I've listened to 76 of them in one go so far, and it's still going.

I have nothing to do to insult Andy's strength.

Recite it vigorously! Praise!