Eve of Promotion

"Eve of Promotion" can be shortlisted for the Science Fiction Galaxy Award!

I started reading books from A University in high school. My old account was all subscribed to Guns of Ember and Endless Debt, but unfortunately I lost them somehow. I recently read this new book and found it very interesting. I would like to write down my own feelings for your reference. It's purely subjective, so please bear with me if I don't like it. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. Some of the problems that the author had when he wrote the first book have continued to this day - such as not paying much attention to grammatical standards and excessive rhetoric. This does not mean that A University's writing is not good. I think he is one of those talented players who did not come from a major. His writing skills are a bit weak, but the atmosphere creation, script design and storyboard description are all excellent (perhaps because A University likes watching movies like Belphegor?). Okay, after roughly ensuring the objectivity of the evaluation, I started to praise purely subjectively. A big book is very suitable for people like me who can connect with the radio waves. From a detective in Old Dunling to a thug from the Bureau of Order, his works have always had a strong film noir style and a large number of religious and theological settings. The origins of the religious elements can be traced back easily. Ember Gun obviously has the shadow of Tian Zhi Chi, an old thief from Jiangnan, and Tian Zhi Chi imitates the world view of EVA Shen Shen Nao Nao. I like this ambiguous metaphor of religion and gods very much. It can introduce gorgeous pure colors into the gray and turbid world in fantasy - whether it is the sacred and holy that burns white, or the depravity and ugliness that condenses into black, it is a false but stunning scenery. As for the characteristics of film noir, they fit well with the unique temperament of the author's works - a tough guy, a mystery; a woman, a regret; a complex personality obsessed with self, a cold world confronting a hot soul; sadness seeping out from the solemn shell of the story, restrained and light. This sense of déjà vu is like a long goodbye, but also like Blade Runner. These characteristics in the above paragraph are most obvious in this book. If the author's first two books still used Jiangnan's white-washed neurotic style to reconcile the style of painting, then this one is the result of completely displaying his personal style - a noir-style detective novel that combines religious mystery and a bit of fatalism. From Lorenzo to Pineapple Brother to Thursday, it seems that the lightness has sublimated, while the heavy coldness has settled down. What remains unchanged is the stubborn anger and burning madness in the characters' hearts. In short, this is a good book, Ada is an interesting soul. I recommend everyone reading this to read it. There is no need to be verbose or elaborate on the plot, just try to feel the atmosphere revealed in the storyboards constructed by the author with words. Who can say for sure? Maybe at a certain moment you were exposed to the radio waves, and in your dream you saw the river of light flowing in the sky and the burning city under the night.

Good story The background of science fiction is not lacking in romantic brilliance, and it has the author's characteristic operatic picture or stage feeling For online articles, it is a pity that this is a short and medium story The following are suggestions and what I want to say Question first The virgin/ex-wife article obtained Learning and ax fanaticism are not enough Believe again As far as I am concerned, without making any argument, no matter whether it is writing or reading, the article is a kind of abstract architecture in every aspect, and some good or bad things cannot be seen immediately. It is just like a decorated model house, which can be found after walking around. But as mentioned later in this article, there is a sense of confusion that a sweeping robot has to dump ashes. In terms of science fiction, there is an intuitive feeling caused by the fat blue mechanical cat and Daxiong saying that five hundred years from now, everyone's normal blood sugar monitoring will still rely on the environmental configuration/path dependence of the retention needle based on electrochemical principles. I don't know if it is caused by the error code pop-up/buzzer. Judging from the previous two books, the author's ability to control the amount of text can add highlights and undertones to scenes and backgrounds, and the plot should not be inferior. Good literature is reflected in being able to see from a distance and up close, and the text must satisfy the text structure and function. It is very subjective to say that the pictures in this book have a sense of blankness or fragmentation that is not coherent, just like when taking a panoramic photo earlier and stitching the images together. A part of something appears multiple times or a strange feeling where a part of something is missing and is filled in by something else Taking the game Disco Elysium as an object (maybe not the word, and there is an unverified personal impression), of course it is a bit excessive and biased to compare the intuitive feeling given by literary works with the game screen, but what I want to say is that as a reader, a person who is partially fixed Perspective observers should not only be able to see the dead man hanging in the tree and the protagonist himself hanging under the light ball in the first chapter, but also be able to imagine the freedom of looking at the world from the rooftop of the hotel and the firing hole of the sentry post after the final chapter; be able to perform hard-core radio gymnastics next to the light and shadow through the Queen's Church and the bass of the gray area, and also be intoxicated by the seagulls chirping in the sea breeze and walk out of their own way in various left and right swings. Road; of course, in the end, no matter whether there are stick insects, military airships overhead, old revolutionary guns that may be collected by the police, mugs all thrown in the trash can, and not only highway drivers, radio waves, and the gray area accompanied by yachts, but also a talking tie that can be inserted into a blue alcohol bottle as a primer for Molotov cocktails, I still hope that as the protagonist and at the end, there will be colleagues and friends in the same car heading into the unknown future. This paragraph is more of a game appreciation than a review, but I do think that speaking riddles, nonsense, or non-public language can express my feelings better. That is, constructing language, rather than simply using language Good architecture can reach the level of "Let's speak Chinese" The last and last A guy, if you are going to have two books left now, give your brothers some rich and colorful books to enjoy half of the book first, and pursue the literary nature of the other half. Put the latter one first and don't hold yourself back too hard Mamba, out

Congratulations on the completion! I have read Mr. And's books several times before. The writing is absolutely top-notch, and it has a very cinematic feel. I can often hallucinate scenes. However, the main character who kills people really doesn't appeal to me, so I have only read half of the first few books. I read this book in one sitting, which may have something to do with whether I continue to read it. One of my favorites is the discussion of human nature in this book, and the description from point to point. Regarding the interaction between the protagonist and other characters in this book, many times I will have the idea of ​​"Hey, why don't we do more", but if you think about it carefully, you will find that it is just right and it well highlights the theme of the book, that is, if the soul is not unique, then what is the nature of the human self? This made me read quite comfortably, and it also triggered my own thinking. It made me feel like I was no longer reading an online article, but traditional literature. The volume was just right and not too lengthy. That's it for writing here, looking forward to the new book!

The cyber doctor should be paired with a cyber ghost heroine, do you think so?

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Technology, city, distortion, flesh and blood (thinking)! Got it, Singularity Technology is shocking! 😍

Guy A's grades are worse than endless debt (sad)

No, where is your new book?

Guy a, hurry up and open a new book. I'm dying. Please, guy a. I've re-read the previous few books during this period. Now I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, guy a. Please open a new book. I will never read a book again. I will continue to read it in the future. Please, guy a. Really, open a new book. I swear I will give you all my monthly passes in the future. I really can't bear it anymore. Guys, please open a new book.

Report, a guy was injured by the subspace blasphemy spell, the new book will jump for a while.

Congratulations to An Lao for being shortlisted for the Best Science Fiction Online Literature Award😍😍😍😍

The new book is well known (wrong)

It turns out that I thought I didn't like cyberpunk literature, animation, and games. Many cyberpunk works show a kind of morbid and crazy freedom, and the world view is often a stereotypical dystopian society. The pursuit of freedom in a cyberpunk world is the ultimate romance. Many works choose a cowboy with a free nature to break the shackles, but I don't like such stories. It assumes that the ruling class of that world is inherently evil, thereby justifying the pursuit of a "sick freedom" by these cowboys. Cowboys raced through the streets, frantic, firing bullets wantonly, and explosions ripped through neighborhoods. I will think about the hearts of those people who have been victimized by "the pursuit of freedom." Or is it that in the world of cowboys, these numb ordinary people who have been alienated by the world can no longer live well, and dying for "chasing freedom" is a kind of relief? It seems like I'm thinking too far ahead. Thursday in "The Ascension" is chasing freedom, but he keeps running to maintain the normal operation of society. He feels that society is a huge madhouse, but he does not give up on every patient. He also seeks to cooperate with more social government agencies and capable people to solve the troubles caused by the cowboys who try to make the whole world explode. Finally, he flies into the sky like a bird to prevent him from becoming a superman and becoming one of the sources of social evil. Thursday lived within the framework of society, maintained the social framework, and finally rushed towards freedom, and allowed the people around him and the ruling class of society to make changes for a better direction. Back to society, the reason why the book "Sheng" is so good is because its science fiction and fantasy are based on a very practical thing: the human soul is stuffed into an inhuman machine. Oh my gosh, this is literal "alienation of man." When the human soul leaves the body, it is a freer thing. However, it is stuffed into a cage made of steel and becomes less free. This results in the alienation of the human soul. Is this disease a "disease" of society? In the end, I think not. It is a challenge for the future of mankind. Alienation is only the first challenge. There are more difficult and more immersive challenges. Thursday was the first challenger. He failed but also succeeded. The final answer was a further step forward from Camus's Mogustault and a clearer answer to meaninglessness. There is nothing more romantic than this in confronting nothingness from the standpoint of nothingness. I don't know when the next book will be. I hope the author never dies and can always write such poetic and romantic works. Finally, I borrow the author's preface to conclude: Run, run, burning, shining, towards the unknown future.

I finished watching it, but I always felt like something was missing while watching it. After thinking about it, I felt that maybe the protagonist was a little less human. Zhou Si seems to be always busy, never stopping, like a ruthless machine, completing one task after another. Although Endless Pineapple Brother is constantly running to save the world, he also has his own life. He falls in love with Aimu, watches movies with Palmer, and goes to clubs to party. Although he is very busy saving the world, he still has time to rest, just like an office worker who takes occasional vacations while working hard. Ember's Lorenzo, although his living habits are very inhuman, his character is the most human-like. He can be messed up and frustrated. He is decadent but at the same time moves forward bravely for the persistence in his heart. He is confused but has a little goal at the same time. After reading three books, the one I feel most connected to is my invincible Lorenzo Holmes.

The writing style is excellent, but the amount of text information is too large, and it is often difficult for readers to imagine the picture. The most important point is that the readability is really poor. Even though I obviously think the writing style is very good, I just can't read it. Secondly, the narrative could be strengthened, and readers' interest in reading is too low…

The new book will be released after June 60th...

It is reasonable to doubt whether A came up with the name of the male protagonist during the crazy week 😃

Every day I open the door with hope and then close it with disappointment. I feel like Commander Gao who looks at his cyber girlfriend but is out of reach. Guy A, you have done all kinds of bad things

None of the donkeys in the production team dared to rest like this. I think the battles in the new book can be more streamlined. It is best to end the big boss battle in 2-3000 words from the beginning to the end. There are several battles between Endless and Ember which are really tiring to watch later. Fights that are too long are tiring. I was so fat that I still felt tired after reading it, and the experience of following it was even worse.

Unlike some authors, there has been no news about new books for how many days😡

Report~~~The Qidian contract was too slow to complete. Give Qidian a punch, and the dissociation syndrome is getting worse 😭

This book is suitable for publication, not for online writing. Now the author has fallen into a misunderstanding between seriousness and tragic literature. He believes that tragedy is beauty and the meaning of literature, but ignores the commercial nature of online writing as a literary carrier. Life is already so hard, why not make people feel more relaxed?

As above

The latest news, Guy A is still addicted to the Delta

It is rare to see an online article of this quality. It is right to control the length. It is enough to present a complete and wonderful story.

The new book is being reviewed, and the endless June is finally over

Man A said it will be released on September 1st, I hope it is true.

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Report! A has published the book, but it is still being reviewed.