This Navy Is Not Serious

Every night after I come back from get off work, I read two chapters and cast two votes. It's not that Crystal's writing is really awesome, it's just that it has become a habit of mine. As a Pirates fanfic, this book is already of a very high standard, making me happier than most of the Qidian fans. Recently I saw that some trolls were targeting this book. I really don't know what to complain about in this book. No matter what the trolls said, I sincerely hope that Crystal will not be affected and just write according to your original ideas. Don't end it in a sloppy way like the last one. I will always support you! By the way, is there an official book club group or something like a VIP group? Why haven't I seen it?

(The somewhat hypocritical feeling stimulated by Akainu's death) The mood is really complicated after reading these chapters Although the author probably didn't mean it, the operation of sending a bento to Akainu on August 16th, his birthday, is really shocking! As a humble dog fan who has been dissed by the entire Internet, it is difficult to find a pirate fanfic that does not involve Black Sakaski. It is also difficult to find a pirate fanfic that does not regard all members of the navy as powerful tools and portrays everyone well. . . The emotional part of the bento and the plot are well arranged in all aspects. It may have greater significance in shaping this character than a simple happy ending. I am a lot of contradictions now. On the one hand, I feel uncomfortable that his ambition has not been fulfilled and he is being slandered by the world government. At the same time, I feel that this is the justice of that person. At the same time, I want to send the author a razor blade while being infected by the author's plot. Hey, even the navy in the original work couldn't think about it carefully. When I think about it carefully, I feel that they seem to be majestic, but in fact the future is a dead end and a destined tragedy. Suddenly, I feel a strong sense of powerlessness. So Hailan Zai! As the only hope, the future of this world is left to you! At least don't let tragedies continue to happen in this world I hope your justice can really rule the world one day, even if it is just in this fan world Finally, Sakaski, happy birthday, and goodbye

It feels like the author doesn't even know what he's writing, and whenever he writes something a little random, he comes out to explain. There is no clear idea. I feel like I'm writing nonsense. To put it bluntly - it's rubbish. 🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

It's a very good fanfic, but the description on the jump screen is a bit lacking. The plot is excellent and interesting.

The writing can be said to be the best I have ever seen in a Pirates fanfic. After reading this book, I didn't read any other fanfics.

As a fan, it's good. The subject matter is relatively new and the writing is above the standard. It's much better than some elementary school students' writing I've read before. However, there are some shortcomings. For example, the continuous fighting chapters sometimes almost made me fall asleep while watching it. My favorite fan harem doesn't exist, and the heroine's presence is not as high as that of Enel (feeling).

Suddenly I felt that this book was a bit unreadable. . . .

I thought about how the protagonist would answer the question later. After being asked this question by Warring States Period, the protagonist was stunned for a moment and answered: Well, Marshal, have you heard of the last sentence? Children only choose, I want them all 😁

Garp, Mr. Zefa! Handsome! Handsome! Handsome!

The main attribute of the aurora should be electromagnetism plus light. This electromagnetism should be like Magneto, which controls magnetism and magnetic field. Emmm, although according to Faraday's theory of electricity producing magnetism and magnetism producing electricity, there should be no problem in converting it into electricity, but electricity and thunder should be two different things. And it should be using magnetism to slip, and then it can be switched to slipping. I always feel like I'm skipping a paragraph 😰

Lychee, let me tell you, I recently read a book with two chapters a day, each chapter is a large chapter of 5-6 thousand words 😃 , why don't you also learn from it?

One thing I've always wondered is why some people always sum up Luffy's success only as the halo of the protagonist. A few hundred million volts of electricity can indeed electrocute ordinary rubber into slag, but why does the rubber of the rubber fruit have to be ordinary rubber, while the thunder and lightning of the thunder fruit can have almost no upper limit, and it can be increased by hundreds of millions of volts. It's as if there is no upper limit to the thunder fruit, and the resistance of the rubber fruit is still as low as ordinary rubber. Now that Luffy has defeated Kaji in the anime, many people are talking about the halo of the protagonist, but in my opinion this can still be explained by logic. As we all know, Haki will be consumed like blue bars, and Haki consumes physical strength. Kaji has made so many arms and attached armed colors with Haki, while Luffy only has two hands with armed colors. Who consumes more can be figured out naturally. Moreover, the rubber fruit is inherently very hard to hit. In reality, a piece of ordinary rubber can be punched 5,000 times a day by a person, and it will not break even for half a year, let alone the enhanced version of the rubber fruit. Ka-2 consumes more energy than Luffy, but its ability to withstand strikes is not as good as Luffy's. The only thing that can crush Luffy is the sight color that was cracked by Luffy. In this way, it is not unreasonable for him to be defeated by Luffy. So don't talk about it all the time. This is just an excuse for incompetence and failure. It shouldn't be that difficult to admit the excellence of others.

Adventurer? Hehe. In the name of adventure, why is the skull and crossbones flag flying? The "adventurer" with the straw hat released countless criminals in Impel Down. The crimes and evil committed by this "adventurer" were greater than those of most pirates.

In fact, I want to mention that the color of the aurora has nothing to do with electromagnetism. It is all solar wind, that is, electrons. What is related to color is the element that gets ionized by electrons. The air is mainly nitrogen and oxygen. Nitrogen should be blue when energized. I don't know if oxygen should be yellow or green. The proportion of nitrogen in the air is 70%. If this is the case in One Piece, then the protagonist's sword should generally be blue. . . And the remaining oxygen ions and nitrogen ions should generate nitrous oxide (the famous laughing gas), nitric oxide (colorless and toxic, easily oxidized to nitrogen dioxide), nitrogen dioxide (brown-red, dissolves in water to form nitric acid, highly toxic) and other gases, which can all be used. . .

I recently saw an old post discussing which fruit is more powerful, the animal type or the natural type? In the original work, Kizaru once said: The animal type of phantom beast is a kind of devil fruit that is rarer than the natural type. The author of this post believes that "rare = powerful", so the animal type phantom beast species is stronger than the natural type; what's more, he is very imaginative and thinks that the animal type phantom beast species is a combination of animal type + natural type! This is of course an illogical joke. First of all, in terms of rarity, the phantom beast species and ancient species in the animal system are very rare, but in terms of fruits and unique abilities, there is still a gap compared to the "elementalization" that can completely ignore physical attacks. Then Oda has repeatedly said that among the three series of devil fruits, only the natural type has no entity, and the other two series, including the fantasy beast type, all have entities that can be hit. Moreover, Oda had previously certified that among the three types of fruits, the natural type was recognized as the strongest, so there was no surprise. Therefore, "rare does not mean powerful", it only means that the probability of occurrence is small. Some people say that the Marshal in Buddha's Warring States period ate phantom beast species, so he was strong! Of course there is a problem, because the Buddha still has general-level combat power, and marshals and generals are on the same level. Many fans of the sea were influenced by the animation scene. When transforming into the Phoenix form, Marco's body was wrapped in his special ability "Blue Flame", so Kizaru's "Eight-foot Magatama" seemed to be swallowed up by the flames. But it did hit Marco's entity, but at the same time as he was hit, Marco's injuries were restored by his "blue flame". So it looks like it wasn't hit. Otherwise, Marco would not have sacrificed his life to block the light bullets fired by Kizaru at Whitebeard, because if a natural ability user did not use "elementalization", he would not be able to directly block certain non-physical attacks and remain unscathed. After all, the three generals of the Navy Headquarters must have cultivated armament Haki to an extremely high level, even Kizaru, who relies more on the Shining Fruit, should be the same.

Let's have a single female protagonist. . . . There are so many pirate fans in the harem that I am tired of aesthetics. . .

I think the natural Aurora Fruit is okay. It agrees with the author's request. It has almost no power after being eaten, and the future development prospects are excellent. It can be developed from the aspects of formation conditions, that is, magnetic field, electric current, and atmosphere. The atmosphere is a bit difficult to understand, but magnetic field and electric current are not a problem. You can mainly develop the magnetic field. For example, the phone bug will be directly ineffective wherever it goes. This function is already very strong, and the electric current is similar. This fruit can be regarded as a low-end version of Thunder without developing atmospheric abilities. For example, people in the Pirate World do not know that Aurora is related to the atmosphere. People who know it think that Aurora is the lower level of Shining and Thunder. Later, it is in the hands of the protagonist, because time travelers understand this key and develop atmospheric abilities. They get rid of the image of the so-called inferior fruit. In the future, they can be combined with sunspots and the like. Isn't that better than Thunder.

There is too little fruit development and lack of imagination. The Aurora Fruit is about to be used as the Thunder God Fruit. The combat is too pale. There is no specific description of training when the strength is improved. There is also little domineering development. The advantage is that the plot is relatively rounded. It feels a bit tasteless.

One Piece hurts people a lot. After watching One Piece, I went shopping and saw a pair of handsome men and women walking in front of me. So I took off my coat, revealing Ivan's clothes, put on Kizaru's expression, imitated Smoker, lit two cigars, and walked Brother Ming's pace made a Pika laugh and he stretched out his hand to the boy and said, "Give me some face, be my son." Before he could react, he said to the girl next to him, "Miss, can you show me your underwear?" Everyone around was shocked and looked at me in surprise, so I put on the contemptuous posture of the empress and said that no matter what bad things I do, the whole world will forgive me because I am so handsome. Unexpectedly, in a few minutes, I would have the head of Green Pepper, the eyes of Fujitora, the teeth of Blackbeard, the hands of red hair, the legs of Aokiji and the fate of Whitebeard!

This book is much better than other articles about being a pirate in the world of pirates. I just don't understand how a normal person who travels to a pirate world could want to be a pirate? Most pirates don't have to find a reason to die. Even Luffy is just doing it for his dream, which doesn't mean he is a good person.

Justice has always been a relative concept. It is a very subjective concept. The navy has never maintained justice, but order. (Even if it is a brutal order, modern civilized countries also maintain order first) The order of the navy itself absolutely maintains the privileges of the Celestial Dragons and nobles, and the overall order of civilian life (just like ancient China). From our modern perspective, they are corrupt and evil. But you must know that in the troubled times of One Piece, the existence of the navy maintained the most basic order no matter what. For the vast majority of civilians, the incompetent, the old and the weak, the order of the navy is the greatest justice and the guarantee of life safety. Only in relative order can they live safely (even if their life is difficult). Just like those farmers in ancient my country, as long as they didn't starve to death, there would generally be no large-scale peasant uprisings. Because once a war breaks out, the most ordinary civilians will definitely die the most and the most miserably. (I am a civilian anyway) But pirates are by no means righteous. They are not involved in production or commerce, they are just killing people, stealing goods, and bullying weak sea pirates. Otherwise, where would they get the money to eat and drink all day long and be happy (and the weapons are very expensive). On the contrary, adventure-oriented pirate groups like Luffy are the odd ones among pirates. The so-called pursuit of freedom by men on the sea is just a waste of time for absolute egoists. You are free, but your freedom is based on the suffering of civilians. (Robbery and massacre of the city or even the country) On the contrary, there are big pirates like the Yonko Shichibukai and others who have fixed territories. They obtain financial support by collecting protection fees, robbing pirates and other means to maintain order within their rule. Therefore, these big pirates have formed warlords to compete with the world government. But they are only safeguarding their own interests (with the size of the huge pirate group, they can no longer support their families for a long time just by robbing). Because of the existence of order, there were actually not many civilians under the Four Emperors' rule. Of course, pirates are not absolutely evil. The era of pirates opened not only because of Roger's encouragement, it was just an inducement. The more important reason is that the world government's governance ability is too bad. Most of the nobles are desperate to ruin the common people, and civilian talents have no way to rise. Social contradictions have accumulated to a climax, so a large number of young and strong labor force, unwilling to have no future, went to sea and became pirates under the temptation of wealth, fame, status, etc. (Are you being oppressed by the nobles at home, farming the land, and may not be able to make ends meet, or are you risking your life to eat meat and drink alcohol and be happy?) (Not everyone can be a pirate, at least they must have a certain fighting ability. And all big pirates are talented people). Overall, I support the Revolutionary Army. Because I'm just a civilian.

Why does such a good-looking Pirates fanfic have poor grades? I feel aggrieved for the author.

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Kizaru's poor physical skills are mentioned several times. . . What's wrong with him? Using swordsmanship to hard anal Lei Li and hard anal Z, he was not at a disadvantage at all, and even kept taking advantage. Some people say that Rayleigh is old, has no use for domineering, has a broken hand, and is about to die. Isn't this an unreasonable statement? I still think Kizaru's physical skills are very good, even very powerful. Relying on fruits is not the same thing as poor physical skills. And I think Kizaru has his own confidence and pride, and he respects the strong. I also respect my former teachers very much. Swordsmanship Anan Rayleigh may be due to Rayleigh's domineering swordsmanship duel with Z, but it is just because Z believes that one should not rely on fruits, and his personality prevents the two from being so close, but as a former instructor, Kizaru should still respect him very much.

The protagonist's view of the O'Hara incident is wrong. In Chapter 463, the protagonist said that it is wrong to explore other people's secrets without their permission, but O'Hara's scholars are exploring history and what is happening in the world, not other people's secrets. Therefore, the protagonist in this paragraph distorted the O'Hara incident in order to highlight that the Navy was right.

According to the author's imagination: Sparkling fruit? Guangguang fruit? Laser fruit? Aurora fruit? Northern lights fruit? Aurora Australis fruit? Sunlight fruit? Starlight fruit? Moonlight fruit? Eye fruit? Light fruit? Candlelight fruit? Electric fruit? Slap fruit? No way! Evil! Magic! Fruit! Reality! Some are born limited by rules! For example, the Shashao Fruit is just a flame fruit with a limited temperature! Of course, fire is fire. There is no demonic black fire, no spiritual fire, and no immortal fire. Blackfire cannot have any attributes added to it. Depending on the temperature or the burning substance, fire includes red fire, white fire, blue fire, orange fire, dark fire and so on. If there is no limit, only one type of flame temperature can be developed. If the laws of physics are also applicable in the pirate world, then the flame can be developed to the temperature of the surface of the sun and set on fire directly. All the weapons and rock berries will be wiped out, and it is useless. And the flame can continue to burn. If the Shashuo Fruit had the characteristic of "burning" rather than the "fire" characteristic, then there should still be "fire" fruits. "Fire" is the result of "burning", which requires burning substances and burning environment. If "burn" and "fire" are the same, it would be a mistake. According to the author's imagination, it's true that the Shining Fruit is a kind of flash, and it doesn't say what kind of light it is. Kizaru mainly develops the characteristics of light speed, which does not mean that light only has the ability of speed. What kind of laser, nuclear fusion light, laser light, etc. Sunlight can be burned even if it is concentrated with a magnifying glass, not to mention the light itself. If you are more imaginative, like a projector lamp, light can form an image, and you can develop a clone, an illusion or something like that. Light also has cold light, strong light, temperature, and can also burn and burn. To be more scientific, light wavebands, signal waves, etc. Can also be developed. Having said so much, I personally feel that no matter what attributes of the natural system, the natural systems should be at the same level. There must be legal limitations. It is impossible for a Burning Fruit to control temperature better than a Temperature Fruit. The flames emitted by a Burning Fruit can be developed to be more dazzling than a Shining Fruit. The burning smoke of a Burning Fruit is stronger than a Smoke Fruit. It is impossible for a Burning Fruit to be developed to the point where it can burn through space, burn time, and burn souls. He just burned the fruit, and there were limitations to further developing the temperature. It was impossible to melt all the magma. The same goes for sparkling fruits. "Flash" is its domain, and the others are the domains of other devil fruits.

The original version looks very good, but it's a pity that the last few pictures were too rushed. The last chapter of the pirate world changed to the imperial system was quite speechless.

The author's narrative is peaceful, but victory lies in stability. This is a book that is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

I've only watched 50 episodes of One Piece, but I've also read a lot of fan fiction, and I've got a rough idea based on the comments from netizens 😏

The reason why the pirates are imprisoned and not killed is to prevent the Devil Fruit from regenerating