Mythical Native Species

I have to admit that the original species is well written in the front, but the power system in the back is really broken. The first few time travels, the City of Thousand Stars, and the several encounters with Bai Xiaotian really gave me a sense of grandeur as if everyone was traveling through the interstellar era. It was written that it was okay to subdue the little black dragon when he entered the military and fought in the war, but then he seemed to start to let himself go when he entered the special war zone. The overall rhythm can't keep up, and there are too many jumping places if you look closely. The philosophy that entered the materialistic world at the beginning began to be applied crazily and replaced the original system. In the military academy, there was no real sense at all except for a few fights and a class. The earth chapter was the essence of a bad plot. A lot of prehistoric routines began to appear, and then the Golden Immortal and Daluo Jinxian completely replaced the original levels 1-10, which was completely different from the previous native species. They agreed not to follow the same path. As a result, the magic and fighting spirit system was completely marginalized later, and several gay friends of the male protagonist also inexplicably became followers. The girl who kept pestering him at the beginning (forgot her name), Crusu, the boss who called 881 to save him, and the black dragon entrusted by the military region were all missing. The arcane princess that I watched next had a bunch of causal cuts that ended at the end. After the design reached level 8, she began to become completely addicted to her own world, and several girls began to be marginalized. The world view is very large, and I tried to change my tactics halfway through to control it, but after all, the author's writing power is limited.

It felt pretty good at first, but as I got to the end, it became more and more depressing. It was still watery, and I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. I just don't know what the author's next book will be like? I hope it's not as depressing as this book. It looks very unpleasant.

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There are too many settings, which looks troublesome, and many settings feel vague. The place where the protagonist is or where he travels has no recognition and seems empty.

I guess it's Sun Wukong. It seems that Sun Wukong has never appeared, and the seventy-two transformations are quite symbolic of the protagonist's abilities.

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It's getting more and more boring, it's so ridiculous

I couldn't read the last few chapters, so I was skipping to read them.

After reading the book, tell me your thoughts. This is indeed a good book. It has connotation and is not pretentious. The author's writing style is very good and he can enjoy himself. This book really fascinates me. I have only read this book for such a long time. I have not read other books, and I can't stand it. This is the first time I have read a book in many years. (Tai Shui is a jumping-off point to watch. Those who have read the book will understand)

The first 100 chapters were passable, but the later chapters became more and more boring.

Stop and sit in Ai Fenglin at night? ? ?

If Feng Lingwan hadn't been the protagonist, I would have said that he was always talking about running a train, but in fact he had no real ability. It all depended on the author's forced explanation.

After reading Chapter 20, I really can't bear it anymore. 1. The embarrassment of bionic species. The bionic species, for the time being, does not know the meaning of its existence. Are bionic species created from native species? What is the function of creation? The agricultural planet of pig's feet does not need to be cultivated by intelligent bionic farmers at all. Unmanned automated machines are enough. Moreover, the bionic species also showed hatred. There are indicator lights between the eyebrows of the androids to correspond to mood swings. This very anti-human operation has a lower status than the pets of 9012. Was it created to enslave/humiliate and satisfy the evil thoughts of the original species? On purpose? Did the author fill in this hole later? 2. The awkwardness of the IQ setting of native species. The third chapter said that the general native species are basically "experienced" and passed the test, and it also gave an example of three months of prenatal education. Chapter 10/11 A battle of wits and courage with a black businessman? The background setting is that the IQ of native species is online, and then two mentally retarded characters are written, which is very awkward. One pretends to be a little white rabbit and the other pretends to be a big-tailed wolf, forcing a battle of wits. 3. The first copy is embarrassing. Chapter 345: When the pig's trotters appear, they pretend to be cool twice regardless of their lives. Note, they are regardless of their lives, which is referred to as **. Pig's feet do not have extraordinary abilities until they first appear and are recognized by 300zz. Please pay attention to this. In the third chapter, he suddenly jumped up and made fun of the "leading brother" master. Who gave you the courage? Are you really not afraid of death? It was joked that the golden finger conditions were not met at this time, and several people rushed up to teach/kill the pig's feet. What to do, the pig's feet have a shining aura, and a bald head who is the anti-"big brother" is forced to save the pig's feet. In Chapter 5, an obvious master villain appears, Pig's Knuckle is showing off for the second time. The "official" point here clearly states that Pig's Feet does not have extraordinary powers at this time. He also rushed over with a sword to attack the villain master. Is this kind of smart? For those who insist on talking about "big brother taking the lead", the "big brother taking the lead" will not kill you directly. Choosing chestnuts from the fire also depends on your ability. What should I do, the pig's feet are going to die? Then use the pig's foot halo again. On the way to the pig's foot, the golden finger condition is met at the critical moment. It's so powerful. I suddenly have 20 years of internal strength and can pass two moves. Chapter 9 also writes that the pig's trotter plan is a wretched development. 4. The embarrassment of fighting. The end of Chapter Six and the beginning of Chapter Seven. The "big brother who takes the lead" takes action, preparing to take away the pig's feet with one move, while also fighting against the master villain. Note that the scene at this time is that the villain's master attacks the pig's feet, and the leader also uses moves to cover the pig's feet and the villain. The "official" clearly states that the villain is at the top of this plane, and also clearly states that the pig's feet cannot be avoided. What should I do, let Pig's Feet learn a secret skill during the time that he can't escape, and attract the two of them to stop. I forced the pig's trotter halo to open again. Are pig's trotters more powerful than dogs? Their mouths are so fast. With 20 years of internal strength, the body can't dodge, and then the verbal endorsement is faster than the moves of the top masters on the plane. A sense of déjà vu as a beautiful girl transforms. 5. Time travel information problem. In the first copy, I listened to the words on the roof for 5 minutes and learned all kinds of information. The amount of information is not very reasonable. In terms of non-extraordinary and time, I know that the amount of information is too much.

It was fine in the early stage. The protagonist had goals and ideas. From the moment he became a disciple of Tieguai Li, he started to drift with the crowd. I still couldn't figure it out. Isn't it good to travel well and grow well? He has to become a disciple and find a source-level shuttle? Where is the protagonist's golden finger? All kinds of messy things began to happen later, and there was not even a relatively smooth transition. The next event was just started abruptly, and the fifth-level Yuan Shen stage fought against the eighth-level Da Luo? Just kidding. Moreover, in the later stage, the protagonist's golden finger has no sense of existence at all. It's just that the author is having fun with himself, and he promotes his life values ​​in the article in various inexplicable ways, which makes me vomit.

You are a native type of talker. You don't want to develop insignificantly during the training period. You can do all kinds of things with your talk in front of the Celestial Immortal, Golden Immortal, Daluo Jinxian and other big guys. It's great that you didn't get crushed to death with one finger.

Such a good idea, why can't he become a great master? Why doesn't the author reflect on it? Those readers who keep saying good things, I sometimes wonder if you are deliberately ruining this book. For example, the bionic man and Crusu's misty settings, don't refute me and say that I don't understand (rebuttal will not be accepted), but the author has not come to a clear conclusion in the first place (vague explanations will leave readers with many ideas) , "I personally feel that the most awesome author leads the reader by the nose. Once the reader has their own ideas, it proves that the book is successful."), Whether you want to dig a hole, or want to write in depth, but remember that you are writing a fast-food article, and if you want to achieve results, the most important thing is that the reader is happy (in disguise, your writing style that digs holes is not good), even if you are unhappy in the early stage, how many are willing to pursue the later stage. And the worlds that the protagonist travels through in the book, can't you give a rough description of those worlds? Why omit a place with such a good number of words? The key point is that readers have not yet sensed it. I have said so much and have no other meaning. I hope the author can write it well next time.

I'm really a little disappointed. The last book Unlimited Myth was very well written. This one is also a bit pornographic, but it's already a bit disgusting. I only saw the first few pictures. The protagonist goes to that small world to molest other people and play with their wives. I actually found it a bit enjoyable, but Later, the protagonist and the wife were playing in bed, and her husband was under the bed (and the protagonist knew it). In the end, the husband climbed out, and the protagonist killed him in front of the wife. It was disgusting. I couldn't stand it. You can engage in pornography, but you are really disgusting.

I read Chapter 57. It is a very good book. It just gave me the feeling that this is not a book, but that the author is designing something and trying to make people understand the thing he designed. I don't see the story of the novel, I see the author feeding me instructions. It feels good, yet uncomfortable

It is assumed that all the babies in prenatal education are extremely smart, but the protagonist turns out to be just like a retarded person.

I'm pretending, I haven't kept up with the logic, and my writing skills are unclear. At the very least, this book has no idea of ​​​​making people follow it. It's normal for you to rush into the street. It's not that you are not appreciating your talent. It's just that your writing is not good, the writing style is not enough, and the layout is not enough.

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The front line of this book is very in-depth and the writing style is very sophisticated. However, in the middle and later stages of the book, the author suddenly fell short of his IQ and wrote a mess. He directly changed from an adult book to a kindergarten puzzle. I don't know what the author was thinking. It is more important to calm down and polish a good work than to write ten books, and it also makes money. It is possible that you may write ten books and fail to become a high-quality product and lose your character, but polishing one book carefully may push yourself to the altar.

The protagonists of online novels always have the characteristics of being silly, weird, idiotic, and foolish. No matter what level of writer you are, platinum or novice. Always use a template like this. Therefore, the feeling of many books is almost a mixture of the same theme.

This book is not an all-around cool novel. There are basically very few fighting scenes. After I became a disciple of Tieguai Li, I hardly saw the protagonists fighting. They basically just kept engaging in intrigues, one vortex after another. I can't say how strong the Galaxy universe is, but I basically didn't notice the richness and diversity. The idealistic side is basically from the fairy tale side and the Western mythology side. As for the fighting spirit and other things that I haven't seen before, the materialistic side basically has not much background space.

Chapter 35: There is nothing wrong with the emperor's thinking, and it is ancient times, not the protagonist's galactic civilization. He is short-sighted and does not know that there is a boundary outside the world. At best, he is ignorant and short-sighted. However, the protagonist despises the emperor and says that his IQ is not good, in order to highlight the protagonist's IQ. This is really embarrassing to me.

The world view outlined in the opening chapter, the grand era where everyone is like a dragon, is indeed refreshing among various infinite works. I admire it and yearn for it. I feel that it has great potential to open up a new genre. I deeply believe that another starting point god is about to be born. Unfortunately, the more I write, the more crooked I am, and the second half is a mess...

This book is basically not exciting, there is no fighting, it is basically a strategy text disguised as fantasy.

Compared to the previous book, it feels a lot different. There is no sense of immersion in this galaxy era at all. The previous plot also feels very inexplicable and bland, and I have no desire to read it.

In the infinite flow of variants, the low-level martial arts in the early part of the script world can still be read, and the main plot is quite interesting, but how can the high-level martial arts in the back be written in the same way as the low-level martial arts? The rest of the script is really unreadable, and the main plot feels like the author is enjoying himself and wants to write something different, but he can't write it clearly. The final ending can only be said to be barely reasonable, but it always feels strange. The whole book feels like it has everything and is very messy. It would be better to just write about interstellar civilization or just infinite flow, adding a golden finger is enough. As for the combat power settings, character descriptions, and fighting descriptions, they can only be said to be average. A little bit of shattering stars and collapsing the universe will be enough.

The author's setting is very macro, so I rely on this setting to launch a set of ability systems that I came up with before. If there are any shortcomings, please point them out! The telekinesis system is just relying on the core. The newly developed one is basically only one meter in diameter. At the beginning, it is only the basic one meter. It will only be improved after promotion. It is divided into level one to nine. With each level of improvement, the volume will be doubled, and the scope of telekinesis will also be increased. It will expand accordingly, and it will be doubled. After reaching the ninth level, this core is still in vain and needs to be filled with material energy. After filling, it is the starting point of the star core Now it is the first realm of the planet level, the star core realm. It has just begun to fill a ball with a diameter of one meter. This It is the first level, and subsequent upgrades will double the improvement, and so on to the ninth level. However, it is best to upgrade to the hardest level, until it cannot be improved. This is the starting point and the potential. Generally speaking, the second realm, the Star Condensing Realm, is the origin of ability acquisition. After that, you can construct your own planet and choose Choose the basic resources you want, I divide them into four development directions. The gaseous planet focuses on speed, the liquid planet focuses on resource development, the solid planet focuses on destructive power, and the living planet focuses on body recovery ability, using its own development direction as its ability. Continuously strengthen your own material, reaching the limit, the diameter is about 3 to 7 times that of the star core, level one to nine, belonging to qualitative differentiation After reaching the limit, gravity is generated, and you advance to the astral state Integrate the planet into the body, star fusion body, body fusion star, one is based on the body, and the other is based on the planet , the former is to open up space and integrate into it, or directly integrate into the planet, which is called planetary consciousness Looking for a way to advance to a star, that is, finding a way to make the interior burn violently. During this period, energy will be consumed rapidly, and a large amount of energy needs to be replenished until the star is stable This has entered the stellar stage. It is divided into nine levels, the first one is the model, the first level is doubled, all the way to the limit Finally, it enters the alien stage, which is basically the special stage after entering the red star, black hole, red dwarf star, white dwarf star, As for how to advance? I don't know either Please give me some advice