Arcane Origins

Tsk, alas... When I first started searching for books, I saw so few recommendations that I planned to skip it. When I saw the introduction, I thought it was the genre of the Arcane God. I was really excited for a long time. The result... I said you are slow to warm up, but you are really slow to warm up to the end? I was at a loss as I read the first ten chapters, but I couldn't taste anything. As soon as the body digitization came out, my body trembled subconsciously. System? Brother, please don't make trouble. It was only after we captured the Bastille that I realized something was wrong. Where was the Arcane God Seat flow that we had promised? Don't blame me for thinking this way, the title of the book is too directional. This talent is actually a farmer? Farming is just farming. It's not impossible to watch. At most, it lives up to expectations. This is my fault. The author may not have wanted to go to the arcane throne model at all, and it's quite satisfying to use technology to penetrate magic. I waited and waited... Waited and waited... After waiting for more than a hundred chapters, just when I doubted whether there was anything more high-tech besides the knights and witches with longbows and powerful crossbows, gunpowder finally came out. Oh my God, you finally came out... This is the rhythm of farming style! One thing that suits my taste is that the personal strength is not high. This gave me a great sense of security when I introduced the protagonist. However, this sense of security did not last long. As the seven apostles of our ancestors unfolded, I felt my liver tremble again. Brother, you don't follow the conspiracy trend, do you? Fortunately, the author spent two or three chapters to dispel my worries. Well, I still can't defeat the army. The sense of security is back. If I seize the military power, the rest is easy to say. Then the emotional drama of the Iron-Blooded Princess made my heart freeze again. Here I quietly ask the author, does he have a girlfriend? Why does the process not go directly to the home base? Although it can reflect the protagonist's decisiveness, don't you think the emotional line is too pale? I'm looking forward to this very much... What follows is the unparalleled girl under the Seven Apostles. I forgot her name. I thought she was one of the harems, but the way the emotional line is handled, I really... Alas, it's too Spring and Autumn style. Just when I thought the painting style had matured, um... The world view of the dialogue between the God of Death and the protagonist made my brain freeze for a while What, the son of the plane? Multiverse? Brother, please stop making trouble. My protagonist only has artillery. He doesn't have a Star Destroyer Cannon. He even just built a reactor. After that, it became more and more... At first, I thought it was a low-demon world. Personal force could not defeat the army, until the God of Death and the God of Truth came out. At this time, I was already mentally calculating the cost-effectiveness of continuing to subscribe. The only thing I looked forward to was the cannon. I waited and waited... When I saw the interaction between the protagonist's mother and the romantic general, I made a decision in an instant and turned off the automatic subscription for the next chapter. It turns out that I overreacted. The protagonist's mother is still single and fine. But once I made a decision, I couldn't muster the motivation to pursue the book after all. Alas... I finally know why this book is so lowly recommended despite its good writing. The positioning of your book is wrong, the reader group you are targeting is wrong, and everything from the title to the content to the worldview is not connected. Those who want to read a wizard are attracted by the title of the book but find out that it is a farming novel. Those who want to read a farming novel later find out that it is a fantasy novel. Those who want to read a fantasy novel from the beginning will find it difficult to stick to it until the later stage. It attracts such a diverse group of readers, and naturally very few are satisfied, including me. I am still a wizard who farms and takes everything, but I am not a fantasy fan. Originally I wanted to be more violent, but I think this book is essentially good. At least it didn't fool anyone after it was put on the shelves. Let's forget it. However, the author's writing style in the first few chapters really surprised me. As long as I don't step on the big thunder when the author opens a new book, I will definitely chase a few hundred pictures first. One last sentence. Author, would you like to find a girlfriend? Fill out the emotional lines (laughs).

A playboy who got a widow pregnant outside, and finally got together with the main character's mother. The protagonist is so secretive and so open to the outside world. Are you planning to give the protagonist multiple younger brothers or sisters as a foreshadowing for the future?

Just reading the title, I thought the plot was about a seeker who searches for the embers called "magic" in a world where gods and churches thrive. The main plot should be about the origin and development of magic, as well as the impact on the entire theological society and the changes that have followed. On the grand stage, both sides question each other for their respective ideas, fight each other, and try their best for everything they believe in! An epic story unfolds until the complete defeat of one party … … … I have read about 400 chapters so far The text turns out to be a short white text like a running account… About real magic, gods, and the development of society Development and change have nothing to do with the epic story... All in all, it is really disappointing The title of this book should be "I was reincarnated as a legacy of the imperial family but had nothing, and I still have to lead my fellow villagers to explore technology and build infrastructure in the mountains!"

I have finished testing the poison, and it is considered a good book in the early stage (before the Lich King comes out). It has no flaws and can be said to be very creative, and the writing is not bad. But after reaching the Lich King, the author's writing power began to lose control. By the sixth volume, it was just too watery. Is it necessary to add official positions or relationships in front of everyone's name (and there is only one chapter every day, and each chapter is just that little)? There is no need to drag on if you don't have an idea. It's perfectly fine to finish around two million, and at least you can leave some thoughts. None of us lacks that little starting coin, but it's really a pity to see a good book that could have cultivated a group of loyal book friends even if it was a big hit, become like this. I hope the author can see it and correct it.

I felt that the first and second chapters were all about hunting a bear, which was really unnecessary and the plot was unattractive.

When I first looked at the title of the book, I thought it was similar to the Arcane God Throne. After reading a few chapters, I realized that this book is really a story about the protagonist's struggle for hegemony in a different continent. After reading other book reviews, I felt that the title could be changed to - The Origin of Arcane Magic in a Different Continent. And the author's plot of killing the bear at the beginning was okay. When I watched it, I thought it was okay, mainly because it had nothing to do with the subsequent plot. And it feels wrong to have so many orphans. Later, he directly transferred out of the village and was arrested, which also made the plot very fast. It feels more immersive with the protagonist's birth experience.

I have read 60 chapters. Perhaps because this is the first time for the author to write an article, I feel that the writing style is not yet up to par. The overall reading of the article has poor contextual coherence. I often suddenly cannot understand the following part of the article, and I have to connect it to the previous part to guess what happened in the middle...

Author, you should change the title of the book! I was attracted to arcane magic, but after looking at it, it has nothing to do with arcane magic!

The first few pictures are well written and very engaging. It's just that the sudden sharp turn was a little unprepared, and I only wrote a few chapters to lay the groundwork. It turned too fast, and the dialogue between the words and the characters was a bit like a veteran who had been in society for many years. The barbarian would come up with a literary idiom or classical Chinese from time to time. It was really embarrassing! The pig's feet are now in the wild and savage mountains. Brother, are they more prominent? The point is that the author is not integrated into the world in which he writes, and the sense of immersion is a bit poor. Maybe it's a matter of basic skills, but it's such a good subject matter. I like this kind of novel subject the most. It's a pity that I can't watch it later, otherwise I would have booked it all. This is my first time writing a review, and I don't know if you can understand it. In fact, I'm not qualified to comment because writing is too difficult. Come on, author!

Let me comment on it in one sentence: it is worth reading I have not read many chapters, so I cannot comment on the worldview and system structure of the book, but the narration in the first few scenes is really a bit too much, giving people a watery feeling (honest words). I feel much better if I remove some of the inner monologues and knowledge introductions. In fact, some of them can be classified as nonsense I don't mean to discredit the author, but this kind of watery talk is really true. It greatly affects the viewing experience. I hope the author can improve it. After all, the potential of the novel is still great. Although the characterization of the characters is flawed (some of them make people feel uncomfortable), it is still okay. Don't write so many character introductions and battle introductions for the battle scenes. Too much will make the battle a bit boring. These character introductions can be mentioned later... However, some book lists are simply poisonous. I really can't believe all the book list introductions!

How can I put it... The more I read it, the more embarrassing it becomes. There are contradictions in the content before and after. The author can't write such a big situation, but he also wants to write something that echoes the situation before and after, but the result is completely different. Moreover, the protagonist is too conceited and not a good character. I don't know how he got it.

This book is actually very good (≧∇≦*), but the content is too detailed, and the author actually has his own ideas. It is a slow-burning work that becomes more exciting as it goes on, and the scenes are very big. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! !

It seems that I have to ask this question again. ( ⚆ _ ⚆ )... Although the descriptions of long conversations are gone, sometimes there are quite a lot of short ones. It's not that it's not good, there are some advantages (analyzing the incident from them through conversation...), But I still feel that it needs to be distinctive, descriptive and consistent with the image. The feeling now is that regardless of the Yong Ye leaders, the elders of the Crocodile tribe (and the common people, I forgot whether there were common people's conversations) and the nobles (banquet), except for the different angles of analysis, what they say is the same. Differences in culture, education, and occasions are not reflected. I hope that since I want to use this kind of description of discussion from a group perspective, and I use it a lot, I hope I can give it more thought. Some live broadcasts are quite well written.

😭 I couldn't help but complain, in Chapter 298, the characteristics of a sea-going sailor should be in his face, facial features and skin. Rotten teeth can be said to be not brushing, drinking and eating…. Imbalanced nutrition is possible, but scurvy cannot be the norm. No one can survive this disease.

The innovation of Reiki Resurrection Flow, praise it

I just watched it not long ago and it was quite interesting. However, I felt something went wrong after changing the style around the 80th chapter. There are too many dialogues and they are long and long. Then after there are too many conversations, analysis is mixed in with the dialogue. This makes many characters (especially groups) look unrecognizable. Did it change later?

The protagonist instantly becomes wise when he sees a woman 😁😄😄

It's pretty good in the early and mid-term, and the poisonous points are nothing in my opinion. After Chapter 6, I always open a mini map. The story of the mini map is not exciting and has little to do with the main plot (including the Shadow Master World. If you want to open this dungeon, you have to use the power of the territory to solve it. It's nothing to go in alone to fight. Is it okay to learn from Dawn?), And the problem is not solved by the power of early farming and training. The male protagonist always uses extraordinary strength to solve the problem, which makes early farming pointless. It became a farming story in the early stage, and a single-player plane war exploration story in the later stage. The sense of separation was serious (to put it bluntly, the farming practice did not clearly distinguish the proportions.). The big problem is like the book about The Witch. The early stage was good, but the author insisted on creating a dream space. It was inexplicable. I was very excited about the later copies. 😅

I just started reading it and I think it is well written. The point I want to talk about is "science". Countless people have discussed what "science" is, but ordinary people still don't know. My university teacher also doesn't agree with science. He thinks that science is right today, but it may be wrong in the future. Science has been overturned countless times in history. In fact, in my opinion, this is the real power of science. It only overturns scientific conclusions, and it is science itself that overturns them. Science has three meanings, ideas, methods and conclusions. Thoughts are the most important and conclusions are the least important. The most subversive power that a time traveler can bring to other worlds is thoughts, scientific thoughts and humanistic thoughts. What is scientific thought? It means seeking truth from facts and believing in objective facts rather than subjective assumptions. Make bold assumptions, carefully verify, and constantly revise your opinions based on experimental results. It sounds simple, right, but as long as generations of people persist, science will become stronger and stronger. When it shows its power, all the gods and Buddhas can only end sadly.

I just started reading, it's a rare good book (vote four monthly votes to support it) (persist in finishing it and don't collapse)

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Nine years of compulsory education, and a warlock who mines memories to cheat on his physique. Ten years of this? Chemistry, there are no equations, no determination of the periodic table of elements, both of which are content in middle and high schools. This does not mean that it must be the same as the earth, but different conclusions will be more helpful for subsequent research. Physics has not made various constant measurements, has no formulas or theorems, and is still in the stage of empirical disciplines. The project relies purely on manpower, and there are no tools. Cranes, pulleys, and mechanical analysis are not described. Gunpowder, just relying on manpower to pile gunpowder, only one rechargeable gem after ten years. For someone as famous as Nobel, how could you not know that the subsequent gunpowder was a nitric acid product? This goes back to not developing chemistry. It's hard to say. In fact, it is not difficult to have a direction in chemistry in the early stage. This is how my country has risen rapidly from poverty and nothing. It took three years for a nuclear bomb to be successfully explored. Not to mention that basic chemistry. Now, where are the guns and cannons? Ming Dynasty's level can produce these two things. Not to mention that similar research was still discouraged or feared at the time. Not to mention that the protagonist has a direction, and direction is really important. Did the textile machines stop when the industrial revolution came? What about the steam engine? Not to mention internal combustion engines, if materials need to be improved, a steam engine can do it, right? No. It can be seen that the author is a liberal arts student who admires the system, but in fact, the rapid progress in productivity in the early stage is the force that promotes the progress of the social system. As for warlocks, in addition to making delicious food and tea, they have pure barbaric power. Let's just talk about the protagonist's fire, and how good it is to combine the materials with character. Let's start with a small amount of output. If there are cannons, what about this ship? You can still hit the opposite sea ship. There is no need for explosive shells, a simple iron ball can smash through the wooden hull. In short, I have heard a saying that using this kind of extraordinary power for combat instead of production is the greatest ignorance. I didn't expect that after three hundred chapters, the protagonist is still so ignorant.

I have been following this book. ,, Personally, I feel that there are no shortcomings at all. It is normal to have some painful periods of racial integration, and the future development will be even better!

Chapter 93, the chapter name conflicts with the content, you will know if you read it carefully

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I have to make some comments about long dialogues. That doesn't mean you can't use long dialogues, but this way of writing, you have to make sense, right? Either to advance the plot or to enrich the characters. But there are obviously some long dialogues and neither. For example, in the scene where the slave owners have a meeting to rectify the protagonist, there is a long dialogue between two slave owners. One of the slave owners is simply a clean slate and even supports the liberation of the slaves. This is very good. The characteristics of the character have been described before he actually appears. But what did the author do? After the dialogue, you didn't explain the characters? You don't even have a name for people, how do you arrange such a long conversation with obvious characteristics between them? It is really pure dialogue, which neither promotes the plot nor has anything to do with characterization. No wonder others say that water is obviously a good hand. There are several dialogues, and it only takes a few dozen words to add a name and some physical features at the end, even if the character is... If the face never appears again, it will also make readers feel that the person in your book is flesh and blood But after you finish the dialogue, it is really over, and you have smashed the good cards... I hope the author can see that this book is not bad, and it is a good book 😅

After reading Chapter 115, tell me your thoughts. Calling it as rationality, I didn't see it in the protagonist at all. The several female characters who appeared in it all took things from the protagonist in different ways and stepped on the protagonist when they had the opportunity. Where is the protagonist? I accepted it out of nowhere. If you write it in a female channel, the male protagonist may kneel down and lick it and there may be many readers. I don't know what I think when you write this kind of virgin-like protagonist in a male channel. Perhaps every author has more or less a disease of literary youth, always feeling that being pretentious is good. The protagonist is a very hypocritical person. No plan, no goal, everything is out of necessity. How good would it be if you replaced the character of An Bitch with the male protagonist, who has goals and abilities, and can use everything available to achieve his goals, while also tricking others. Now the protagonist is not likeable, and the supporting characters are not likeable either. The protagonist's mother eats cards and treats others better than herself. The female supporting role somehow takes advantage of the protagonist and takes advantage of him. The protagonist seemed to be reluctant, but he rushed to lick it like a dog. The biggest problem with this book is that the characters are not likable.

It's good if the protagonist doesn't stud horses and doesn't pick up random girls. It's okay if the other subordinates have several wives. I can only say that the protagonist is relatively innocent and is a good man in modern society. The key is that a general and the protagonist's mother get together, so what's going on? Even if we are together, we must be with someone with better conduct. He is still a famous playboy. He even got the widow pregnant outside, and he is still the son of the heroine's grandfather. What does this mean? The protagonist keeps her body as pure as a jade, the outside world is open, and her mother is taken into the harem. This is not as good as letting the protagonist stall a horse. He took a sip of poison and didn't recover for a long time.

When a leader is in the early stages of establishing a power, he goes out to work as a doctor. His subordinates advise him that he still has a good name. If he doesn't go and see it now, he will stay in the mountains for the rest of his life. This is nonsense. The early stage of a power establishment is the golden period for his subordinates to be loyal to the leader. After this point, a personal mark is left that cannot be changed in a lifetime (not to mention the ancient times, even the modern political system cannot be changed, which is equivalent to an unsolvable matter). If you want to farm and fight for hegemony, don't look like a young man with a youthful face. The world is so big and I want to see it. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would definitely have a bunch of Yuan Shikai.

I just read it, and the author's rush to set up the setting somewhat affected the reading experience. Although it reads smoothly and is better than a white text with no logic, I always feel that it is too hasty, which means that if the reading is too long, the continuity will be interrupted and it is easy to lose fans. I hope that the plot will be integrated into the story and unfold slowly The second is the sentence problem. Why not just set the Andean people to have Chinese names and speak Chinese? It's really awkward for us to talk with Western names. I don't mean to sound like a translator, but... I can't help but recall that the protagonist of a certain Western background online novel said to a female thief, "You are a beautiful woman, how can I be a thief?" It was really dramatic in an instant.

How crooked. I used to wonder why such a writing style and careful plot writing were not popular at all. But after reading about a hundred chapters, I realized that there were no explosive points at all. The main plot is also the lord's hook, the spell research hook, the knight's hook, the farming hook. Everything is involved, but nothing is outstanding. Those who want to read arcana, when they come in, they see the lord farming, and they want to see the lord farming and hegemony. After a while, it was changed to the knight advanced class, but before I could wait. After a while, I estimate that it may become arcane again. I feel that writing a work is afraid of covering everything but not going deep enough. Although many of the popular articles are just plain writing, don't worry about how other people lower their IQs, how bloody they are, how poisonous they are, most of them are popular because they have grasped the core points. This book does not feel that it is a slow-burning problem, but that there may be certain problems in the subject matter, plot and plot structure, otherwise the results should not be just like this!