Monster Hunter That Started as a Pirate

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I always feel that there is no sense of immersion in the author's writing. The whole process is narrated from the author's perspective without bringing in the protagonist🤔

When reading fan fiction, you cannot follow the original work. What is a fan fiction? It is a secondary creation rather than adding pig's feet to the original work. It is a fan fiction. When writing fan fiction, you cannot follow the same path as the pig's foot. Otherwise, it is better to read the original work.

Author, please do your best! Although I am injured and have no money to subscribe to the big reward, I will still give you free recommendation tickets

It feels like I'm telling a story. Most of the time I'm introducing something.

The plot is good, it doesn't have the feeling of being in control like in other people's novels, but the author's writing style needs to be improved.

I won't talk about description and writing style. . . But why is the protagonist as childish as a child in the beginning? !! He's already running for third grade

I looked at a few pictures, and they were a bit too nonsense and too watery. Same, let them dry out.

Sofa, hope to stick with it, I like One Piece so I like to read One Piece fanfiction,

This kind of foreshadowing is indeed a bit boring, but as a otaku born in the 90s, pirates and monster hunters will naturally not be missed. The author will provide recommendations every day. I hope that I can write better and better in the future (✪▽✪)!

I don't like the first 296 chapters you wrote. How about you rewrite it.

I've read the author's books and it's not that hard to read. Why are there so few people reading them? Some of them have tens of thousands of fans and I think they are similar to what you wrote. Maybe it's because there are so few people reading the monster hunting genre.

Look at this introduction. . . I. . . 😠

Go to God Eater World, Tokyo Ghoul World, Attack on Titan World

I'll just finish my job and forget it. It doesn't look good in the first place, so I'll just die like this.

It's obvious that I've improved, but the writing is really poor.

To be honest, I'm sorry that I can't stand it anymore. I don't have a sense of immersion. The protagonist is also too nerfed. I wanted to see if there were any Monster Hunter novels because I was playing "Monster Hunter: World" recently. I found several novels but I was not satisfied. Also, the author is good at creating art. I suggest you write another one. Books, also, don't over-emphasize the protagonist. Most people nowadays like to read cool novels, and I do too. The protagonist's presence in this book is a bit too low. Don't write in a narrative way. Think about yourself as a reader. When writing, you can look at novels written by other authors.

It feels like your way of writing One Piece and Hunting Another World is more about battle scenes, rather than story development and character descriptions. The most difficult thing about writing a human novel is the interaction between your protagonist and the original protagonist. If you respect the original work too much, it's better to read the original work. Too many changes and you lose the feeling of being a fan. Why does it feel like the novel you wrote does not have the protagonist of One Piece? They are just background walls and very uncomfortable for One Piece fans.

I've been seeing it on the shelves, but why haven't I seen a monster from Monster Hunter? Is this book just about the monster hunting system? ? ? 🤔