Keeping the Flame Alive

The account is too low-level and the comments are slight. I didn't want to post it. However, it's the first time I've seen someone who writes a book about feelings. I support it spiritually. Let me share a few points. 1. There are too many shadows of the fight at the beginning. Although the ending of the divorce is different later, the ending feels like a forced twist and is unnatural. It's best not to do it. Today's readers all have preconceived opinions. It's better to tell a straightforward story with a similar beginning. 2. It is best to use less personal pronouns in the book, such as I, Qi, Er, etc. This type of personal pronoun is not in line with the environment setting of this book. It has a feeling of being neither ancient nor modern, and it will not feel immersive when reading. 3. If possible, use less explanatory text. The author has obviously put a lot of thought into the introduction of the sects in the book. However, if he mentions too many sects at once, the readers will not be able to remember them and will not appreciate them. The most important thing in a novel is the characters and plot, and the readers are most concerned about the characters. The storytelling is followed by the writing style. If the story is smooth and the writing style is simple, most readers can accept it. However, too much explanatory text will affect the advancement of the plot. Readers cannot see the plot and only have a bunch of explanatory text, which greatly affects the viewing experience. If you really want to explain it, it's best to write it separately. Introduce it to readers bit by bit.

It's rare to find a real author who doesn't write a book for money and is willing to put in the effort to revise the previous text. To be honest, no matter how good the book is, I admire this kind of author, because I can't do it like her. It's not just me, but everyone in the comment area can't do it. Can't you give some respect to those who persist with their heart? I believe this book will get better and better. Come on, author, don't give up.

Rubbish novel, so much nonsense. Sales are all based on tips, it's disgusting. If you don't think about the novel, just reading it will do the trick. There is as much nonsense as a river. You think you are the Chen Dong from before. The routine is so old and has nothing new at all. This kind of book is full of nonsense and has no new ideas. At first glance, it looks like a book written by a cute newbie. If you write it like this, it will make readers even more disgusted. Readers are not fools…

This is... Amazing. It's my first time to write a book, and I only have 280,000 words. This is such a powerful network. . . . .

Wow, Bai Mengshu is already a eunuch? Get the money and run?

The autumn wind is bleak, and it's that cold time of year again. When Xiao Lizi got up early in the morning, he felt a chill in his belly. He suddenly felt sad and couldn't help but sigh: Alas! If we hadn't been forced to make a living back then and had too few things to do, our family wouldn't be a eunuch.

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What the hell is this writing about? There are actually hundreds of alliances? Is this the so-called return to the rich in full and the common people to be divided equally?

Sure enough, if you have money, you will be awesome. The 250,000-word eunuch novel actually entered the Hall of Masterpieces.

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