One Piece: The Prison of the Dead

Tell me your personal opinion. The first point is too straightforward. Let's go straight to it. The title of the first chapter is O'Hara, the first paragraph is about Robin waking up the protagonist, and the first plot points out the protagonist's abilities. There was also a very straightforward explanation. It seems too deliberate, and the author's presence is too obvious. Write half and leave half. There is a bit of room for imagination. If ten people watch it, they will have ten kinds of imagination. Don't give it a damn, out of ten Pirates fanfics, nine start with Robin O'Hara, all of them are scum. The second point is that fan fiction should be written about fan fiction, and the words fantasy and martial arts should not appear at the end, it would be too dramatic. The author's writing style is obviously too weak. The third point, no, think about it yourself. Some people will say you are a jerk, just go ahead and write. Sorry, the requirements for reading and writing are different. Money is a good thing. Whether you give it or not depends on whether you have the ability to take it.

I want to know what the author thinks about Robin becoming a Marine. I won't talk about the Navy slaughtering Robin's hometown. Can I find the historical text in the Navy? Or can I live a stable life in the navy?

Whether it's from Goldfinger or Robin's point of view, he should be a pirate, right? Goldfinger has to kill people to become stronger. The navy can't kill people casually, even pirates. Robin's whole family was killed by the navy. You let her go to the navy?

I would like to give the author a suggestion. If the power system is too chaotic and easy to collapse in the later stage, it is best to convert all external energy into the energy possessed by the pirate world, such as deducting domineering power, physical strength, etc.

From the moment I saw the chapter about joining the navy, I knew this book was going to be a hit.

The missing chapters are: 4, 14, 68, 77, 159, 185, 195, 308, 312, 341, 343... I don't want to talk about the others. Also, Chapter 289 becomes Chapter 287

The writing is broken. There are more than 10 navy generals in what you wrote. 2 Grand prizes can suppress the 4 emperors. With the 5 old stars, there are almost 20 generals. The pirates have been destroyed long ago.

After reading almost 100 chapters, I feel that the improvement of strength and skills is too confusing. Not everyone has watched various animations and knows about telekinesis and the like. It is not a system that is forcibly equalized, but there are multiple systems. There are several systems in less than a hundred chapters. The two of them have not watched Yunliwuli. I am too confused after watching it.

😂I haven't started reading it yet, but the first chapter I read in the table of contents is about O'Hara. What the hell is this? Do all fan fiction writers like Robin this much?

The power system is extremely chaotic, and the author typically bites off more than he can chew. A good book is not just a mixture of popular elements. It has to have priorities. The author is completely enjoying himself, and it is not exciting enough.