One Piece: The Prison of the Dead

Let me share my personal opinion. First, it's too straightforward. The very first chapter is titled "Ohara," the first paragraph is Robin waking the protagonist, and the very first scene reveals the protagonist's ability. It even provides a direct explanation. It feels too deliberate; the author's presence is too obvious. Leave it half-written, half-written.

I'm curious about the author's thinking regarding Robin joining the Marines. Leaving aside the fact that the Marines massacred Robin's hometown, can she even find the Poneglyphs while in the Marines? Or is it because being a Marine guarantees a peaceful life?

Whether considering her cheat ability or Robin's personality, she should have been a pirate, right? A cheat ability requires killing to become stronger, but the Navy can't just kill anyone, not even pirates. Robin's entire family was killed by the Navy, so why would you send her to the Navy?

Here's a suggestion for the author: if the power system is too chaotic, it's prone to collapse later on. It would be best to convert all external energy into energy systems found in the One Piece world, such as deducting Haki, stamina, etc.

From the moment I read the chapter about joining the Navy, I knew this book was going to flop.

The missing chapters are: 4, 14, 68, 77, 159, 185, 195, 308, 312, 341, 343... I won't even mention the others. Also, chapter 289 is mistakenly written as chapter 287.

Your writing is terrible. You've included the strength of over ten Marine Admirals, and two Grand Marshals could easily overpower the Four Emperors. Add the Five Elders, and that's roughly twenty Admirals. The pirates would have been wiped out long ago.

I've read almost 100 chapters, and I feel the descriptions of skill and strength improvement are too chaotic. Not everyone has watched various anime and knows about things like telekinesis. These aren't part of a single system, yet they're forcibly equated, and there are multiple systems already. I haven't even read two of them yet, and I'm completely lost. It's so confusing!

😂 I haven't started reading it yet, but the first chapter in the table of contents is Ohara. What's going on? Do all fanfiction authors like Robin this much?

The power system is extremely chaotic. The author is typical of trying to do too much and ending up with a mess. A good book is not just a mixture of popular elements; it needs a hierarchy. The author is just indulging in self-indulgence, and not even that is exciting enough.