The Last Principality

The writing of this book was okay for me, but I always felt like it was missing something, as if it was too bland! Then suddenly today, I had read a similar book before. It was very epic, but unfortunately it seemed like a eunuch.

It's too strange to change the map. The plot is just good, but suddenly it is gone. Isn't it good to focus on one world? I have to add something else, and it is added inexplicably. The story is not coherent. It feels like reading a new novel.

It's a good story, but the author writes it too calmly and blandly. It doesn't seem to have a sense of substitution, it's a bit boring, and there is no main line or plan. It's like doing whatever comes to mind

Is this symbol used too often?

The wise and powerful protagonist leads his cunning and greedy subordinates to face stupid and mediocre enemies. This reminds me of the story of King Arthur.

Chapter 34 of Volume 4 is starting to get a little addictive. To write a fantasy novel, do you have to learn how to travel through different worlds and open dungeons like a wizard? .

A good story must have a good audience, a small stool in the front row

No, I just looked like a eunuch￣ ￣)σ

The writing is quite good, but the characters are not clear-cut

I ran ads several times but they were deleted by the system hhhhhhhh

Hey, you have to work hard and persevere once it's on the shelves. I still hope that the results of this book will get better and better.

Brother, I am Yin Zhi, the author of Demon Hunter. Don't be too direct when advertising, otherwise you will be blocked directly by the platform. I never block people in the book review section, but your review advertisement was blocked directly by the platform. I recommend you add a joke in front of the advertisement. That will be better.

I have read nearly a hundred chapters, and the relatively smooth writing style is what motivates me to continue reading. But there is a problem. I don't understand the story you wrote in these more than a hundred chapters? What kind of protagonist and supporting characters are portrayed? Even the background of the story is unclear. To be honest, it's too boring and the foreshadowing is too long!

I like to watch the farming part. One big problem is that the protagonist changes maps in a hurry every time. I don't know when and why he flies solo again.

The setting of this book is very good, but it would be better if the pace of the battles was written faster.

Wow, after waiting for so many days, it is finally on the shelves. Can we see more updates from the author? PS: After reading so many books, this is the first time that a new book has been released. I would like to leave a message to commemorate it. I won't tell you that I come to vote for recommendations every day.