Lord in the Oasis

He tested the poison and died from the poison. After reading fifty chapters, the author's knowledge level is really insufficient and he will make common sense mistakes. For example, after finding salt in the jackal camp, he repeatedly said that salt is a condiment. Why did they work so hard to make salt? You have to adjust it. Salt is a necessity of life! In addition to handicrafts, the most important things that the grassland nomads trade with the Central Plains are grain and salt. Then there are some details, including boiling salt, etc. The author takes it for granted, and it feels like he just pretends to understand. There are also places such as date palm trees. I guess the author checked the information, so he wrote a lot about how good and useful date palm trees are, showing how much he knows? Keep your pace, okay? Really wordy. For example, the protagonist can upgrade his soldiers and farmers. He first talks about how powerful the upgrade is after several paragraphs. The protagonist says "this is very good", and then goes on and on about how serious survival is and needs to be upgraded. The protagonist then says "this can be upgraded", and then combines it to talk about how great the upgrade is. It's so important and so useful. The protagonist says, "Well, we should upgrade." Then he upgrades the farmers' level to a few levels, upgrades the recruits' level to a few levels, and then says that the militia will not be upgraded. Then he talks for a long time about why not to upgrade, and finally writes several paragraphs about how to upgrade and what will happen after the upgrade. It's just a level up. Did you give birth to Nezha? Hold it for three years? I vomited. Farewell

I read this book and swallowed. Before I could say this very good evaluation, I couldn't help but smile bitterly and said: You are smiling bitterly🐴

Enter with caution, enter with caution! ! ! 49% really can't stand it anymore, I want to find the author and beat him up! Your data is wrong, I tolerate it. What you said before will be eaten later, and I will tolerate it. I tolerated it if you wrote the pig's trotter as two hundred and fifty, after all, it's a cool article. Your plot is lagging, your narration is wrong, and you have to write several chapters for one dialogue? The author wants to balance, saying how awesome, good and handsome his troops are (the NPC drooled and wrote it 50+ times when he saw it, yes I counted), but half of them die in a battle? Think of some conspiracy feelings that cannot be written about.

It feels like the protagonist is like a clown who trusts the system too much. Seeing the similar system of licking dogs here, the more I read, the more I understand. People who are self-reliant and smart will not rely on others all the time, nor will they like others to control them all the time. There will be no pie in the sky.

Frowning and pupils can be used as all expression adjectives and overused words in online articles.

He is really good at water, and a conversation can bring him a thank you.

What can I say? In the early days, I relied on the system to survive in the wild. . Although it is the same as what many book friends said. What the system lacks will give it. It's a bit inconsistent, but it's rounded off later with the weird setting that the system will be doomed without the host. It's still very interesting to watch in the early stages, even though the main character is a bit demonic. I still don't understand what character is. After the mid-term, the data collapsed, and the monetary system that was still calculated at the beginning was suddenly revealed by the author to mean that the protagonist has money. Then the force collapsed. It was agreed at the beginning that there would be a dozen or so knights in one principality. Suddenly, a church that had been used as the background in hundreds of chapters pulled out 400 of them. He got into a fight for no apparent reason, killed the gods for no apparent reason, and then pulled out the nobles of the world. . The force setting is even more broken. . Then it skipped directly to a year later. The numbers under his hands have become purely numbers. I was poisoned to death when I saw it playing here. Overall, the early days were pretty good. . .

Let's just say, is it possible that the desert in this book should be the Gobi Desert or the Gobi Desert, rather than a pure desert?

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Is it well written? Anyway, I like it very much, but the author must remember 1. The system is just incidental. Although it looks cool, drawing the lottery too quickly and accelerating the construction will only make the novel a mindless novel. Because it developed too fast and lacked training, the novel became Long Batian 2. Pay attention to the character description, the character of the important hero and the protagonist 3. Pay attention to the increase in hardships and setbacks, and don't go too smoothly. Appropriate abuse will increase the excitement 4. In addition to farming, there should be adventures and other interesting stories. If you use a single field to push troops, there will be a lot of people watching in the early stage, but it will only be less attractive later on. 5. To advance battlefield description, you must learn historical time travel war writing. I recommend you check out Lao Bainiu

The author was reading a book in the third grade of elementary school. I asked a date palm tree to produce 300 dates. One date palm weighs 20 grams. There are 20 date palm trees in total. How many kilograms of dates are there in total? Answer: 300 times 20 equals 6 kilograms. 6 Multiplied by 20 equals 120 kilograms. My son can do it in the third grade. How did the author get the kilograms?

Since the author is writing about the real world, the weapons and equipment of the dead soldiers should be recycled, and the feeding of the horses should be explained as soon as possible, as well as the maintenance of the equipment. The blacksmith shop should appear, but these cavalry have just appeared. I can understand it, but the food problem is the main two acres of coconut palm trees plus the total of 120 at the beginning. More than 100 people need to be raised, 240 frames are harvested, 78 frames are traded, and there is at most more than 100 left after feeding during the battle. One point, the wheat planted is not yet edible, the new dates are not yet ripe, and 100 people commented that one frame per ten people per day is not enough. I originally thought that there would be dried meat seized in the gnoll camp, or that the captured high-level gnolls were preparing to evacuate. There will also be some seizures of materials at some time, but they didn't say that even weapons and armor that are not in the game can be sold for money, so why not collect and buy those thirty sets of Jackal's chainmails and two-handed axes, as well as the armor and weapons of the Death Soldiers? It can be sold for at least 2,000 dinars, and it may not only be more, but also make more money from merchants, and the slave trade can also be continued! A hero with pig's feet shouldn't pity the weak enough to pity a group of wild beasts, right? Each set of jackal chainmail is almost 30 dinars at a 50% discount due to battle damage. Let alone a weapon, it is impossible to buy it for less than 60. After all, the protagonist said that the game continent has been fighting for years, and weapons and armor are in short supply. That is, 900 plus 2400 equals 3300, which is still the lowest price.

The author's writing in the early and middle stages is very good, but the author is an old demolition household. He has been demolished once before, then again, and finally his wife's house was demolished once. He revealed that he has no motivation to write a book, so he just muddles along.

In my opinion, this book is the magic grass that can make you a god. It really takes the genre of lord and management to its extreme.

I came across this book again in the introduction. This book, which was unfinished more than ten years ago, is actually so popular with editors.

As mentioned earlier, the population of the principality was only about 300,000, but it didn't take long for a viscount to recruit a militia force of 30,000. Is the author Doubi? Can a viscount have thirty thousand people? What about the Count? Where is the Duke? It's so ridiculous. A small viscount has one-tenth of the country's population.

As a souvenir, the data in this novel is messy. Originally, the data was not very large, but most of the results turned out to be wrong. For example, in the first chapter, there were more than 3,000 people in the main base, but after a few chapters, it became 2,500 people.        30，10，50，2，10，7，1 The duke and hundreds of knights came out, and even more ghostwriting later on, the plot didn't make sense anymore.

I can't stand watching Food Counting. That's not the main character's wisdom. It's the main character's pure lack of brains. It's extremely poisonous.

After reading a few chapters, this is a game article under the guise of another world. The whole article has the feeling of seeing a low-quality online game.

What kind of broken mechanism is the introduction? A book like this that was unfinished more than ten years ago can still be published.

The more people write, the more they get into the mood, and the results get better and better, which makes people want to read more and more, but your books are getting worse and worse as they are written. The first hundred or so chapters are very well written, and the next hundred to four hundred are just about okay. After four hundred, it becomes more and more disgusting. After six hundred, I can only talk about what I wrote. If you don't want to write about four hundred chapters, you might as well just write an outline and finish it.

However, the data of the lord class needs to be very rigorous. You sent me away in the first village. I have half an acre of cultivated land. Your father will clear it for you and starve to death. It is better to kill me directly. This is not a territory or an oasis. This is a pit.

Latecomers, please don't read it with your brain, it's illogical, full of nonsense, and nonsense.

It seems to be written by two different people. The first part is good, but the second part suddenly becomes boring. Stop watching!

Did someone change the writing later? Did the style of painting suddenly change?

It feels very strange. Starting from chapter 627, the novel has completely changed. Except for the name, the content has completely changed. Is this a change of author?

The advantages are: 1. Secret, 2. Convenient to obtain a steady stream of wood, 3. Convenient to capture wild jackals, 4. Convenient to mine mineral deposits in the mountains, 5. Obtain carnivorous furs of wild animals in the mountains, 6. It is best to establish animal husbandry. The grassland at the foot of the mountain is a natural pasture. Consider turning that place into the main base, and Dehreim just pretending to be the Kingdom of Bewilderment. The Yamashita base integrates troop training, slave hunting, production, and resource collection and can be used as a rear area. This will greatly improve the protagonist's power. However, do not open a branch base in the desert. It is too barren and development is too slow without relying on the system. In fact, most of the buildings in this gift pack should be used in the base of the mountain, so that the base of the mountain can be quickly formed.

The high temperature is 60 degrees from morning to afternoon, and it is minus 20 degrees at night? Look at Saudi Arabia and North African countries.

Another slave to the system. If the system doesn't issue tasks, the protagonist doesn't know what to do.