Soft, Melt, Things

I feel that the stories here, especially the short and light short films, can be made into movies. The author and the majority of book lovers can give the production company a try 🙂🙂

I have subscribed to all of them. Please give me a thumbs up. I discovered this book is a month old. I have basically read it all in one month. Although there are a few short stories that I haven't read yet, I will definitely read them. I like Li Goudan the most because he can always give me a tragic ending. Long Aotian appears at the beginning every time. Lu Qiao is worthy of being the protagonist. There is a short story that just started with Lu Qiao. I didn't watch it. I ended up watching it and jumped back to watch Lu Qiao. . . . He will not be forgotten. Wusu is the Holy Mother every time. . . I won't say anything else. Jock's endings are each the best and most bland. Dahai is loyal and professional in supporting roles.

Let me tell you, a video author named cheems All-Stars recently made videos about the content of "Light Short San" on various platforms, and made each novel chapter into a separate video for profit. I don't know if the author has authorized it, but one thing that comes to mind is plagiarism.

I like it very much, it's very relaxing to watch.

After reading "Duan Qing San" and "Softening Materials", I found that the author is really not suitable for writing such topics with rich scientific knowledge (imaginary essays are okay). Not only does the logic in some situations go black, but he also always ignores some objective facts when writing articles. For example, "Country" impressed me deeply. When it comes to the great migration of mankind, it completely ignores political games or economic conflicts. Does the United States pay to help immigrants? If the country is gone, what use is the dollar? Why doesn't the United States, which has more money and a relatively low population density, accept immigrants and charge immigration fees (the United States is the biggest beneficiary of the world war, there is no reason to be stupid in this matter). In this case, the immigration theory cannot be established at all. The premise for the so-called 63 countries to change the crisis of laws is that they have technical proof rather than just discovery and concealment. The author can satirize some things, and the satire is very real, but since some of the selected examples are based on society, it is better to use a more logical writing style to convince your readers. You guys, don't talk nonsense with me. This is not a so-called cool article (not to mention cool articles are also about logic). The author definitely hopes to write a story with connotation and a certain depth. Here, the suggestion is what I can do to help as someone who hopes the novel can be written better. Whether you accept it or not depends on your decision. I don't know if there are many typos in the rest of the story. I hope the author can review the article a few more times before updating it, so as not to affect understanding😊

This author is a bit awesome. He didn't write this work for money, right?

I just want to ask if anyone else thinks like me that this kind of book should be sold only in bookstores 😂

It is recommended to read this book when you are happy, the happier the better

This work is not perfect The top-heavy main line of the story, the hurried way everyone speaks in the book, and the routine of the story are all inferior to the story in the previous book. The author's progress can be seen in the book here, and it can also be seen that the author's skills are not solid. Every time I read the stories in the book, I feel that there are still some things that have not been told and made clear. Especially since most of the stories end very quickly in the last few chapters... It feels very bad. It's like inflating a balloon too big but deflating it early because it's afraid of blowing up. Having mentioned the shortcomings, let's talk about themProgress This book is not without improvement, but it is not obvious. Compared to the previous light short series, it feels like there isn't much progress. Although the later stories ended hastily, the rhythm of the early story is still very good, because it is longer than the story in the previous book, so it doesn't feel big. For example, the love history between the first story and Wu Su is very interesting. But it has nothing to do with the ending. If this story continues to be written, Wusu may also have foreshadowing. Maybe the author didn't want to write too much. The length of the story is lengthened, and the author has more space to describe one thing. But it will also lead to a certain gap. It's like concentrated hydrochloric acid being diluted. Fortunately, the author did not lose control in this aspect, so that the story did not feel weak. Except for the ending, it was all expected, and the plot in the middle was also interesting. But when the story is stretched out, there is also a problem: the author can no longer open his imagination unscrupulously. It can be seen that the ideas in this book are obviously not as big as those in the short film, because in the short film, people can not care about the subtle logic and care about whether the world view is reasonable. But it's different when the length is extended. The key plots are no longer closely connected to the key plots. The blank space in the middle must take into account the continuity of the subsequent plots. If you open your mind too much, you may not know how to proceed with the plot. The key plots all know how to progress, but they don't know how to connect them. That's a lot to say. Generally speaking, this work does not meet my imagination of the sequel to "Light, Short, and Loose"... Maybe my expectations are too high.

In fact, I think these two completed short stories by the author are extremely suitable for publication. . . Is it possible to submit this as a manuscript or something? I don't like reading it on my mobile phone. It feels like a waste, but I still feel good about holding it