Infinite Supreme Wizard

The growth of the protagonist is almost not seen. The basic mode is farming with foresight - look down on others and criticize them - jump out and make waves if you are not strong enough - get pushed to death by others because of your arrogance - then run away and open a new map - then repeat: farming - talkative - arrogant - get pushed to death - distracted and run away - farm again. This is the formula of this book. The number of words is all based on different world settings and the protagonist's self-explanation of three views. Growth? No! Look down on others, and immediately show off when he has some achievements, and then suddenly find that he is the enemy of the whole world, he keeps struggling and then is suppressed to death. If it doesn't work out, let's talk about the fate of heaven and earth... Why was he an otaku in his previous life and didn't receive much high-end education (at this time, he completely forgot that the protagonist's core is the knowledge system); What fate is to want to kill the protagonist (the protagonist feels very good about himself, and he always falls in the same pit after dying so many times); What's the matter of maintaining the bottom line? Although they have good original intentions (and then they don't know how to restrain themselves, they use the prophet to make all kinds of wild moves, first causing harm to others and then themselves, and then helplessly saying: This is all the fault of fate), all the protagonists are ultimately miserable for two reasons: 1. Greedy and arrogant, 2. They seem to be self-aware, but in fact they are so promiscuous on the road of self-deception. So stop cleaning up, the main plot is gone, the protagonist's growth is stuck, the content of the book is nothing more than how the author wants the protagonist to die, and in order to control the fate of the protagonist, the author has always avoided the protagonist's growth, and will die whenever he wants. Not only does the word count fall short, but it also teases the readers.

What kind of thing is written? It's messy, rambling, random, and has no main tone.

Normally, authors write novels to tell stories, but you write a novel to fill your cup. Of course, I hope the author has time to read the novel Devil's Cage. No matter how hard you work, you will just write the novel just to eat your own shit like him.

To be honest, I read it for the wizard stream. I read dozens of chapters of the main text, not many, but this chapter made me have to go to the book review circle several times and check the author's homepage... Then, my desire to read the book disappeared Ah, this... Generally speaking, this is an old writer. He wrote many good books in the past, but he was banned for a while. He came back to the world, and fewer people know about it. From the long reviews of old readers, you can tell that this book is full of depression, and the normal operation-crazy pit making, many people are tired of reading it... Also, the pace is really too slow. When I came back after reading the book review, I couldn't wait patiently anymore, because there are no high points, only fluctuations... I don't dare to bet, I really don't dare to look forward to it, more than a thousand chapters, a few days of leisure time and my own money, no need, really no need, with this time and money, I read other books - it seems - more delicious, plus the author just opened more, "burp!" I am full, how about you?

I came here for HP fans. I think it is very important for the author to understand HP. I have read the seven Harry Potter books eleven times, and the setting of magic in them is very specific. It is completely an idealistic magic system, similar to cultivation, one thought creates a world. Although it does not involve the multiverse, its power is also very powerful. The most fearful thing is that fan authors bring their own systems to compete with the HP idealistic system, but the author of this book is better, directly replacing HP with the DND series, treating the HP system as a low-level level of the DND series, filled with various elemental magics. I'm here to treat you guys, don't do elemental magic. Do you really think that the materialistic system can win over the idealistic system? Will the evocation system be more powerful than divine power? God said there was to be light, so there was light. This is no different than your gathering of light elements. Your gathering of light elements does not even come from the photons produced by the annihilation of electrons and holes in real society🐂🍺. Furthermore, Harry Potter is not without wind, fire, water, and earth, but they only add some idealistic concepts to the basic wind, fire, water, and earth. The main body is still idealism, not a mess of elements that interact with each other. Besides, the fire of idealism cannot be extinguished. Unless you use the power of idealism to extinguish it, will your entire water element extinguish the human fire? Why don't you go to Naruto World? Sasuke released Amaterasu, and you spit and destroyed Amaterasu. How cool. If you first define the system of someone else's novel and then belittle it, it will appear that the author is very ignorant.

The author is great 👍, and the writing is very good. There are a lot of personal things added to the article, which is very interesting to think about. Come on!

1. This beginning is a bit poisonous. As a teammate, the nanny betrays and stabs the protagonist to death in the back. I have read a few books about this type of reincarnation at first, but they were generally not very good. 2. Chapter 40 is a very good paragraph. Isn't it better to tailor it? I suggest the author read it again. Will it feel a little intellectually depressing? 3. The title of this book is not very good. There should not be too many titles with similar starting points. People who read it will be tired of aesthetics and have no desire to click. 4. I originally thought it was a seedling, but after reading the book reviews and word count, is the author going to pounce? Although I didn't see the backend, I guess it collapsed in the later stage. 5. If you fail, remember to learn lessons from the new book. I feel that the author still has great potential.

I think it's good that the author can write about Star Wars (Star Wars)

It's very interesting. Maybe my IQ is not high, or maybe I'm used to reading ten lines at a time and don't think the author talks too much.

In the early stage, there was too little description of the protagonist, and it was impossible to highlight the characteristics of the character. In the middle stage, the writing gradually got better, but in the later stage, it was not mastered well

By the way, were a lot of things deleted in Chapters 1 and 2? I can't understand

It feels very good, but I personally think there are still some shortcomings: 1. This beginning is a bit poisonous. As a teammate, the nanny betrays and kills the protagonist with a stab in the back. I have read a few books about this type of reincarnation at first, but they were generally not very good. 2. Chapter 40 is a very good paragraph. Isn't it better to tailor it? I suggest the author read it again. Will it feel a little intellectually depressing? 3. The title of this book is not very good. There should not be too many similar titles at the beginning. People who read it will be tired of aesthetics and have no desire to click. 4. I thought it was a seedling, but after reading the book reviews and word count, is the author going to pounce? Although I didn't see the backend, I guess it collapsed in the later stage. 5. If you fail, remember to learn lessons from the new book. I feel that the author still has great potential.

Recently, copying book reviews has become popular in the online literary world. Authors copy interesting complaints and funny jokes from book friends into novels, increasing the number of words, reducing workload, interacting with book friends, and achieving numerous benefits in one fell swoop. There are even authors who started by copying book reviews and asked book friends to cooperate with crowdfunding to write books. They had a lot of fun with book friends, with high interaction, high traffic, high subscriptions and votes. The author can arrange a character similar to Deadpool, break the fourth wall, interact with book friends, complain about pig feet and the plot, and make jokes, which should have a good laugh effect. Actually, the author's pig's feet are too withdrawn. He is so strong that he would rather bend than bend. He is like a lone wolf, causing himself great suffering and hatred. In fact, it is quite unnecessary. And because Pig's Foot is always changing scenes and maps, no supporting character can keep up with Pig's Foot (Pig's Foot's wife hasn't appeared for a million words), so even if there are very exciting or controversial supporting characters, they will disappear quickly. This cannot but be said to be a pity. There is a popular saying now, I just like the way you can't stand me and can't kill me. A supporting character with such characteristics can overcome all obstacles and occasionally get angry with pig's feet (complaining about pig's feet for readers). Look, you failed again, right? Such a bright color may bring vitality to the article about bitterness and hatred.

I'm new to this book, and after reading so many chapters, I can't help but say some things. First of all, the background information is very detailed and comprehensive. Some ideas are also very good. However, some shortcomings in the writing are obvious. It can be seen that the author wants to slowly reveal some backgrounds and settings in the plot. However, many times he tries too hard, too much, resulting in incoherent reading and a sense of interruption in the plot. Sometimes when a tense plot should push the plot forward, suddenly a large section of information is suddenly used to explain or express a certain aspect of the protagonist, or even a chapter of information, which not only interrupts the reader's tension, but also interrupts the coherence of the entire rhythm. Some readers who don't know why will scold you. I hope the author can notice and improve it in time.

I am a long-time reader of the author, and I have followed all the books except Alien Blood. I also joined a group of readers and survived the low ebb of being old and helpless. After several battles, pitfalls, ups and downs in performance, and various situations, it was no longer a hardship, it was simply a disaster, but the author survived, and many die-hards still supported me. I am really moved. The controversial post I posted before was not to show off how knowledgeable I was, but to worry about the author, fearing that he would follow the same old path of writing and dissuade readers. Once the results are not good, a vicious circle will occur. Only by retaining readers can we survive. What readers need is fun. Even if the author is unconventional and uninhibited, he still has to provide readers with fun so that they have the motivation to continue reading. As for the reverse golden thigh, the map conversion is stiff, the upgrade technology tree can be cut at any time, the characters are awkward and cannot be stretched no matter how hard you twist them, these are all poisonous points that will cover up the author's endless flash designs and refreshing unique creativity. I read Lao Wu's books mainly because of these ideas and designs. At present, Lao Wu has effectively covered up his old problems in writing. He uses distraction and changing maps to change the setting and upgrade system, and has embarked on a path similar to the real-time strategy flow. Although he forgets the plot of the main world just by looking at it, the sub-plot is indeed good-looking. Who cares about the main plot? I wish Lao Wu will write better and better. Although it is difficult to become a god with this book, niche masterpieces are already expected. I hope Lao Wu will improve the Wanxiangmen system and give readers a better reading experience. I will give you lots of rewards and become a winner in life!

I very much hope that the author will stick to it. After all, the author's problem has always been to stop updating. If he can stick to three or four books, he will be firmly established as a great god, his income will also increase, his vision and status will also improve, and he will not be in the same situation as now, learning from Tang San, haha

These two look pretty similar. In fact, Kane never understood what he was. He was too self-righteous.

Suddenly, I thought of a problem in Lao Wu's works. Pig's Foot has always been bitter and grudged against the malice from the world, as well as the Virgin White Lotus's hindrance and betrayal. Pig's Foot was in darkness but still struggled to reach the light. This disharmony caused the collapse of the plot and structure of the final article. There are two things missing from Lao Wu's works. In other words, it lacks a mental state. The first one is that Lao Wu saw through the pig's feet but couldn't let go. Even though you are in darkness, you still want to look towards the sunshine. You know clearly that the ultraviolet rays of the sun will scorch you, but it still rushes up. If you don't die, who else will die. This is what readers generally call the reverse golden thigh. Let me tell you, there are two solutions. Since you start killing, kill until the whole world is convinced or afraid; if you are not able to do it, then step back and watch him rise and watch his building collapse. It is not bad to be a bystander and get some benefits along the way. The second is that all the books are too depressing because they lack humor. There are madmen, white lotuses, and careerists in Lao Wu's books, but there are no funny ones. Funny characters are very important. They are brainless and joyful. They usually enliven the atmosphere. They are despised/preached/show off their big brother demeanor by the pig's feet. They are useful props. At critical moments, the European Emperor's character can be revealed and breakthroughs are impossible. Or the author did not make up a neat plot knot, because funny characters always have good luck. In the end, Pig's Foot gained some insights from Doubi, which added a lot to the whole article. The best example is the Bone Dragon in Blasphemy. His name is Gregory. He uses the name of the Pope. He is so funny that he is afraid of death. I still remember it after more than ten years. I want to tell the author that reality is already very difficult. If you make the book even more miserable, who would want to read it? Why not learn from Deadpool, use your mouth to tease the world in the dark abyss, and lighten the depressed atmosphere. In fact, there is also a higher realm, which is Jigong. See through it, see through it, put it down, but still pick it up, get it done while playing around, and then say "Others laugh at me for being crazy, but I laugh at others because they can't see through it." The person next to me said, "Master, you are cheating." How fun this is. The lacking mental state mentioned above is the mental state of being open-minded and self-deprecating when facing the darkness. With this kind of mental state in it, you can effectively reverse the twisting of the pig's feet and retain readers. The following is my own personal stuff, I would like to share it to make everyone laugh. The most miserable mental state of Pig's Foot is that he cannot see through the world of mortals, but struggles in it. This is what is called being unable to control oneself. A higher mental state is to see through the world of mortals, to be able to grasp one's own direction when struggling, to be able to protect oneself and to rescue those around him. A higher level is to see through the world of mortals, and then withdraw, either as a spectator, or by taking advantage of others' strength, laughing and cursing as they survey the world. The next level is to see through the world of mortals and be able to control the general trend. I can use all the power of the world to my advantage. You can besiege the city from all sides, and I will directly reduce the dimensionality and strike to erase everything. The highest level, I am Hongchen, please start your transfer.

Two misunderstandings about Harry Potter: 1. Deng is gay: The reason for this is that the Vatican called on believers to ban "Ha" (which promotes witchcraft), and the author's retaliatory response at the press conference, which was the official second setting later imposed. It is normal in the original work, and it does not mean that the author is political or corrupt, and the carnival of rotten girls can be stopped; 2 . Hermione's black skin incident: The author was involved in the original casting of the movie, which means that Emma's image is in line with the author's ideal image, so the statement that "Hermione is black skin" is untenable - not to mention the author's favorable response, as a Western public figure, does she dare to tell the truth under the pressure of "racial discrimination"?

This is not a readable novel, this is a popular science encyclopedia of Western fantasy magic... The author is too good at being a teacher, but his words are not focused, and his thinking is scattered and lacks priority. As a result, it is obviously a good subject matter, but the reading experience is extremely poor! ! Extremely bad! !

I'm here to write a speech again. In fact, the system of Wanxiang Gate, as a variant of Infinite Flow, has great potential to be tapped. Combined with the author Jun's love for writing openings, his love for changing the world view and upgrading the system, his love for showing off his imagination, and his love for opening reverse golden thighs, etc., The pig's feet of the second book can be determined. He is a black-hand unit employed by the Wanxiang Sect, specializing in black jobs and handling the endgame in corrupt situations. In this way, the world and settings can be changed back and forth. Readers can also accept a big defeat. You can see the pig's feet slapping the boss with his face when he goes out, and watch the pig's feet die in various ways. Concerning the elements of Cthulhu, the evil god cannot be defeated, which is the literary style of the Cthulhu novel. The pig's feet fight against the boss on his own, and failure and death are the inevitable results. Let Pig's Foot lean against the Vientiane Gate, and participate in it as a gold medal fighter in a high-dimensional war (the emphasis here), so that Pig's Foot and the readers can breathe a sigh of relief when facing failure. According to the author's tone, writing about strategy and writing about Cthulhu are very consistent. Even in reality, the author's works seem to be addicted to Cthulhu. I still remember the two endings of Glorious Days and the flashback of another book, so even if I was vomited by God more than once, I am still curious about what other ideas the author has, and I hope that the author can continue to write blockbuster works. I hope the author can control his ancient power, succeed in attracting readers, enter a positive cycle, and become a great master!

It's a rubbish novel. The content is verbose and verbose. No wonder the author is still a level 2 after finishing a novel with more than 6 million words.

I feel like the protagonist likes to have the left cheek slapped and then move it to the right cheek. Why are the gods reviving? The emperor is not anxious and the eunuch is anxious. He compromises again and again. While lamenting the wizard's failure, he blames himself and wipes their butts. He gives away all kinds of things. It feels like the Kaishan Tang. Whenever you want something, you always trade, and everything others want is just a gift. Firstly, you are not a native of this world, and secondly, you are too naive to fight, so you don't know how to run away. Moreover, I am beaten once, I retaliate, and then continue.

I was persuaded to quit in the first few chapters, but I just can't figure it out. You were killed by the nanny in the first chapter, and your house was ransacked later in the second chapter. Why are you still going to Hogwarts to learn magic? Aren't others on guard against you? Besides, I hate watching Harry Potter fanfics the most! He can read more than three hundred chapters! Awesome

Just like my message at the end of Chapter 50 of "Sin-Eating Choice", if I didn't do it well at the beginning, I wouldn't be lucky enough to try my best. I also made a brief summary of why it didn't work. It's my bad habits, so I won't go into details here. I opened this post to decide on the genre of my new book. After all, I have several projects before. I continue writing Western Fantasy because I want to deepen a genre. And I am also the kind of person who is not sociable and can stay in a restaurant for N years without being ignored. It turned out that I was overthinking it, and the original editor disappeared. It can be seen that this 'gentlemen's friendship' has faded away a bit. People didn't even know when they left, and they pretended that our relationship was not bad. Okay, let's get down to the topic. I think that I can only write about those categories, such as officialdom, shopping malls, and science and technology academics. Without that experience, I feel like I can't even start with Baidu information. I guess I can't write even if I'm strong enough. After thinking about it, I will write a few projects, build a building, and choose those who are interested. Finally, I will make statistics and make a decision. 1. Xianxia style is definitely not orthodox, because the classical style of diction and sentence making consumes the brain and makes writing difficult. It can only be said that the setting is that of a fairy. 2. The flow of two worlds, the comparison of modern costumes, and the hard work of learning skills in other worlds. This has a set concept. The protagonist will be a cave fairy, a fairy version of a green environmentalist. He will get feedback through the five elements of Feng Shui, sorting out the earth's energy, protecting the dragon's veins, and so on. 3. Infinite Streaming. I also have regrets about "Edge". I will plan it carefully when I write it again. However, I am afraid that it will be difficult to achieve the status of the "Silent Hill" chapter. I can only say that this system has matured. If I write it again, I will definitely pay attention to many aspects. 4. Marvel flow, this one is somewhat prepared. The protagonist is Druid Yamaguchi, but I plan to directly deepen its four series into warriors, stalkers, mages and priests. It started as a Chinatown society, that is, it started as a miscellaneous fish who could have something to do with Kunlun. 5. It's still a Western fantasy. The setting of "Sin-Eating Choice", with 24 extraordinary attributes, 8 super-magic spells, the Book of Thousand Dharma + special skills and fighting methods similar to Naruto's various escape techniques, I think it is still a bit unfinished. 6. Apocalyptic flow, this is the same as Xianxia. I don't have much concept yet, but I don't like to kneel in the real system. After all, in my opinion, Resident Evil and so on are unreasonable. Without some mysterious elements, if the protagonist survives so many events, the author would have to trick him, otherwise it would not be justified just as a matter of probability. Okay, I can only write about these 6 types, please choose one if you are interested.

According to the current development of the plot, it would be very inconsistent to not mention the Eastern Powers at all. If the author doesn't want to write more, just activate the Kyushu Barrier. The pig's trotters were taken from the mysterious oriental power and did not involve much about the East Asian cultural circle. In the end of the world, if an immortal is born in the east and activates the Kyushu barrier to isolate the inside and outside, there is no need to write about the east!

Author, 90% of your book is nonsense narration, and only 10% is practical information. Moreover, many of the narrations are inconsistent in their analysis. As you read this book, you feel like you can't stand it. What should you do?

I've read about a hundred or two chapters, but I almost put it down and couldn't pick it up. I'm not sure if I can continue reading. Does this book have any merits? Yes, it is full of imagination and has a huge worldview, but that is all. In my opinion, the biggest flaw of this book is that the author made too many concessions in telling a good story for the sake of his own imagination and worldview. The explanatory text takes up almost 2/3 of the entire text, and the actual story telling content is less than 1/3. The author also made a mistake that male video authors like very much, and mixed too much of his own personal stuff into the work. In addition, the author's writing power is not enough to control such a huge world view. The protagonist keeps repeating it. I am very awesome - the second-rate enemy whom I just mentioned suddenly cheated the protagonist because of xx - although the protagonist was cheated, he is even more awesome - another second-rate enemy appeared. How can I say it, it is really awkward In short, I felt that this book is a typical tasteless book, tasteless and a pity to abandon.

You are really too strong to be able to write a former reincarnation person and a dark-type big boss as a savior. In a parallel future, in order to save the world, you fight against the bad teammates and old gods all over the world. The foreign gods come to the streets, and then the world is shattered. What kind of spirit is this? The spirit of internationalism and benefiting others. Are you sure this is what the dark boss should do?

When will you finish Laowu? It's almost 5.5 Million words long. Is it fun to play with a creator-level protagonist and a bunch of ants? And what level of character would you be who still misses an old house? This is not arrogance, this is retardation, okay? I really don't want to complain about you anymore. Let's wrap up the next dozens of chapters. Let's finish them as soon as possible. Why dragging them on?