The Fortune-Teller Will Start with a Life Span of One Million Years

What should I say? Lao Wu particularly likes to talk about detailed settings. I suggest that these things be taken out separately and written as an "Appendix·Setting Collection/Announcement Book", which is attached to the end of each chapter like an advertisement in the animation interlude. Otherwise, it would be almost a chapter to talk about the cultivation process. The story itself does not advance much, resulting in no detailed description of the story. In fact, sometimes readers have no feeling about the cultivation system and the Five Elements and Bagua. Yes, just skip it and wait until you meet the need. For example, if the enemy uses some soul-targeting magical power to kill everyone, and then it has no effect on the protagonist, when the enemy shouts "Nani???", Explain that it is because the time traveler has absorbed the soul of the host, and the physical bloodline is also a mirage, which has a soul bonus. In addition, he majors in soul skills, so he is immune to soul attacks below immortals. This is more natural. Another one, I personally suggest that you read The Super Mechanic and refer to the daily descriptions of Leather Armor (how bad it is). Even if it is just nonsense and chatting, the whole job cannot be funny. The first few chapters of this book are a bit deliberately funny. In fact, it is not necessary. Your specialty has always been telling stories, and it is okay to make a joke out of the blue. It's really useful to read more book reviews and understand readers' opinions on novels. It's like doing business if you don't understand the market demand. I have already published two new books in a row, so I need to work hard on this one.

There are too many clichés about human nature. This is an old cat disease. It's interesting to watch once or twice occasionally, but every now and then a big chapter is opened to talk about the mentality. I know it's to reflect the protagonist's change of mind, but it's really boring in real life. The main character's change of mentality in Gu Long Jin Yong consists of a few storylines, click on a few sentences, and leave the rest blank for people to figure out. Reading a book is not about chewing the author into pieces. Reading a book makes it enjoyable and lasts a long time if there is a plot that can be understood. However, the author's plot writing has always been first-class. It's not that I'm blaming for perfection, but it's a pity to see some flaws.

I don't know if anyone has paid attention to script sales. Someone at B station broke the news that script sales stores nationwide more than doubled last year. At the same time, due to the impact of the epidemic, many screenwriters and online writers have entered the field. Now script sales have a complete industry chain from the upstream of creators, to the middle reaches of distribution channels, to the downstream of stores, and to users. It has become a source of increased income for many creators. Good books can sell for tens of thousands, and many investors have begun to pay attention to this industry.

Good guy, Lao Wu, your golden chapter 3 is written like shit. If you don't know how to write a spoof, don't write it. The conversation with the cat was so embarrassing. To be honest, if you hadn't written the book, I would have just thrown it away after reading one chapter. How can you attract new people to read it? Do you want to kill it again? Please change it quickly 😅

I like the author's books very much, and I support them as long as they are written by the author! ! !

I just hope the author doesn't make the protagonist too ups and downs.

To be honest, I don't know why the author's writing is very strange. He wants to be happy but he is not happy. If you want to torture him, he is not cruel enough, it just feels like he is half-baked, and then there is a lot of psychological analysis. Are we here to see the mentality change of an ordinary person? We see stories, not people

This author is still like that. There are a lot of great principles, reflections, and insights written by himself in the book, but the protagonist still behaves as he should. It's like taking the first bite of Xiang, realizing that Xiang is smelly, regretting it, and then continuing to eat happily.

Congratulations on signing the contract 😎

I've also read this guy's book, which is Infinite Wandering, the Harry Potter book. I feel like this guy always seems to want to teach and educate people, as if he can't do it without writing about human nature. I am very surprised that the policies of a moderately prosperous society cannot satisfy you, or that the glory of communism of the working and peasant class cannot shine on you. I just hope it will be fun to write a novel, so why do I need to discuss human nature with you?

Lao Wu, I have been reading your book for a long time. The biggest improvement is that I am more diligent and persistent than before in the past two years 👍 The problem is that the novel has become a commentary! The plot drags and is boring! 😅 When you have time during the Chinese New Year, you might as well look at old works from the past and compare them. I guess this is a bad habit and routine accumulated in recent works. You work so hard on coding, right, so that readers can appreciate it and get appropriate rewards? Everyone reads books to be relaxed, happy and refreshed, so why bother doing so in a thankless way?

If you don't have time, you might as well look back at the previous work, Different Blood Edge, as the story rhythm and character descriptions are both excellent. The recent works are a little too obsessive, too wordy and have too many truths, and the scenes change too quickly. After writing more than a thousand chapters, I might as well end Infinite. The long and smelly foot wrap is totally useless. I might as well concentrate on writing this one.

Don't push the protagonist too hard, leave a few chapters to relax between various events, and don't leave one plot unfinished and the next coming again, which makes the storyline very depressing.

Come on, Lao Wu, Lao Wu's imagination is definitely outstanding, and the world structure is no problem. The key is the rhythm, and do less psychological analysis. Really, you need to find a cool spot to earn readers' money. Those who are new to it will win the world. Good luck.

It looks good, but it's too cumbersome, too complicated, and even more boring.

How should I put it? I would like to give you some suggestions. You can try writing from different angles. For example, this Netherland pursuit, in addition to Hu Sheng's first appearance, can also be written from the perspective of the monster leader. If you put it in a little bit, you will know how depressed he is. No matter what moves the opponent throws, he can catch them, and he even plays better than me. I have the idea of ​​​​surrendering directly and starting the next round. However, the latest chapter showed Tantai Qingchen a good show, making me feel that this world of cultivation is not just a stand-alone game for Zhou Xing. I really suspect that if Zhou Xing continues to open countless accounts, everything in the world of cultivation will be caused by him, or at least it will be related to him, and then it will become a one-line story, not a complete world, and it will be very distorted. At present, there is already a problem of too many trumpets and no chance to play. It's not that there's nothing to write about, but there's not much opportunity to write about it. A five-element reversal has taken in five clones, but there are also Buddhist stick bodies, mirage bodies, Xuantian Sect (fake) in the extraterritorial secret realm, and Hu Sheng who has just appeared. The Supreme Wizard's main plot collapsed because of the clones' missing bodies running around. This book has not learned its lesson... It's very head-scratching. I really believe that Lao Wu can definitely excel if he only writes about one identity. Take the early stage of switching between two clones as an example. What a good idea. Without opening other accounts, these two can be used in this book. Usually I am a master of illusion in the Zhou family of Yunxiao Sect. Others think that I specialize in Yuan Shen. If they kill me at close range, I will suddenly switch to a Buddha stick body to fight hand to hand with you. Although it's not unexpected, it works, and readers like it.

I've read Chapter 20 and I don't know what it's about. Can I stop narrating it all the time?

Did the author with this name write an infinite flow called "Edge" before?

There is no difference between this longevity golden finger and other golden fingers, so we changed the name.

The Silent Hill chapter in the author's old book "The Edge" is really awesome. It's still unforgettable in my mind after more than ten years👍

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Stopped again without further notice. I'm done with it.

I just started reading it and after reading a few chapters, I wanted to know where the protagonist got his two bodies?

The first picture is Luo Li. What kind of big bird or cat? I don't want to see it for a moment.

What happened to Lao Wu? Does anyone know the specific situation?

It seems like this is playing an amazing immortal cultivation simulator.

I caught up with the last book, The Infinite Supreme Wizard, good luck to the author

I hope it will be longer 😃

I can't stand it anymore. I haven't finished the first three chapters. I can't accept this style of writing.

From Infinite Supreme Sorcerer, not bad.