I Can Reduce the Truth

It's too God's perspective, and a lot of the content is too brief. Obviously a lot of content can be expanded and written in more detail, including the characters' emotions, expressions, words, and changes in the characters' perspectives. I just use the narration from God's perspective to explain it all in one stroke. There are too many elements like this, and it feels like treating the outline as a novel.

There is a sense of paradox.

The setting of the golden finger in this book is very good, but it is always mentioned that the golden finger was made by others. It is really boring to read. Couldn't it be the protagonist's superpower? Born with unique powers, no backdoors, no behind-the-scenes producers, isn't Goldfinger just what the author set up to make readers feel better? What purpose does having a behind-the-scenes producer for Goldfinger serve, other than to cause confusion for readers? I really don't understand the readership of your position as the author. You are reading it for readers who like Goldfinger novels. What is your idea of ​​​​causing trouble for readers? Those who don't like Goldfinger will not come in to read it, but those who like Goldfinger have to add trouble to it. Are you targeting readers who like Goldfinger and also like the "black box" behind Goldfinger?

The author comes and reads to me

The title is "Reducing Cultivation Reality", but it is actually the visualization of the Cx game in the Cx fairy world, that is, in the Cx fairy world, a player can use Cx game abilities, such as Don't Starve, Bloodborne, and other abilities, including 2.5D vision, pain removal, and some manufacturing Then the protagonist is clearly arranged and finally becomes a Cx Those who want to see pure Cultivation or Game Cultivation can go Also If you like to combine work and rest, you can go If you like the gram series, if you like the protagonist to keep beating and beating, and keep having sex without rest, and if you like to abuse the main character, you can watch it

I've read a few chapters, and to be honest, it's pretty good. But I'll give you a pre-review first, so I'm welcome to finish the book. The disgraceful performance of this book has become the biggest topic among fans recently. Let's take a look at ***'s comments on this. ***, Who has always been straight-tempered, said bluntly: "I'm afraid I'll lose my face if I'm so messed up. You said it's a special situation. You've read new books one after another. Have you changed it? Changing the soup does not change the medicine!~ Book friends also have reasons to say, what kind of book am I reading? What is your current level? With just a hundred thousand words, how many maps has Zhou Ning been chased by the villains one after another? Well, now you are running away, and if you continue to run, your wife will be killed. **"On the other hand, this is the rhythm of starting a new book~" ***: "Oh~ Congratulations, I've already said that you can't control the rhythm like this. Can you promise me that the next book or the next one will be written well?" Be pragmatic! Let's first understand the rhythm of the story and the concept of Shuangwen. ***'S writing is pretty good. Why did you change the map? Tell me why you ruined the book? The previous book was fully ordered, the previous one was fully ordered, this one was fully ordered, how can you explain it to me? *No more!

This book is completely written from the author's own perspective. After reading a dozen or so pictures, I was confused and confused about what gods and things were mentioned. There was no foreshadowing at all and I just started talking. I thought I had missed dozens of pictures? What I write is okay, but I don't know what I'm writing.

Lao Wu, don't write this kind of middle-aged trash protagonist in the future. I'm not talking about you. If I just go to the street and pick up a high school student and let him be the protagonist, it's much better than this Zhou Ning.

Only in the latest chapter did I realize that something was wrong. The author seemed to have intentionally created a reversal, but it was a bit too blunt. The last few chapters have been very blunt overturning of the previous chapter. Do you think it was a group copy? In fact, you were tricked by your teammates. Do you think you were tricked by your teammates? Is the actual benefit I get greater? This kind of very abrupt twist makes the reading experience neither good nor bad. I suggest that the author should not engage in such unpredictable tricks, because if you read the book in one sitting, it feels good, but if you continue to read it, it feels very bad.

Talking to himself, he likes to preach, he always emphasizes that it is a game, and he also emphasizes the mentality of a commoner, Yunliwuli's system Yunliwuli's numerical preparation for job transfer, etc. It's all for my own enjoyment. This article feels like Tang Monk reciting sutras. I can't understand it and it's annoying to listen to.

Curb your commentary habit! It has been a little bit since the beginning of Alien Blood and it is getting more and more serious now. The progress of the main plot is one or two sentences, and the meaningless commentary and lyrical life insights are several times as much as the main plot. If this continues, this book may simply be renamed "Boundless Life Insights Essays"

A book must have a story to be attractive... Lao Wu has first-rate setting and first-class imagination, but he can't tell a story. The last few books have a protagonist with one personality, and the character growth is a straight line, coupled with crazy settings. The problem is so obvious, I don't believe the author himself can't sense it 😅 When I watched The Master of Arts and the Master of the Abyss, I really felt that it was a stunning and brilliant moment

Reading this book is like reading the synopsis. There are few dialogues and the plot development is confusing. It is a bit baffling. The golden finger is too complicated and the specific function is unclear. It is completely thought of as it comes out. The author may understand it, but the reader may be confused. Just over twenty chapters in, I went to take on an epic mission and had no idea what I needed to do, and it wasn't explained clearly. The twist was very abrupt, but I still had some imagination. If the plot content were slightly enriched, it would be worth watching.

There is no plot, just settings and soliloquy.

The creativity is really good, but the writing is a bit verbose, with little plot and a lot of nonsense... I feel sorry for the author's hard work even though I skipped reading, Lan Shou...

The writing is truthful and hip I have been talking about settings and writing game science, and I have to explain every joke,,, I don't know if the author is tired of writing, but the readers are quite tired.

Whether it is the end of the world or a disaster, if there is no love and sacrifice, no responsibility and dedication, such a world is not worth saving. All apocalyptic articles, and even all fast food articles, if they want to impress people, must show the sparkle and greatness of human nature on the stage preset by the author. Greed, cowardice and despicability can exist, and can even be the mainstream, but if there is no shining point, no kindness and love, then destroy it quickly, it is meaningless and meaningless.

There are too many explanations, there are too many jumps in the plot copy, the plot is fragmented and the reading experience is poor, the progress of the main plot is confusing, and the old problem from the beginning of the alien blood has not been cured yet.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt so uncomfortable. The power system was not mentioned at all. It just briefly mentioned some types of strange Taoism and so on. It was just a brief introduction. Even the golden finger of the protagonist was only briefly mentioned. I can even guess at some of the games I have played, but I really don't understand the ones I have never played. It feels like a detailed outline, which makes me confused 🤔

To be honest, your writing style does not necessarily require unlimited flow, but it must write a high-intensity rhythm of "quick travel, fast fighting" If we talk about light novel style, using the character's psychological activities, or even directly writing the character's "inner words" to promote the article, this is a very lazy, but it not only reduces the quality of the article, but also reduces the reading experience of the reader. This double-loss word count technique. The author's writing mode with a large number of narrations and even direct "author's words" can be called self-destructive writing (although sadly, this is the mainstream way of writing online articles today) No matter how well the outline is organized, the final effect of this writing mode is nothing more than the difference between wiped paper and unwiped toilet paper. If you are a new author, just write casually. The author of this book has been writing like this for so many years. It is really thankless for someone with enough writing skills to write like this It is better to give it a try. If you can write the inner words of the character, try not to write the author's narration. If you can rely on external descriptions to let readers figure it out, don't write about the characters' psychological activities. Finally, of the author's novels, I have only read "The Edge", and I have only read a little bit of the beginning of the others. From a personal sense, "Edge" gives me the best feeling. A large part of the reason is the intense rhythm of fast travel and fast fighting. Paired with a very compressed vertical timeline. The concentrated explosion points and the tension created can largely cover up the problems mentioned above.

Dialogue and narration account for more than two-thirds of the entire text.

I clicked in without reading the author. After reading it, I felt that it was very similar to Wu Jie, but more verbose. When I went back to the book page, I realized it was really

There are too many game terms, which is not friendly to book lovers who are not that enthusiastic about games.

It's complicated, messy, hard to understand, and talks about a lot of settings. The word count is deliberately watery, and the entire panel is 3D.

When humans think, God laughs. Isn't it better not to think about it? Wouldn't it be better to kill directly and decisively? Furthermore, if you frequently change maps and start over from the beginning, it's almost time to enter the palace.

In what age are people still writing about waste streams?

It is recommended that the introduction to the starting point be counted as a chapter, and the money will be calculated based on the number of words.

The author probably writes novels as a hobby.

He has average intelligence, rubbish will, has no clue, and is extremely pretentious. Is this kind of protagonist worth writing about?

The table was finally turned off, and he returned to his normal style. A world without demons will open a technological route