The Immortal Path Through the Clouds

If the author likes to write like this, he might as well change the book to "Success and Proof of Morality"; that would be more suitable.

Sigh! I can write anything without passion or excitement, but my skill level is probably not good enough to make money. Only a few thousand people read one book. I wonder if I can even make 10,000 yuan. I might as well just stick to manual labor.

The beginning of the book was alright, although it was a bit too idealistic. But then I read about the "Child of Heaven and Earth," and it almost poisoned my brain! 🥵🥵🥵

The author is younger than me, a real saint. I'd guess elementary school students could read this. The robber-killing trope is illogical; robbers are too easy to kill—can third-rate kung fu really kill them?

So far in this book, the most common complaint from readers is about Xiao Ling, the overpowered protagonist. 😆 The reason for making such an invincible villain is because the protagonist faces two insurmountable obstacles on his path to immortality: the Golden Core and the Primordial Spirit. 😠

The beginning was alright, but why did it turn into so much trouble and endless feuds and conflicts later on? Couldn't there be more good people, more cooperation, and more win-win situations? Perhaps I'm being clear—are all cultivators wicked and malevolent? Perhaps some are, but they are ultimately a minority. I hope the author can focus more on positive characters and exploring the world of cultivation, and less on the wickedness of human nature.

After reading the first chapter, I felt the writing style and knowledge accumulation were excellent. Why are so many people criticizing it in the book review section?

The first poison point can be completely overcome, but what can be done?

Whether the author believes it or not, I must tell you the truth: the best parts of this book are the first paragraph, "The Path to Immortality," and the middle paragraph, "Preparing for the Difficulty of Forming the Core and Enduring the Rest of My Life." You can tell that these two parts were written with genuine emotion, but I felt less for the others, especially the one about Long Aotian, which didn't make any sense.

Luo Yin: Author, come out here and let's have a chat. Before the show, you promised me the male lead, the cool and domineering one, and the stunningly beautiful woman as my wife. What happened? I almost died of old age while trying to form my core, an enemy appeared and I almost got trampled to death, and I only met my wife three or five times in five or six hundred chapters, and now she's gone.