The Immortal Path Through the Clouds

If the author likes to write like this, it would be more suitable to change the book to success, virtue and enlightenment.

Well! I can write it even if it's not passionate or stimulating. I can't make any money at all. Only a few thousand people can read a book. I wonder if I can transfer 10,000 yuan. It's better to just do it honestly.

The book was okay at first, although it was a little bit like the Virgin. Then when I saw the Son of Heaven and Earth, it almost poisoned me to death 🥵🥵🥵

The author is younger than me. Holy Mother, I guess elementary school students can still read it. The setting for killing the robbers is unreasonable. The robbers are too easy to kill and can be killed with third-rate kung fu? ?

Since this book was written, the one most complained about by readers is Xiao Ling, the dragon Aotian 😆 The reason why such an invincible Xiaoqiang is arranged to be the villain is because the protagonist has two difficult obstacles on his way to attain immortality: the golden elixir and the soul. 😠 Therefore, the significance of the existence of this dragon Aotian is to use his invincible luck to help the protagonist overcome the difficulties of the golden elixir and the soul, so that he can soar into the sky, prove immortality, and become a true immortal. 😁 When Long Aotian helps the protagonist break through the door of immortality and become a true immortal, it is the day when Long Aotian's historical mission is completed and completely wiped out. 🤭 Therefore, the so-called Long Aotian is just a poor man who is a pioneer for the king and opens the way for Allah! 😃 Moreover, the follow-up plot has been decided, and there are many manuscripts saved. Even if I want to modify it, there is nothing I can do. The amount of work is too huge, and I really can't do it. If you really don't like Long Aotian's scenes, you can skip it directly 🤤

It's not bad at the front, but why is it always looking for trouble in the back? There are too many grudges and fights, so there can't be a few more good people, and there can't be more cooperation and win-win situations. Maybe I made it clear. Are all those who cultivate immortality evil-doing people with evil thoughts? Maybe there will be, but ultimately it will be a minority. I hope the author can write more about positive characters and explore the world of cultivating immortals, and less about the sinister human nature.

After reading the first chapter, I feel that the writing and knowledge accumulation are very good. Why are there so many people criticizing it in the book review section?

The first poisonous point can be completely overcome.

Regardless of whether the author believes it or not, I must tell you the truth. The best thing written in this book is the first paragraph "Looking for the Immortal Road" and the middle paragraph "It is difficult to prepare the elixir but you will lose your life". You can feel that these two paragraphs are full of emotion, while the others are relatively indifferent, especially Long Aotian's illogical logic.

Luo Yin: Author, please come out and let's talk. Before the performance, we agreed on the leading actor, agreed on a tyrannical and cool character, and agreed on a peerless beauty as his wife. What about now? I almost died of old age when I got a pill, and I was almost trampled to death when an enemy came out. There is a wife who wrote five or six hundred chapters and met three or five times, and now she lost it. As a result, she got the cheat and she was beaten to pieces before she even started showing off! I'm not going to act anymore! ! You are cheating me! Chapter 609: The Right One Luo Yin was slapped to death, and the people in Linghai got the book of life and death. From then on, they made great progress and rose to the immortal road! Complete book~