Pirate's Smoke General

If the copying dog can't copy it, then it's a eunuch? This operation is possible. . Being chased by others and asking others to give out the palette, and being given out of the palette, and then claiming that you are learning from it? It also has a face in the Chinese translation

Welcome to Shuke to watch the original version of "I, Sakaski, will never lead a dog easily"

After plagiarizing, I went to lk to criticize the original author, saying that the threshold for online writing is low and anyone can enter. Enthusiastic people who posted the palette did not acknowledge the Chinese translation, and claimed that the Chinese translation was not considered plagiarism. When lk was criticized to the point of doubting his life, he asked the editor whether the Chinese translation was considered plagiarism. The editor admitted it and then changed his story and said that he didn't know that the Chinese translation was considered plagiarism... It's ridiculous. It doesn't matter if you say the same thing as him in one sentence, and it's okay if you say the same thing in two sentences. But you have the same meaning in three chapters. If you change the wording, this is too much. I'm a coward. I open a trumpet to criticize the author. I'm afraid of being criticized. Please forgive me.

Offering incense and sweeping graves? Wrong, I came to dig graves and light them on fire

Eh! Damn it, if your updates continue like this, not many people will read them! 😆

Author, do you think many people will read your book? No, you're wrong. If you don't believe me, I'll change my number and send "Hey hey hey"

Plagiarism dog spitting hehe tui

Come and step on it, sweep the tomb and offer incense.

As expected, I was advised to withdraw the article. It would be good if I could persist for five chapters.

I heard that I have a very big brain, so come and join in the fun.

It's very imaginative, and it suits my taste.

It's really well written, very touching! After reading 168 chapters in one go, this book is destined to be a hit! (I hope the author will finish it without TJ, otherwise it would be a pity!) 👍👍👍👍 Follow up! Follow up!

Hey, I'll give you full marks for Tianpang's sudden ideas, okay?😃😃

It's good to read. I haven't seen any other pirates since I watched One Piece last time. This one suits my taste. I also hope that the Hunter Organization will not do anything to do with the Revolutionary Army. After all, in this world with so many superpowers, the World Government is already very efficient and just. If there are no Celestial Dragons, I really don't believe that the Revolutionary Army can do one-tenth of what it does after taking power.

When I read Chapter 20, I didn't want to read it anymore. You made the navy so silly. As far as the protagonist can tell, who is not the natural type but the superhuman type? Do you think Zefa and the others are blind? Huan Zefa mentioned earlier that a natural-type person would end up pretending to be a slap in the face for the protagonist. It's okay if you don't know about the supporting character. There's no way the navy doesn't know whether the gummy candy's actual ability user is of the nature type.

Author, if you want to be versatile, you might as well write a copy of the Fruit Gameno. Although it is a Saku type, it is okay to use some Rasengan or create some weapons and original moves, but there is really no need for things like the Thread Fruit. It can only kill minions. The damage skills are the same and faster. It would be better if the moves match the character's personality and image.

I hope the author can write it in more detail. Well, I feel that the picture quality is not very good, and the combat, characters, and the bond between partners are not described very much. It feels like a one-stroke reading. It is not very good to read.

I think the most important thing when reading fan fiction is the sense of immersion. The author's novel feels that the sense of immersion is a little bit worse. I hope it can be improved 😁😁

Writing Melia to death or being captured would lower the quality of the book. He should have a story. For example, after the defeat this time, he exchanged benefits with the protagonist and was let go. For example, Kaido's secret, the common enemy of the two, Kaido. For example, after being defeated and escaping, you return to your previous aggressiveness.

In fact, I feel that the protagonist's abilities are too complex, and there is no need to copy moves from different works. These off-brand moves have little effect except for pretense, and are not used at all. You see, Kizaru, whether it is a torture or a real fight, the back and forth is the Tencongyun Sword, the Eight-foot Qiong Magatama, and the Yata Mirror. So I suggest that the author choose a few directions to create moves and continue to improve them. Well, there are also weapons. I personally don't think it's necessary to have a lot of them. For example, for melee combat, there is one for ranged weapons, one for singles, and one for group combat. I think it's most comfortable to have a long-range, single-group, and all-round weapon. Well, that's it. By the way, last but not least, cheers for the author. I have been reading it since the beginning. I feel that the author is really writing with great care. I hope the author will write better and better (✪▽✪)! ! !

I feel that it is reasonable for the protagonist to be taller than the original work. The influence of height is in various aspects. After all, the protagonist must work harder than the original work, otherwise there is no reason to be a general. Of course, the author feels that it is too tall and does not want to write it. I didn't say that.