Gross

The early stages of the work were amazing, but I felt like I couldn't control the middle and later stages. I wonder if the author has a clear main outline. After all, in the early days, we still admired Gross's various journeys and travels. But in the later stage, so it is a game article, most of the Amber Sword was also referenced. Then you still want to say, please don't give the male protagonist such an invincible trick. The dotted and solid lines are a bit thin, I hope to add more plots and the like.

La la la, I have water experience. 😉😉 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Don't slap me in the face! 😭😭

The book is a good book, and the characters are well developed, but it feels like there are two lines. Every time I read a story other than the protagonist, it always feels like a drama. Although it is for foreshadowing or something, it always feels like a drama...

The writing is like beating notes, sometimes sweet and sometimes solemn. The stories of heroes are timeless and are worth learning from but not emulating.

My mom, I updated one chapter in two years and have forgotten what this book is about.

It's really nice, but the title is too inconspicuous.

Fake corpse. . Came to see it just an hour ago

It's a good book, but updates are too slow. .

How can I put it, adventures and fighting are okay, but intellectual battles and some of the protagonist's emotional actions are awkward. These inspired behaviors are occasionally okay but too frequent, which destroys the character. The character and behavior of the characters in the novel should be consistent. There is an obvious internal logic to the growth and change of the characters, which is very important for a virtual character. Importantly, it is this sense of logic that readers use to recognize characters. Always acting casually is the behavior of real people. Speaking seemingly philosophical words when encountering an incident or expressing some emotional catharsis that is different from the logic of past actions may be very compelling in reality. If used on virtual characters, the character created will have a great sense of tearing! Even if it is for the growth of the character, it should be well prepared before and after. The businessman incident is a problem and the access point itself is very blunt. The protagonist's actions and concept expression are too conflicting, and the ending is not good. The growth and changes of the character's personality are not reflected at all! Secondly, some unnecessary background descriptions are repeated too frequently. There is no need to emphasize too much on the struggle between the background forces. In more than 100 chapters, the protagonist's actions and even his ideas have little to do with the background story. In this case, too many background descriptions will appear very long-winded and affect the rhythm!

In other words, I don't quite understand the strength level in this book (the adjective is not intuitive enough...). Inauguration - Silver, Awakening - Gold, Hero - Elemental Civilization? ?

The various tragic experiences that Griffith, the leader of the Eagle Regiment, experienced as a human were a nightmare at the time.

She turned into a virgin and was persuaded to quit playing.

Am I the only one complaining about the heroine having her own airport at such a young age?

You are too slow, it took several days to squeeze out a little toothpaste 🤐

It looks good, it feels good, it feels like I stayed up all night watching The Amber Sword. I like the delicate writing and the huge background of change. The author must not be a lousy writer.

This book is a slow-burning book, very slow... You won't be able to taste it until it reaches a certain amount. But after reading it carefully, I felt it was really great, so Why did I finish reading the update so quickly (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

To be honest, the author should change the title of the book. I didn't want to click on it at first, otherwise I would run out of books to read. I have been a bookworm for 10 years. Moreover, the fusion of the protagonist's soul is too slow. It's almost time for it to be released, and I feel like I'm getting into the main plot. Many people may not be able to stick to this point, but the writing is very good. Come on.

Read it in one sitting. Although there are many familiar Amber settings, the writing and plot are generally above the standard. I still hope that the author can finish it slowly.

I thought the author had sent it again, but it turned out that he had updated another chapter, and I had forgotten what the novel was about. . . The author should update it soon

I'm surprised, this book actually has an additional chapter 😃

It's been almost a year. The author can give me an accurate answer. Is it g?

The author said that he will consider publishing a new book in July

Next, Mr. Earl took the blame and then really rebelled? An alien version of being on the verge of death? 🤭

Speaking of which, I found the authors of dnd western fantasy like Li from Zhuishu. The author's writing is very good, let's trade it🤔🤔, I feel really sad.

Prophecy? There is a premonition that the protagonist will meet the knight with "Mediterranean" hair in the cemetery of the "Red Knight" 🤭

It's time to enlarge the move! I hope there are not too many casualties, otherwise...🤭

Summary of the theme of Chapter 61: The long sword dominates destiny 🤭

You can take away the crystals, gold, etc. In the dungeon. They are background items in the game, but this may not be the case in reality 🤭

The world creation of this book is perfect. The description of the supporting characters is wonderful. Great book!

The first book club supporting role: Red Leaf Girl appears! 🤭