Hanging Heaven

After reading dozens of chapters, the first volume and the main text are really on two levels. I doubt it was written by the same person 😅 The main text of this book is just a common routine, and the writing style is not as good as the first volume.

He has the potential to become a god, but he likes to be a eunuch

"Xuan Tian" is finished like this! I accidentally fell into a trap and kept chasing it. It is a very good general novel about cultivating immortals. The plot has ups and downs, the digging and filling of holes is reasonable, the fighting is exciting and fascinating, and the writing is quite skillful. Unfortunately, the post-processing was a bit hasty, and I guess Lao Si was not very satisfied with the results of this book. I was busy chasing the house pigs Humanity and Emperor Zun some time ago, and I have been keeping them in this book for a while. I have read all the completed books of Ergen and Wangyu. In fact, the great master has also come through step by step. Overall, this novel about cultivating immortals is still refreshing and worth subscribing to. Here are some personal thoughts after watching the game: First, the fights that grasp the big scenes can be described more grandly; second, the supporting characters can be portrayed more charmingly. The book has a heroine so early in the book that I can't let it go in the later stages. In fact, silently flirting with girls may be more effective; third, the pit can be dug bigger, the wider the map, and the more copies there are, the better it will be. Limited level, immature ideas, just ridiculous! I hope to achieve greater success in the new book. I will follow you when the new book is released.

The first few chapters and the following chapters were not written by the same person, they are very different...

The first volume is really good, but the main text is so-so, alas.

There is a question, since herbs are so valuable, why don't monks collect them themselves? The protagonist is not much better than ordinary monks. He can harvest many herbs that are more than a hundred years old in one visit. Why don't other monks collect their own herbs? Do you want to use spiritual weapons in exchange? Not to mention the boundary formations of various sects, the protagonist can come and go freely, but others can't?

At first glance, it seemed really good. Watch it first, read part of it and then comment.

The front feels pretty good, but why is it so old-fashioned at the back? 😭It's not easy to find a novel that suits your needs😭

I wish Xuantian a great sale! Happy holidays to all my brothers and sisters!

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]