Magic Punk

As I said before, my writing skills are not very good. I will find some content in the book to replace the good points of this book. In my opinion, this book is very well written, and in some aspects it can be compared to The Dragon Clan of Jiangnan Pit King (personal opinion, I wrote the book review after thinking about it for several days). 1 I think the name of the book can be changed. (The author said before that magic does not necessarily have to range from junior to advanced magicians. I agree). In many cases, the title of the book is not a classification, and I think it is the characteristic of this book. Many times, most book friends, including me, are clickbait enthusiasts, and most of their knowledge of a book comes from the introduction and title. For example, "My Sister is the Demon King of the Abyss" was originally changed to "Lord of the Abyss" by Futu Rabbit. I was attracted to the book. I originally clicked on this book because of punk and wanted to know more about it. If you find that it is not what you expected, previous book friends will leave bad book reviews because of their different hobbies. 2. Force and world setting. When I just watched it, I was confused. I personally feel that it includes (fighting spirit, fantasy, fairy tales, technology, martial arts and the realm of "Jiang Ye"). Even if there are 37 chapters of realm explanations, without the comparison of many aspects of the world in the book, I still don't understand a lot. Let me talk about the preface of the proposal, and compare the status of force from time to time in the article. At the same time, the story concept in the book is definitely the most interesting that I have read. It has the Western worldview of Squid Girl's "The Lord of Friends" and the extremely depressing life pressure of "Trading Crime" by Mr. Sanzha. The "Eternal Night King" by Yanyu Jiangnan has the absolute differentiation between the top and the bottom caused by power, or the top no longer treats the bottom people as human beings. 3 The characteristics of the characters and the direction of the book, I originally planned to write them separately, but they couldn't be separated. I haven't read the author's previous book, but the author describes the characters really well👍. It feels like watching Mao Ni's "Jiang Ye" Jiangnan "Dragon". Through concise words, all forms of living beings are constructed. Xuan Yi, who keeps the light in the darkness, and Jiu San, who longs for a ray of light. The heroic and ambitious heterosexual brothers of the emperor, Xing Lihua and Qian Li who sacrificed everything for their loved ones, Lan Yan who used his own life to fulfill his promise, the senior disciples who finally jumped out, and the senior executives and the ninth princess who were struggling in their positions. All living beings have various appearances. The story of my colleagues makes this story extremely real and "tragic (╥ω╥`)". If the author publishes a book that is a physical young adult novel, I will buy it. But it's really hard to tell online. I am a real loser. Although I am a fan of Jiangnan, I only watched the Dragon Clan and the complete set of Kyushu Piaomiao Lu two or three times after I bought them. It's too gloomy, I don't have much courage to face 😢, Qidian novel, I think the refreshing and immersive story is the biggest core. Seeing that Xing Lihua is about to die for his own good, I feel like I can't bear it anymore. I agree with the previous article (the author believes that if you want to deceive others, you must first deceive yourself), but the sense of substitution needs to be considered. It would be better to change it to the employer. Similarly, the bloodline of the protagonist is a trap. When I first watched "The King of Night", I can clearly live alone, but I have to go back to a family with no family ties because of my bloodline. I can't stand it. If the protagonist's life experience becomes clear in the future, it's better not to return home. It's so contradictory. Finally, come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I read several of the author's books in one night (I won't read them tomorrow), but I didn't make it to the paid chapters in any of them. It really gave me a stomachache. What can I say? It's not that I can't accept literary youth and abuse, but abuse just for the sake of abuse can only leave a temporary feeling. The tragedy that impressed me most in the online article was the Odin-like hypocritical An Mei in "The Saint". In fact, it has been several years since I forgot the name of the protagonist and a bunch of supporting characters, but I still remember An Mei letting go after recalling it at the end and her last meeting with the protagonist on that road. But! In addition to promoting the development of the plot, An Mei's tragedy also serves to show the background and connotation of the times (although it should be limited to the online novel and a small reunion at the end, the connotation is basically given up). The author's tragedy is too deliberate... The writing is powerful enough to draw readers in and highlight the supporting characters, but there are loopholes in the plot and there is almost no foreshadowing at the turning point (named the prince Xingxi left, unless you have seen the summer palace green stone, it is impossible to infer this departure. According to the previous article, it is at most an escape and a chase, and Xingxi died in the process). Readers do not have high requirements for logic when watching comedies, but this is not the case for tragedies. It can make people feel stomachache for two days, but the memory left behind will not last long. The quality of online articles is considered high, but the writing style is not pleasing to the eye. Similar to the wayward author, all the doomsday symptoms I have seen have become F-rated. Let's not talk about novices. I, who started reading novels in 2008 and am not averse to meat and vegetables except for particularly boring novels, felt resentful after reading some parts. Of course, it may be the reason why I was stabbed at the beginning of 3 books in a row... It's really hard to resist.

The author's writing is very good, but the battle scenes are not distinctive. It's still the same old trial. It's a bit boring after watching too much. And I'm blinded by this level. Come on.

I have now read the beginning of the second volume. Generally speaking, it is one of the top five fantasy and supernatural novels I have read in recent years. Its advantages are that the story is exciting, the plot is coherent, the world view is of a suitable size, the logic is basically clear, and the supporting characters are full of characters. The protagonist's golden finger is not too big compared to similar novels in recent years. The action logic is generally in line with the character design. A small part of the content and details are slightly flawed, but it is a novel after all. It is already a nine-point start when it is written like this. Thumbs up. Currently, the most unreasonable aspect is the death of Lan Liuyan. I feel that her death was deliberately done by the author in order to sublimate the character and help the protagonist grow. It is not very logically logical. Although her knight persona was there, after all, the one who died was a junior whom she had only heard about slightly. It turned out that they didn't have a close relationship with each other, and they didn't have a deeper bond during the trial. And the other one is not dead, even if he is dead, he is just a passerby who met by chance at this stop, and he does not have similar values ​​​​to her brother. In other words, he cannot be called a confidant. Because these two people died due to poor protection, their faith was shattered, their hearts were filled with despair, and they finally asked for death. I think it is not logically reasonable. Moreover, she was loyal to the Ninth Princess of the Blue Night Empire. If she died here, she could not realize her own value, nor could she practice her own knightly code. If the person who was not protected well was a royal bloodline or some close friends who had unrequited friendships, this paragraph would be excusable and would not appear to be abrupt. To sum up, I don't think the author's treatment here is very good, and there is still room for polish and modification. I feel that Lan is a character who was deliberately written to death in order to sublimate and lead the protagonist's growth and pave the way for subsequent development. It is a pity. But overall, Despite Its Flaws, it is still a rare good book📖.

No matter what I say about the rest of this book, the writing in the front is really good, and I always enjoyed reading it. I forgot the title of the book for a while. I asked several AIs based on the plot in my memory but couldn't find it...😐

If I had said that my sister was going to die, I would have just stopped watching it. The male protagonist struggled like a pitiful clown and let down so many people's feelings for his sister. It made me think that the male protagonist would also want to die if my sister died. So I kept saying that I was willing to die for my sister every day, and in the end, it didn't matter if my sister died. I felt like a hammer with cerebral palsy.

Author, do you know what is the most disgusting thing about Naruto Shippuden? Did you realize you were doing something very similar?

As a sister-controller, I was heartbroken when I saw the part where the protagonist's sister was a prostitute. I will never read anything you write again in my life.

Who do you think you are? Do you think you are a squid? Do you think your outline logic is enough to allow the characters in your hands to have a closed-loop plot development? You are just a speculator who knows that tearing apart readers' resonance can cause emotional fluctuations. You don't really think that your level is so high that you can pour water into the text so that readers can't see it, or you have already anesthetized yourself enough to think that it is a necessary description. Talented, but too stupid, really... In the end, the speculators' results were just right.

Tomorrow Never Comes was also written by you... It is no exaggeration to say that I was shocked when I first saw Tomorrow Never Comes. It was so well written, and it turned out to be a romance novel... I want to watch romance and there is a romance channel. I really just want to read science fiction. It's so painful. Such a good subject matter and such a good idea, but it turned out to be a romance novel. What did you think, author?

Anyway, I endured the abuse and finished reading it. I don't know how I, who likes to read cool articles, finished it. I see that many people don't like this character or that character. Every character in the book has his own code of conduct, and that's what they should do. The author's character creation is very successful, and each character is well-characterized. But, this book is really terrible 🙂 Could you please tell me the author's address and I'll send you a few blades?

Imitate the abusive main text of "Dragon" and "Jiang Ye". Moreover, the pace is relatively slow, and I kept holding my breath while reading it. To be honest, I would rather read Invincible Liushuangwen. I will come back to this book when I have more patience.

I can only say that there is a reason why it is not popular If you have a literary youth complex, just write a short story worth 700,000 to 800,000 yuan Stop writing such a long novel, torturing readers and yourself

The connection is obviously too far-fetched. The first volume is so well written, so why bother writing it with all the bells and whistles? Although I also love Roman Holiday. But this plot is really not suitable for your book, and suddenly it feels like the book has dropped too much. Oh, it's a pity

Sorry, I don't deserve it! TM is actually quite sadistic. I only realized it later after reading the first volume. I'll do it! Doesn't he enjoy cool writing? Excuse me, farewell

The free chapter is very well written, and after being put on the shelf, it will be like a lazy woman's foot wrap... When I saw the competition to compete for walking in Star City, my patience was exhausted, so I gave up the book A good hand of cards, playing badly

I have only read more than a hundred chapters. It's a great beginning. I really like it. It's not good to see the male protagonist picking up Ye Ya. I can't understand why the egoistic male protagonist can pick up a troublesome young lady and take care of it for so long. Although the male protagonist has shown some kindness in the past, it doesn't support his behavior of picking up the young lady. It's a bit forced. Also, the writing style is too similar to Jiangnan. The sense of déjà vu makes me feel awkward. The settings of Lu Mingze, Xuanji and Eri Yi are repeated. The plot is different from the Dragon Clan, which is within the scope of my acceptance, and the author also writes very well Finally, there are too many girls. I have only seen an important male character appear, Emperor Yungui, and his appearance is still indistinguishable. The other important characters who promote the plot are all girls. I can't stand it. For female channels, there are too many boys, and I can't stand it either.

I can't describe my envy for Xuan Yi, how lucky he is to get your ultimate favor. I'm glad to have found your creation and you. Let time be the witness to my companionship.

People with normal outlook on life are advised not to watch it, it is poisonous and disgusting.

When the protagonist shows great potential and value, Xingcheng still wants to destroy the protagonist. Although he has been solicited, he still wants the protagonist to kill his sister. This plot feels too irrational and not like a choice a mature organization would make. It's a bit too pretentious, even to the point of being outwitted.

My IQ is not online and what I say is incomprehensible

I want to know the ending of the protagonists in the prequel. I like the protagonists in the prequel and I jumped to read it. It turns out that none of the protagonists in the prequel that I like died well, like Ge Sheng, His Highness Third Prince, Ye Qing, Shi Feng😭😭😭😢[fn= 19]😢, I really thank you, the author. I want to curse, but I don't know how to say it. I am in a very depressed mood now. I sealed "Summer Palace Green Geshi" directly around Chapter 248. Let this book stop at the best moment forever. Goodbye, author. It's rare to see this kind of clear stream in the online literature world, but it turned out to be a mudslide for me. Goodbye, author 🙏

If I had read your book ten years ago, I could have competed with the old gangsters from Jiangnan. Now it is a bit out of date.

Just by looking at the name and the first chapter, you can tell that the author's writing is not good, there are too many details and no pattern.

The author's writing is good, but I don't really like this kind of novel where the protagonist is passive from beginning to end.

The writing is good, but the plot is depressing. Some important characters die too cheaply, and they don't even advance the plot.

P talks too much, is too eloquent, and is poisonous to death in one chapter

It made me feel uncomfortable, and I wanted to continue reading. Finally, after thinking about it, I read online novels just to feel happy. If I really want to read this, I might as well read works like "Alive". Novels can be depressing, but you can't keep suppressing them.

Where is the prequel to this book? I can barely remember the name. Someone tell me. 😭

The author's writing is good, the atmosphere is good, and the characters are well created. I really like the author's book (Tomorrow Never Comes). Magic punk also has the above advantages, but it is very sad. I can't stand it. I'm sorry for disturbing you. I'm leaving.